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芷圆(Michelle):
上海新东方学校”新东方VIP学习中心主任,英语听说特训明星教师、资深商务英语听说培训专家,资深港澳大学、美加英澳英文留学面试专家。自99年起,在十多个城市中,担任教学总监和高级英文口语讲师,至今培训过口语学生近十万人,授课质量名列前茅。曾为可口可乐、明基、捷安特、富士康、南方电视台、广东药检局、中国文船等大型知名企业的商务口语教师,并率领近百名新东方商务培训专家为:中国电力、中国石化、通用电器、联合利华、花旗银行、浦发银行、大众汽车、飞利浦、中欧商学院、长江商学院、浦东博览中心等百余家著名大型公司企业,进行专业的商务听说读写培训,成效优异!
上海新东方VIP学习中心网址:www.nosvip.com
咨询电话:021-65647786 63513701 63513702

My Belief:
Some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright. And when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up DOES rejoice. 有些鸟儿是永远关不住的,因为它身上每一片羽毛都沾满自由的光辉!当它们飞走时,你因关住它们而感到罪过的良知,你会深深地替它们高兴。

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1. 去我空间做题
去我空间做题 你被点名了 (梦儿)
2. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
呵呵,恭喜你啊,非常希望你有空的时候回咱们新东方,给学弟学妹介绍一下经验,也希望你在私人留言栏里给我留言,讲讲你的面试心得,让我更好的总结面试材料:)谢谢哦! (芷圆(Michelle))
3. re: 芷圆(Michelle)博客指南(来客必读)
您好,初次见面,我是一名学生,这里有一些问题想要请教您,希望您抽空回答一下。 我现在正在准备中级口译的考试,想要问一下需要准备什么书籍?怎样复习最有效呢? 在这里我也想与您叫一个朋友, MSN... (乐琛琛)
4. re: 芷圆(Michelle)博客指南(来客必读)
真的很好啊 以后长来 (小张)
5. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
圆圆老师,您好! 7月3号给您回过帖子说我港大没录,但北大英语系录了.但还有后续故事:我被香港大学候补录取了,专业是经济金融.来电话的老师说因为我面试成绩极为优异(都是您的功劳啊),所以才拉我回来的.... (姜波)
6. re: 如何嫁个有钱人?^_^
讲的真是一针见血 (APPLEzjp)
7. re: 如何嫁个有钱人?^_^
讲的真是一针见血! (APPLEzjp)
8. re: 灾区日记(俞敏洪)
特别的感动。 (永和豆浆)
9. re: 男人,请珍惜你身边的傻女人
这是个怨妇说的话,怀着这样的心理做女人真苦。姐妹们不要顺着这样的思路去思考、去生活,那一生会是多么灰暗、委屈…… (永和豆浆)
10. re: 如何嫁个有钱人?^_^
考虑如何让自己魅力长久吧~~~ (kelly0507)
11. re: 爱的言辞-必读
带这一根泪,浪迹天涯。 (kelly0507)
12. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
@Jeremy 不知道是不是专业的需要,单挑发挥不错啊,很有希望哦:) (芷圆(Michelle))
13. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
@JQ 呵呵,你暑期英语学习目标是什么呢?了解你的目标才好给你推荐:) (芷圆(Michelle))
14. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
@Michael11 赌的好,希望是个大赢家:) (芷圆(Michelle))
15. re: 2007年+2008年香港高校面试答疑
@曾经收不到ps的laura 收到你的信了,恭喜你考上了,保持联系,随时告诉我你的好消息哦:) (芷圆(Michelle))
16. re: Ordinary Miracle (Sarah McLachlan)
@C4047 是啊,哈哈,我终于把小新给“卖”出去啦:) @iris-shu 谢谢IRIS,喜欢就好:) (芷圆(Michelle))
17. re: Ordinary Miracle (Sarah McLachlan)
老师果然很有品味,老师有没有关于美文欣赏且带朗读音频的文章的推荐啊 stories把我吸引住了,她的独白也很伤感 (iris-shu)
18. re: 英文自我介绍荟萃
thanks圆圆老师,用的很着哈~ (alyssa)
19. re: 英文版《花田错》
It's awesome... (GUN)
20. re: 英文版《花田错》
... (GUN)

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Sample1:
My name is ________. I am graduate from ________ senior high school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.
  In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.

