今日练习（要求至少200字）：
People can perform everyday task, such as shopping and banking, as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects on both individuals and society?

我的作文：（请批改！这次估计是最后一个交作文的，5.1假玩high了~）

Nowadays ,advances in technology,the interdependence of world economies,and the development of communication systems have made the world a smaller place.Speciously,The development of modern communicative technology promotes the academic exchanges between China and other countries.
People can perform everyday task without meeting other people face to face.There are numerous examples.Here I will cite just a few.With the phenomenal growth in the use of the internet and other electronic networks for interactions between and among individuals and firms,electronic commerce.,is changing how firms can use computer networks for marketing and transacting businiess with their customers.The cost reductions that have been achieved by automation can bu passed on to the consumer.
In our daily life,the technology also bring more convenient and rapidly service to us.For users,the benefits could be endless.When we are happy to receive this fabulous present from moder society.However,do you feel what we lose?Yes.we lose some important things to us.For the one thing,some people lose health in this.Due to long-term facing with computer,they lacks of building up their body.Researchers say sedentary habits often interfere with health.In the end,they will pay the penalty.Furthmore,we neglect the distance of our heart.Someone think through the technology,we can get touch with other people no matter where.But only relying on this cold machine,you will keep others away.
As far as I am concered,I believe we should distinguish between virtual worlds and reality.We take advantage of moder technology ,meanwhile ,we should treasure simple things of humanity in our life.

按道理我学过网络金融英语应该可以来个滔滔不绝才是T.T~却依旧构思难产ing,豆豆先生看这个也眉头紧锁吧

Nowadays ,advances in technology,the interdependence of world economies,and the development of communication systems have made the world a smaller place.Speciously,[specifically]The development of modern communicative technology promotes the academic exchanges between China and other countries.
People can perform everyday task without meeting other people face to face.There are numerous examples.Here I will cite just a few.With the phenomenal growth in the use of the internet[Internet] and other electronic networks for interactions between and among individuals and firms,electronic commerce.,is changing [the way] how firms can use computer networks for marketing and transacting businiess with their customers.The cost reductions that have been achieved by automation can bu[?] passed on to the consumer.
In our daily life,the technology also bring more convenient and rapidly service to us.For users,the benefits could be endless.When we are happy to receive this fabulous present from modern society.However,do you feel what we lose?Yes.we lose some important things to us.For the[不要the] one thing,some people lose health in this.Due to long-term facing with computer,they lacks of building up their body[bodies].Researchers say sedentary habits often interfere with health.In the end,they will pay the penalty.Furthmore,we neglect the distance of our heart.Someone think through the technology,we can get touch with other people no matter where.But only relying on this cold machine,you will keep others away.
As far as I am concered,I believe we should distinguish between virtual worlds and reality.We take advantage of modern technology ,meanwhile ,we should treasure simple things of humanity in our life.

结构太差=.=浓缩总结~

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