【春风行动——课文仿写】Lesson 40

【春风行动——006号学员】

今日练习(“请批改”)
1、谁也无法准确地预测地震会在何时何地发生。
2、现有的科学技术还没有发展到让科学家们精确地预测地震的程度。
3、很准确地预测何时何地会发生地震的说法在现阶段只是一种使人们慌乱的谣言。
4、地震通常会引起非常可怕的后果:人们失去了他们的生命和财产。
5、最近四川省发生了地震,中国政府立刻组织了上千人的部队和大量的捐款去援救灾民。

我的仿写:(请批改!
1、It has never been predicted accurately when and where the earthquake will occur.
2、Now existing technology has not been developed to the extent that scientists are able to predict the earthquake precisely.
3、Forecasting exactly where and when an earthquake will happen is a rumor which makes the public rattling at present.
4、Earthquake regularly leads to terrible consequences : people lost their lives and properties.
5、When the earthquake recently happened in Sichuan province, China government immediately established thousands of army and sent a great amount of donate money to rescue victems.

借鉴ahu的仿写:
It has never been predicted exactly when and where the earthquake will happen. Modern technology has not been developed to a certain level for scientists to foretell the earthquake accurately. Telling the exact place and time the earthquake will happen is a form of deception at current stage which actually makes people be in chaos. Earthquake often arouses dreadful situations in which people lost their lives and properties. When the earthquake recently happened in Sichuan province, China government immediately organized thousands of army to rescue refugees and sent large amounts of donate fund there.


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