People think the public library will be replaced by the computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.
this is the first essay , and the red part was amned by 豆子 in HJ
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There is an increasingly improvement in our daily life, which bring us further convenience than before. Of all these changes, computer, standing in the breach, is one of the most ingenious inventions in the world. With the development of technology, various public[公众一般说the public, 泛指人们还是说people好点] will purchase a amount of computers to enhace their work’s efficiency. Public library is a case in point. Some people think computer will replace the traditional library indeed.
In my viewpoint, it is necessary to construct our public library. To begin with, civilization of a nation will be found from library which represent nation’s precious treasure all through the ages. This is a track of history. Futhermore, the atmosphere of learning will be built by public library where all kinds of friends made. The last but not least, different people have different habits. Those who people like reading on paper rather than on computer. [这句话没说完把，建议 Those people who like reading on paper rather than on computers have enjoyed a great deal of fun in the library ]They always think radialization from computer has harmful effects on our bodies, [Such is human nature that we believe that body is the fundamental to struggle ]such is human nature, body is the fundamental for our struggles. And there are all kinds of informations[不可数名词] which will distract our hearts if a person is weak-self-restraint.
All in all, computer is an outcome in the process of human history, which of course have their[has its] benefits. Mealwhile[meanwhile], we should preserve the form of traditional culture referring to[such as] public library. The most important thing is what balance we should found when between[去掉between] modern and tradition bring out diverge[diversity].