Sample1:
I am            . I was born in             . I graduate from                senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.

I think language is very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.

Sample3:

My name is              . There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in               senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

I like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. Reading E- books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

I hope to study both English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

Sample4:

My name is             . I am from            . There are                people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He is a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She is also a busy woman. I have a older sister and a younger brother. My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in English. My brother is an elementary school student. He is 8 years old.
Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wish I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that is why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

Sample5:

From a middle class family, I was born in Hsin Ying, Tainan on October 10th, 1965. My father is a civil official at Tainan City Government. My mother is a house wife good at cooking. Although I am the only child of my parents, I am by no mans a spoiled one. On the contrary, I have been expected to be a successful man with advanced education. I study hard at school. Besides texts knowledge, journalism is my favorite; whenever reading, my heart is filled with great joy and interesting.
“Being good is must; successful, however, is plus.” Father adopts the idea of his father. Especially in military service, I realized it more precisely. People said: Military service makes a boy to man, I agree that.
    I realized the importance of English and began to study diligently when I was eighteen. I did not start in my early age, but I hope that I could pass the test of General English Proficiency Test. And this is my best wish at the moment.

Sample6:

After completing my military service, I have been looking for a challenging goal for me to achieve. And I found that the Intermediate of General English Proficiency Test fits my new achievement properly.

I graduated from Taipei Commercial Junior College, majored in business administration. Instead of spending much time in playing, I devoted myself to my studies and paid attention to all meaningful things happened in daily life. By the way, I learned a lot from Mr. Wang, the professor of my business class. He is my good friend till now an often gives some appropriate suggestions toward my problem confusion.

My father is, in the same way, a good consultant to me. As he said: I am in poor education, little for you; to clarify, what he have given is far beyond his words, I do think so. I was born in a country of Ping Tung Country, farming is our career of generations. There are four people in my family, Mother is housewife and my brother is a student of an Agriculture College.

I am optimistic and active, and I am confident that I can pass the test. Thank you for your precious to read my autobiography.

Sample7:

1、Good morning/afternoon/evening, my name is . It is really a great honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself. I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today.

上午好/下午好/晚上好!我的名字叫……。今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。我乐意回答你们所提出来的任何问题。我希望我今天能表现的非常出色。

2、I am ­years old, born in province/Beijing, northeast/southeast/southwest…… of china, and I am currently a freshman(大一新生)/sophomore(大二学生)/junior(大三学生)/senior(大四学生) student at Capital Institute of Physical Education.

我今年……岁,出生在……省/北京,它位于中国的东北/东南/西南……等部。我目前是首都体育学院大一/大二/大三/大四的学生。

3、 My major is sports training of basketball/voellyball/football/badminton/pingbang/tennis/

我主修篮球/排球/足球/羽毛球/乒乓球/网球/田径/游泳/跆拳道等运动训练专业。在我毕业以后,我将会获得学士学位。

4、In the past 1/2/3 years, I spend most of my time on study. I have passed CET3/4/6 and I have acquired basic knowledge of sports training both in theory and in practice.

在过去的1/2/3年中,我把大量的时间用在学习上。我已经通过了大学英语2/3/4/6级。而且,我已经从理论和实践二方面对运动训练专业的基础知识有了一个大致的了解。

5、Besides, I have attended several sports meetings held in Beijing. I am also the volunteers of China Tennis Open, Chinese Badminton Masters…… . Through these I have a deeply understanding of my major—sports training.

