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大学生毕业后的去向
An increasing number of college graduates ,exposed to the winds of competition, feel the tremendous strain when they seek employment due to the explosive growth of graduates and the turmoil labor force markets . Facing the formidable challenge ,they have to make a lucrative decision :advancing or balking? Their alternatives mainly can be summed up as the following :
some are bent to further their studies at overseas through scooping the handsome scholarships ,which is envious by a regiment of students. Others put everything behind and pull out all stops to pursue the master degree. Should they want to attend a world-renowned university , they have to pay a price. Given that their deeply needy household, still others directly enter the workforce off the top of their heads. In addition , some ambitious generalists try their utmost to start business from scratch.
I will give my perspective about the split issue. After two years ,I will be in for the identical option .consequently ,from my freshman days, I inaugurated to go all out to notch impressive performance. I will make an all-out effort to work with one of the world top 500 enterprises ,emerging from poverty and entirely cracking the heavy load on my ageing paterfamilias.
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