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Language points:
1. City born and city bred, I have always regarded the country as something you look at through a train window, or something you occasional visit during the weekend.
1) City born and city bred 是由"名词+过去分词"构成的复合形容词，此作原因状语。
2) regards...as 把...视为. 相当: think of ...as / refer to ...as
2. Most of my friends live in the city, yet they always go into raptures at the mere mention of the country.
1) go into raptures 变得欣喜若狂
2) at the mere mention of 一提到
at the sight of 一看到
at the touch of 一触及到
at the news of 一听到
at the sound of 一听到
E.g.: They went to reptures at the good news.
3. Even he still lives under the illusion that country life is somehow superior to town life.
1) be under the illusion 有这样的错觉，其后that引导一个同位语从句。
E.g.: He is under the illusion that he is always right.
2) be superior to 比...优越，含比较之意，用于两人或两个事物之间的比较。
be superior to 表示"在...方面胜过..."时，通常使用be superior in... to" OR "be superior to...in ..."这结构。
E.g.: He felt superior in maths to John.
4. He is forever talking about the friendly people...
这里的副词 forever 与正在进行时的一同使用，表示作者的不满这样的感情色彩。always, forever, constantly, continually 等副词同进行时态共用，除表示某事常发生外，往往表示说话人对发生的此类事情的不满。
5. Nothing can be compared, he maintains, with the first cockcrow, the twittering of birds at dawn, the sight of the rising sun glinting on the trees and pastures.
compared with 将...同...相比，用于两者间比较
cockcrow n. 鸡叫
twitter v. 鸟）吱吱叫，喊喊喳喳叫
1、购物是一种乐趣。
2、人们一提到购物就欣喜若狂。
3、然而，购物时大量使用的塑料袋，被认为是“白色污染”的主要来源。
4、自2008年6月1日开始实行的“限塑令”已经在改变着人们的习惯，越来越多的人不用免费塑料袋也行，他们宁愿出门购物时带上自己的袋子，这将大大遏制浪费和减少污染。
5、人们的环保意识日益增强，没有什么可与这相比。
Cathy的仿写
Shopping is always a pleasure. People go into raptures at the mere mention of it. However, the plastic bags largely used in shopping are regarded as the main source of "white pollution". The ban on free plastic bags which came into effect on June 1 has been changing people's habit effectively: now an increasing number of people can do without free plastic bags and they prefer to carry their own bags when shopping, which will significantly curb waste and reduce pollution. Nothing can be compared with the rising sense of environmental protection.
人家修改自己的：
1.Shopping is a kind of pleasure.
2.People go into raptures at the mere mention of shopping.
3.However,using many plastic bags is considered to be the major [color=#FF00FF]说不出来是不是不可以，但是认为用source更地道，更常用origin[/color] of white polution.
4.Since June first，2008 stopping using the plastic bags has been changed people's habit这句话的翻译和原文的意思对不上，对原文的理解有歧义,more and more people don't use free plastic bags,they prefer to take their bags when go out shopping which reduced waste and polution.关于这句话的翻译，建议参照豆子的用法。
5.People's environmental awareness is strengthened gradually,there is no nothing 应该是个笔误吧，多了个nocan be compared。
7/11作文仿写
修改后的。。
Rules are used to make everyone comply with (学习一下~~^ ^) the law, no matter children or adults. But to the children, they are growing and learning to accept the discipline. At (In) the modern society, we have laws, rules, disciplines and so on. These can make our society in good order.
There are two main points that discussed about the students should always obey rules or not. One is that they agree the students obey the rules. It is essential for students (to) obey the rules. Rules can make them known (??不知道这句话对不对??make them known和make them know翻译上有什么区别吗??) what is right and what is wrong. But in the other hand (短语用的好~~上下文衔接很好) , some people think it is not good for the students (to) obey the rules always which will make bad influence for their future (这句话从always之后没有明白意思……后面是定语从句吗??). That is agreed by most people that children are freedom for development.
In my conclusion, it is believed that rules should be obey ,but controlling much is not good. As to me, my father is strict with my brother and I.(突然冒出来这句话，感觉和前后文没有太大关系。建议删除。要不就是在继续写点儿关于它的事情。^ ^) Rules are significant (喜欢这个词~~) for our society and our motherland's blossom-students.
汗一个。。发觉英语还是不断地练习啊。。。
posted @ 2008-07-12 15:44
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