除此以外,我还参加了在北京举行的许多运动会。我还是中国网球公开赛,羽毛球大师赛……的志愿者。通过这些,我对运动训练专业有了一个更深刻的了解。

6、I have lots of interest, such as singing, dancing, drawing and so on.

我有很多兴趣爱好,如唱歌、跳舞、画画等。

7、Thank you!

谢谢大家!

Sample8:英语自我介绍演讲稿

General Introduction
I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.
Education background
In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester,In 1999, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test.

At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year, I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.

Research experience and academic activity
When a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab, I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.
In retrospect, I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and experience, which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research interests include: Network Scheduling Problem, Heuristic Algorithm research (especially in GA and Neural network), Supply chain network research, Hybrid system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.

Sample 9: MBA口语复试自我介绍

一、第一句话(first word)见到考官的第一句话,很关键,不用说的很复杂。可以是一个简单句,但一定要铿锵有力。展示出自信和实力。千万不要来一句“sorry, my English is poor”.常见的开头有:1. Good morning! may I introduce myself ..2. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. I’m peter white, my NO is …(北大清华等学校参加面试的考生很多,可能对考生有一个编号,说一下自己的编号显得很职业,也很正式。)

二、作自我介绍——成长经历(making a self-introduction ——developing history)有很多学校要求做一个自我介绍,这一问题并非在请你大谈你的个人历史。考官是要在你的介绍中寻找有关你性格、资历、志向和生活动力的线索。来判断你是否适合读MBA。你可以先介绍一下成长的经历,出生地和毕业学校等内容。在这一部分要介绍的有些特色,让老师在听几十个人流水帐式的介绍中增加一点乐趣,就权且当作MBA人际关系管理的第一个挑战吧!I come from ******,the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in July ,1997. (很简单的一句话,一定要发音准确!要把毕业学校的英文准确名字搞清楚了。) 你可以借光一下家乡的名人,可以用这句高水平的话,展示高超你高超的口语。You know, there is a saying that “The greatness of a man lends a glory to a place”. I think the city really deserves it.另外在介绍性格和爱好的时候,适合把家庭介绍结合在一起,可以说父母给了你哪些方面良好的影响。不要流水帐似的介绍家庭成员。可以这么说:Just like my father, I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history. Frequently I exchange ideas with my family during super. In addition , during my college years, I was once the chairman of the Student Union. These work have urged me develop active and responsible characters.

在这里给出描述个人品质常用词汇的中英文对照,可以参考。able 有才干的,能干的 adaptable 适应性强的 active 主动的,活跃的aggressive 有进取心的 ambitious 有雄心壮志的 amiable 和蔼可亲的 amicable 友好的 analytical 善于分析的 apprehensive 有理解力的aspiring 有志气的,有抱负的 audacious 有冒险精神的 capable 有能力的,有才能careful 办理仔细的 candid 正直的 competent 能胜任的constructive 建设性的 cooperative 有合作精神的 creative 富创造力的dedicated 有奉献精神的 dependable 可靠的 diplomatic 老练的,有策disciplined 守纪律的 dutiful尽职的 well-educated 受过良好教育的efficient 有效率的 energetic 精力充沛的 expressivity 善于表达faithful 守信的,忠诚的 frank 直率的,真诚的 generous 宽宏大量的genteel 有教养的 gentle 有礼貌的 humorous 有幽默 impartial 公正的 independent 有主见的 industrious 勤奋的ingenious 有独创性的 motivated 目的明确的 intelligent 理解力强的learned 精通某门学问的 logical 条理分明的 methodical 有方法的modest 谦虚的 objective 客观的 precise 一丝不苟的 punctual 严守时刻的 elastic 实事求是的 responsible 负责的sensible 明白事理的 sporting 光明正大的 steady 踏实的 systematic有系统的 purposeful 意志坚强的 sweet-tempered性情温和的temperate 稳健的 tireless 孜孜不倦的

