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TOPIC:More and more people use the mobile phone or computer to communicate, and no longer write letters to each other. Some people think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear completely. Do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter-writing is?

With the development of modern society, mobile phone or computer are entering ordinary families.They bring much convenience into our life and play more and more important role in daily conmunication.Nowadays,there is an increasing interest in thinking whether mobile phone or computer wiil instead of the skills of letter writing which will soon disappear completely.Therefore,there is a hot debate over it.
Some people are in favor of the idea of giving up using the skills of letter.Now they believe that they no longer write letters to each other.And in modern country,spead is money and everything. It will take many time in sending the letter that repells some efficient person.They also argue that they have learnt to depend on mobile phone and computer for they are powerful that leads to having no intention of using simple and original way to communicate with their friends.
However,other people stand on a diferent ground.They consider that with writing letter,it will bring diferernt meaning to the dear receiver. You can feel sender's mood by writing letter.Many leaders of the countries also prefer to use this method when dealing with international issues. So hand-write letters have their own unique charming which will never be abandoned by people in the world. What's more,they firmly point out that had-write letters can be uesd everywhere.Regardless of whether is rich or poor,people can uesd this cheap manner to get touch into his missing one.This is greatful in our world.
There is some truth in borth arguments.But I think the advantages of the latter side.I thinke the skills of leeter writing will never disappear in human's history.Thinking of an old saying ,more simple more better .Writing the letter is unadorned and always simple,but it can help people have a contact from each other in diferent place and different time.It conveys the message with truth an hunman's emotion for thousands of years.Most of us have developed an unshakable faith in it.^^

豆子大人修改篇：
With the development of modern society, mobile phone or computer are entering ordinary families.They bring much convenience into our life and play more and more important role in daily conmunication.Nowadays,there is an increasing interest in thinking whether mobile phone or computer wiil instead of[replace是动词，instead of 是副词] the skills of letter writing which will soon disappear completely.Therefore,there is a hot debate over it.[请表明自己的观点哦]
Some people are in favor of the idea of giving up using the skills of letter.Now they believe that they no longer write letters to each other.And in modern country,spead is money and everything. It will take many time in sending the letter that repells some efficient person.They also argue that they have learnt to depend on mobile phone and computer[注意单数要冠词或者用复数] for they are [so] powerful that leads to having no intention of using simple and original way to communicate with their friends.
However,other people stand on a diferent ground.They consider that with writing letter,it will bring diferernt meaning to the dear receiver. You can feel sender's mood by writing letter.Many leaders of the countries also prefer to use this method when dealing with international issues. So hand-write letters have their own unique charming which will never be abandoned by people in the world. What's more,they firmly point out that hand-write letters can be uesd everywhere.Regardless of whether is rich or poor,people can uesd this cheap manner to get touch into his missing one.This is greatful in our world.
There is[are] some truth in borth arguments.But I think the advantages of the latter side.I thinke the skills of leeter writing will never disappear in human's history.Thinking of an old saying ,more simple more better .Writing the letter is unadorned and always simple,but it can help people have a contact from each other in diferent place and different time.It conveys the message with truth an hunman's emotion for thousands of years.Most of us have developed an unshakable faith in it.^^

豆子sama的作文：

In the new millennium, rapid developed telecommunication technology makes our lives much easier and faster than ever before, inducing a large scale sweeping trend that the proliferation of mobile phones and computers is increasingly popular. In this case, whether the traditional letter should be replaced by such modern techniques has aroused severe debate，and some even claim that the skills of letter will disappear completely. Speaking for me, I totally disagree with this view.

In this day and age, the traditional means of writing a letter still plays a pivotal role and its advantages cannot be neglected. To begin with, not only writing a letter is to transfer information, but it represents a more sincere feeling as well- that is to say, a traditional letter transfers some feelings of sender, be it happy or sorry, angry or love, rather than merely simple words to the receiver. To illustrate, it is usual that companies would like to send formal invitation letters to guests for conferences and lovers would like to write love letters to each other. In addition, considering about the increasingly severe disparity between cities and countryside, some basic infrastructures such as signal base stations and broadband are unavailable in rural areas and numerous people still cannot afford the cost of a mobile phone and computer, thus letters and post offices are still an indispensable part of the communication network.

Admittedly, modern technology like SMS or MSN or email exert certain effects to increase efficiency, as it cut down the time wasted in transferring the message. However, such fast and convenient operations render people less careful about their words and expressions, resulting in a great many wrongly spelled characters or unsuitable sentences, which will, in turn, make misunderstanding or even degradation of the language. In contrast, when writing a letter, people will pay more attention to their words and carefully think about the contents.

In conclusion, mobile phones or computers can increase efficiency in modern society, but they will never render the traditional writing skills outdated. Letter writing can help us concentrate on the contents, reduce the cost of deploying facilities and above all, directly and effectively show our feelings.

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