优秀范文

 December 27^th,2003

 Dear Sam,

 I was glad to receive your letter in November and feel more than happy to be of some help in your choice of future majors. Personally I would strongly recommend Computer Science &Application. As you know, ours is a development country with a large size of population and labor market demand should always be given priority .Besides, advances in the IT industry have been deemed a great chance for the rapid growth of the national economy and IT-related industries are considered to offer promising fields for job hunters.

 The majors of Computer Science and Application, which is very popular, sets out some specific conditions for enrolment. First and foremost, you need to gain high marks in the state entrance examination and be particularly proficient in English. And any candidates planning to study in the above mentioned major at this college should also be able to own a computer at his/her own expense.

 If you take up my suggestion, contact the admission office of my college during weekday work hours for further information. The number is 157351. However, there is at least one thing you can get yourself acquainted with-that is some basic knowledge of computer literacy.

 I wish you good luck!

                                                            Sincerely yours,

                                                               Li Ming
                                     名家解析

 重点词汇

 如下词汇和短语供模仿训练时选用

  Feel more than happy (感觉非常愉快)  Computer Science & Application （计算机科学与应用） labor market demand（劳动力市场需求） be given priority（优秀考虑） set out（规定） state entrance examination（国家统一入学考试） at his/her expense（自费） admission office（录取办公室、招生办公室）

固定套话

 Personally(就。。。而言、据。。。所知)是英语写作中用来表达作者观点的导入语，作用相当于as far as I am concerned 等。As you know （如同您所知道的）在表达自己看法之前用来缓和语气的表达，也可以说as you may agree,或者as you see。 Besides （除此之外），陈述附加理由时的表达，相同的说法有moreover, 或者 what’s more等。

精彩句子

 （1）I was glad to receive your letter in November and feel more than happy to be of some help in your choice of future majors. （我很高兴收到你11月份的来信，而且很高兴能为你选择专业意见提供一点有用的意见）

 （2）The majors of Computer Science and Application, which is very popular, sets out some specific conditions for enrolment.（计算机科学与应用这个专业由于非常流行，因此在入学方面规定了一些具体的条件）

 （3）If you take up my suggestion, contact the admission office of my college during weekday work hours for further information.（如果你接受我的建议，就请在上班时间与录取办公室接洽，索取详细信息）

优秀段落

   第一段为优秀段落：这一段文字难度适中，说理力度到位，值得考生从英语表达方面去模仿，尤其是短语feel more than happy, to be of some help, as you know, be given priority, be deemed a s, promising fields, job hunters 等都是学生课堂用语中比较少见的地道表达。