三、作自我介绍——职业发展(making a self-introduction ——career development)这是很关键的一部分,也是MBA考官会重点考察的一部分。要把工作经历和MBA的学习以及职业发展方向作为一个整体来谈,让老师感到你选择MBA是一个理性的选择而不是一时冲动,选择MBA是职业发展中的一个必然选择,而不是因为找不到工作。你可以用这些句型: 1、In the past years, I’ve worked at IBM as a software engineer. In my work, I found communication and management is very important. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. So I choose MBA! if I am given a chance to study MBA in this famous University, I will stare no effort to master a good command of communication and management skill.(在过去的几年中,我作为一个软件工程师在IBM工作。在工作中,我发现交流和管理非常的重要。我一直认为一个人很容易落后,如果不持续学习的话,所以我选择了MBA!如果我有机会在这个著名的大学学习MBA,我会不遗余力的掌握沟通和管理的技能。)

Sample 10:
复试英文自我介绍

Good morning professors, First of all, please allow me to express my appreciation for the opportunity that you give me to join this interview.

My name is ***, English name Felix. I've got my undergraduate education in Beijing Foreign Studies University, Majoring in *** in School of English and International Studies. The major for further education that I pursue here in Peking university is ***.

During the four years in BFSU, I've been given the traditional education on both English Literacy and Diplomacy, which cultivated me to view the world in an international perspective.

I've been foreign teachers' assistant for about three years and learnt to communicate with them and understand their way to think and act. This experience gives me much deeper understanding of different cultures.

I served as volunteers for many events held by the government and other organizations, such as Fortune Globle Forum 2005 and Euro-Asian Conference organized by the Ministry of Communications. Thanks to those experience, I used my knowledge in real foreign affairs and increased my abilities in related aspects.

No matter how much the life in BFSU brought to me, I've been thinking for really a long time about studying something else after graduation as the life-long direction of study and profession. After analizing all the factors that intrigue me and inspire me, I've chosen a major which contains the factors of both passion and rationality. This major is Media Management. 

I really appreciate it if you could consider my application. If I could have the honor to study here, I promise that I would never fail your expectation. I'll try my best to study and learn as much as I could, so as to make contribution to the society and our country.

  THANK YOU, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

Sample 11:简介版自我介绍
Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. I'm a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.
I'm an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.
I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!
OK. This is me .A sunny girl.

posted on 2007-06-16 09:16 芷圆(Michelle) 阅读(7781) 评论(25)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: “口”若悬河“商”海无涯香港面“试”

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2007-06-16 14:47 | 思思
很有帮助也...明天正好要去面试~~谢谢老师:)
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2007-06-16 16:04 | JX
今天应该不上课吧,过来下课件
为什么没有PPT格式的?跟昨天的不一样啊,有点不习惯了
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2007-06-16 23:45 | 尹圆圆(Michelle)
PPT格式上传不了,这里提供更多的素材,给大家更多的参照!
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2007-06-17 07:02 | TF
Michelle啊,16号上的关于具体题目类型的ppt什么时候能见到啊,我昨天没记全。
谢谢!
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2007-06-17 09:39 | qf99
非常好的资料!圆圆周末愉快~
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2007-06-17 14:10 | XXXXX
圆圆老师,我想问一个问题。

就是我已经被复旦大学预录取了,而且在港大申请表里面也提到了。但我很疑惑,是否应该在港大自我介绍的时候,强调,或者至少是提及这一点?

