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作文:
这次讲书信写作.书信作文是四级考试中经常考到的一种形式,其中包括私人信函和公务信函.私人信函是指写给朋友或同学的信函,形式比较随意.公务信函也称事务信函,主要包括邀请函,感谢信,道歉信,祝贺信,介绍信,申请信,建议信,投诉信,咨询信等.

虽然信件的类型很多,但是信件的写作可以总结出一个很简单的结构.
第一段:一般写两句话,第一句是写信的目的,第二句是写自我介绍.
第二段:这一段需要对题目给出的背景内容进行说明,解释.推荐写法是以一个总结句开头,然后分条目写作.如果是涉及几个方面的问题,也要把结构写清楚.
第三段:这一段写两句话.第一句写期待回信,第二句写对写信人表示感谢.

范文:
1,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
  假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼有而有之。

Dear Mr. President,

  I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus.

  Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of may other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.

  By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.

   Best wishes,   

   Li Ming

2,Directions:For this part.you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:
  1.对公司提供职位表示感谢
  2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因
  3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿.

Dear Mr. Smith,
  Thank you very much for giving me so much time for last week's interview. I was very exciting you could provide the position for me as I'm a student who just graduate from college now.

  But I must say sorry for your believing in me. I could not be able to take this job. Because I have passed the examination to graduate school. As I have mentioned to you at the interview that I have attended the graduation exam half a year ago. At that time, I don't know the results. But now I received the acceptance letter from the school. So I couldn't be able to join in your company. I'm sorry for it.

  But here, I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your job and warm welcome. I hope and am sure we will have opportunite to cooperate in the future.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

模板:

第一段:I am writing this letter today to ….My name is … and I am …

第二段按照题目要求写

第三段:I sincerely hope you can take my letter seriously.Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.Thanks a lot for your time and consideration.

常用句型:
建议:
1,In my experience, it seems that ... would make sense in your situation
2,In my opinion, it would be wise for you to take the following actions:
感谢:
1,I truly appreciate your kindness.
2,Thank you from the bottom of my heart for...
道歉:
1,I apologize most sincerely for...
2,I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble...
邀请:
1,We would be honored to have you there with us...
2,I will cover all the expense involved.
抱怨:
1,I very much regret to have to inform you that...
2,We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss
3,I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible
咨询:
1,I would like to request some information about...
2,Should i need to send further materials, please let me know.
求职:
1,In anwser to your advertisement i wish to apply for a post as … in your Office.
2,I hope i may be granted an interview…
自我介绍:
1,I am a staff member from your company/corporation.
2,I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of...and...University.(我是...大学...系的一名大一/大二/大三/大四/本科生/研究生.)
写作目的:
1,I am writing the letter in purpose of doing sth.
2,I am writing to inform you that...
表示感谢:
1,My thanks for you to your generous help are beyond words.
2,Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.(感激之情,溢于言表)
期待回信:
1,I look forward to hearing from you soon.
2,I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience

posted on 2008-06-03 09:00 じ雙ēル雙← 阅读(47) 评论(0)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: 作文

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