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今日练习：
1、太空科学家探索地球外太空的时候会发觉很特别。
2、在太空的范围，他们几乎不会感觉到有什么限制，因为外太空基本上什么都没有。
3、而且，科学家们的探险在过去的几十年进展得如此之快以至于登陆火星似乎也是可行的。
4、但是，科学家打算探索海洋则是一项艰难任务。
5、水的压力是一个大挑战，因此总的来说我们认为探索太空其实比探索海洋要好。

我的仿写：请批改！！！谢谢！！！o(∩_∩)o...

1.Expanse scientists will be in a unique position when they come to explore the outside space of the earth.
2.within the space range,they will hardly fell any restrictions as there is nothing in the outside space.
3.What is more,the explorer of the expanse scientists has been developing so fast that landing on Mars seems to be quite achievable.
4.But the expanse scientists attemping to explor the sea is always faced with a difficul task.
5.The pressure of the water is a great challenge,in a word,so we think the explorer of the space is easy than the explorer of the sea.

对我仿写的批改：

1.Expanse[Aerospace，航空宇宙，ahu用的这个词用得很贴切，建议使用哦] scientists will be in a unique position when they come to explore the outside space of the earth.
2.within the space range,they will hardly fell[feel] any restrictions as there is nothing in the outside space.
3.What is more,the explorer[exploration探索的名词形式，explorer是探索家的意思] of the expanse[aerospace] scientists has been developing so fast that landing on Mars seems to be quite achievable.
4.But the expanse[aerospace] scientists attemping to explor[explore] the sea is[are] always faced with a difficul task.
5.The pressure of the water is a great challenge,in a word,so we think the explorer[exploration] of the space is easy[easier比较级] than the explorer[exploration] of the sea.

参考Ahu的仿写：

Aerospace scientists will be in a unique position when they come to explore the space around the globe. They will hardly experience any constraints apart from the endless limit of space as it is basically nothing there in space. What is more, the aerospace exploration has been developing so fast in the past decades that landing astronauts on Mars seems to be quite achievable. But the scientists attempting to explore the sea are always faced with a difficult task. As it is not nothing there in sea, the water pressure is a big challenge thus overall we understand exploring space actually much better than exploring sea.