常见错误 ：We have got the military training this summer in july in Changping. 15 days, we live in a barrack. We students went there and got the military training. Every day at 5 o’clock in the morning, we got up and went out to run and walk and sometimes …

have got：时态是用来表明事件发生时间的。时态混用会使表达晦涩难懂。从上下文来看，军训是过去发生的动作，因此这里不应用现在时。

this summer in july：在英语中，表达时间时经常把更精确的时间放在前面，其后跟着一般性的介绍，因此这个短语应为“in july this summer”。在英语中，表示地点时，也是先精确的地点，再大地点。

got：不分场合滥用“to get”是一个常见的错误。人们经常在口语中用“to get”来代替不常用的或他们不熟悉的动词。这里根据上下文，正确的动词是undergo，它指进行某个过程，例如“to undergo surgery”（进行手术）。

参考答案：We had military training in july this summer in Changping. For 15 days we stayed in a barracks and underwent military training. Day in and day out we had to get up at 5 o’clock in the morning, and then we went for a run or a walk.

day in and day out：这个短语用来强调事情发生的频率较高，意为“整日整夜，日日夜夜”。
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常见错误：No, in fact, during the military training, it was very interesting. We also learned many things. Every day we made the bed and cleaned the room by military rules. We running, we marched and fianally, learned some army songs and finally gun bullets. In a word, military training is hard but happy.

running：这句话少了谓语动词。中文中有时可以不加动词，英文中一个完整的句子应是包含主语和谓语的。Running是一个分词，不能做谓语。同样，其他非谓语动词形式也都是不能作谓语的。

gun bullets：“gun”是名词。这里误将它用作了动词。表示“开火，开枪”应是“fire”或“shoot”。实际上，gun bullets是Chinglish。“打靶”就是“shoot guns”。

参考答案：No, in fact, military training is interesting. We learned many things. Everyday we would make our beds and clean our rooms by military standards. We also ran, marched, sang songs, and finally shot guns. Milirary training is difficult yet fun.
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