改楼上的筒子^^如有批错还请见谅~
1.In the nineteenth century, the various powers of Western would bring China to a tribulation by a series of power invasion----most of them unblievably brutal.(是否写反了)
2.Chinese people, who were presumed cowardly, were up in arms against the invaders and used their own blood to win a vitcory.(were up in arms against 好强悍的词。喜欢o(∩_∩)o...)
3.To the modern, for China's spring up, these Western countries would find such power invasion totally unworkable.(改成in会更合适)
4.Yet, they use some untrue reports to slander China which anyone but themselves would find incaedible.
5.People of vision would poure scorn on the untrue reports an say nothing about it, moreover, they would find out the trues. (vision更多的含义是具有远见,有志之士经过大家讨论应该就是A man of insight;poure scorn on 用在这有点牵强;an?...;缺少努力的含义)
No825请批改^0^
1、十九世纪,西方列强用一系列的武力侵略给中国带来苦难——大部分是极其残暴的。
In the nineteenth century,western power brought a plenty of sufferings to Chinese people by a series of aggressive military power--- most of them wildly atrocious.
2、被以为是胆小怯懦的中国人民,却奋起反抗那些侵略者,用自己的鲜血赢得了胜利。
Chinese people, who were assumed cravenly, defied the foreign invaders and won the final victory by their own bloods.
3、到了现代,因为中国的崛起,那些西方国家发现武力侵略是再也行不通了。
In the modern,as the China is rising,those western countries find it impossible to invade by military force again.
4、然而,他们就用一些除了他们自己谁也不会相信的不实报道来污蔑中国。
Yet, some unrealistic news reports which no one will believe in ,but them are released to slander China.
5、有识之士不会随便地对西方国家报道的东西进行评论,并且会努力找出真相。
A man of insight will not comment on what those western countries have reported at random, furthermore,they will try hard to find out the truth.
啊啊啊啊,又要到黑色星期5了,在没加入春风行动之前,星期五绝对是光明了......离要写作文的日子还有2天,倒计时。。。
学习notes:
词组用法总结如下:
西方列强 Western powers
武力侵略 military invasion
The people rose up against their leaders.
人民奋起反抗统治者。
The slaves rebelled against their masters.
奴隶们奋起反抗奴隶主。
The whole land rose to resist foreign aggression.
举国奋起抗击外来侵略。
We must cherish experience acquired at the cost of blood.
我们必须珍惜用鲜血换来的经验。
One such trend would be the rise of China. Undoubtedly, China will grow to become one of the world's greatest economies.
一个明显的趋势是中国的崛起,中国毫无疑问的将成为世界大经济体之一。
有识之士 The men of insight
极其残暴 wildly barbarous
奋起反抗 rebelled against
佳句:some mendacious reports which anyone but theirselves would not believe to libel China
努力 their attempts to
Ahu的仿写:
In the nineteenth century, Western powers brought China into tragedy through a series of military invasion---- most of them wildly barbarous.
Chinese people, who were presumed coward, actually rebelled against those invaders and won the wars with their blood.
In modern society, for China’s growing up, Western countries found such military invasion totally impossible.
Yet, they bring some mendacious reports which anyone but theirselves would not believe to libel China.
The wise people will not casually comment on what western countries reported and will make their attempts to find the truth.
posted on 2008-04-17 00:01
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