由于一些非本人可控制因素的影响,从即日起本人所主持的listen to this 2 栏目和大学英语六级考试作文;练习帖将不得不在本版停办了.本人感到非常的遗憾,非常感谢大家长期以来的支持.
不过庆幸的是,listen to this 2栏目将继续由james999(该栏目的创始人)接着做.欢迎喜欢和支持这个栏目的朋友继续关注和参加这个栏目.在此我要感谢james999首先创办了这个栏目,并负责了前25期的制作以及录音制作,帮助我完成了20多期栏目。
对于英语六级作文练习帖,我没有想到会遭遇才开了一期就要夭折的厄运。不过我相信,CET版会很快给大家找到新的主持人来为大家主持这个栏目的.我谢谢大家对我第一期栏目的捧场.
六级作文第一期的所有作文我都进行了仔细的阅读,对大家作文中较为明显的错误给予了标示,由于个人水平有限,其中难免有疏漏和错误,还望大家包涵.也希望我的工作能为你带来一些帮助,虽然只有一期,我也会感到很荣幸.关于作文的修改问题大家有问题可以短信息和我联系.
在上一期的作文中,好多朋友的文章存在一个很严重的问题,就是他们的文章整篇以第二、三人称或一人称复数进行论述,几乎未提自己将如何做,这是与题目要求不符的,会造成失分。上一期作文地址:
http://www.hjbbs.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=18&ID=224801 下面是一篇基本合体的范文,大家不妨看一下:
How I Finance My College Education
Nowadays,tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before.How to finance one's college education has become a matter of concern for many.You can deal with it in many ways.You can get all the needed money from your parents.You can apply for a loan especially set up for collede students.You can also raise the meney completely by yourself,by doing a full-time job in summer and winter holidays.Or you can ask your parents to provide the greater part and earn the rest in your spare time by doing a part-time job.
In my opinion,the last way may prove to be quite beneficial.Having obtained most of the tuition and fees from one's parents,one needn't worry too much about the money and can concentrate on his study.On the other hand,a part-time job in one's spare-time will add color to one's social skills and learn many practical things.Therefore,I choose this way to cover my tuition and fees.
此文虽不是最佳,但若能写出这样的文章,分数应当不会低。
[此贴子已经被作者于2005-3-23 20:49:03编辑过]
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