如果他们问 why do you leave Fudan University after you've already admitted and apply for our school? Don't you think it's a behavior of dishonesty?
或者: You know Fudan University is very good, but why do you still come to this interview? 这个问题,按照你们给的思路,不能贬低复旦,否则港大也会认为我如果被港大录取也一样会这样贬低他们的,那么应该如何巧妙的回答呢?即借着这个问题再一次强调我真的很想被港大录取?
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#7楼 [楼主]
2007-06-17 23:13 | 尹圆圆(Michelle)
即借着这个问题再一次强调你真的很想被港大录取!
对,这实际上就是我在课上提到的港大和内地大学的优势对比!只是你的这个问题更针对性而已!加油!你是优秀的!
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#8楼 [楼主]
2007-06-17 23:25 | 尹圆圆(Michelle)
16、17号资料19号上午上传!
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2007-06-18 10:55 | XXXXX
谢谢老师~!下午见
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2007-06-18 19:52 | YBQ
Hi,Michelle,那些句套之类的PPT,什么时候可以传上来啊?谢谢
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2007-06-19 15:21 | erik
Hi,Michelle,那些句套之类的PPT,什么时候可以传上来啊?谢谢
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2007-06-19 15:21 | bk
Hi,Michelle,那些句套之类的PPT,什么时候可以传上来啊?谢谢
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2007-06-19 16:02 | wzz
问一下,
“Being good is must; successful, however, is plus.” (SAMPLE 5)
这个句子应该怎么翻译呢?
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2007-06-19 16:07 | sallyandwind
发现了一个type error.
Sample 5, line 3
"by no means" rather than "by no mans".
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2007-06-20 22:34 | kimi123
不是只有30秒吗?
Michelle,为什么上面都这么长?
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2007-06-21 10:56 | double
Michelle,什么算是个人介绍的亮点呢 什么都会一点,什么都不精
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#17楼 [楼主]
2007-06-21 16:28 | 尹圆圆(Michelle)
答double:按照我课程上所提到的,要有一个中心线索,例如,如果你是一个在很多城市读过书的同学,可以强调自己的个性:indenpendable, friendly, adapatble, reliable.这样几个特点,然后你举的例子也是围绕这个主题。不需要亮点堆积,而要突出一个重点!
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2007-06-26 10:30 | 陈怡霏
圆圆老师,这是港大给我发的面试通知邮件。内容很模糊,不知道对你的工作有没有用。

香港大学面试注意事项

1. 考生到达面试场地后,请立即向在场港大人员报到。
2. 考生请准备身份证,高考准考证及高考成绩单原件(如适用)参加面试,以便港大人员核对身份。
3. 考生如有虚报成绩及资料, 考生将会被取消面试及录取资格。
4. 面试分上下午进行,考生到达现场等候分组,个别考生需于面试场地等候较长时间,敬请留意。
5. 考生完成小组面试后,请回到等候室待港大负责人通知方可离开。期间若港大老师对于个别同学 的分数或者选科有疑问,将会邀请有关学生进行面谈。
6. 于面试期间港大会提供一条全新电话热线 (00852) 81002084以方便考生查询面试安排。
7. 为免延误本校处理有关录取工作,由2007年7月1日至7日期间,本处将不接受任何来电查询。
8. 录取结果将于2007年7月1日 至5日在港大网站公布,敬请密切留意。此外,我校同时会以书面形式及电话通知获录取之同学。
9. 由于录取时间紧张, 获录取之同学有可能须在电话中马上确认, 我校已安装电话录音设备, 以加强录取工作的效率, 请同学提前作好考虑, 以免耽误时间。
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2007-06-26 13:23 | Black
Michelle,我也有受到港大的面试通知,但没有说明面试形式,这是不是说明形式与去年一样呢?我还需要做什么准备呢?
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2007-06-28 10:25 | Beata
圆圆老师 今年港大面试的自我介绍时间有明确规定吗 能尽快回复吗? 谢谢
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#21楼 [楼主]
2007-08-17 15:41 | 尹圆圆(Michelle)
今年港大面试30秒,不准超时!
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2008-05-19 23:27 | benson
昨天听了您的讲座,感谢您的分享,老师真的很优秀。喜欢您部落格里的歌,感觉很对。会经常来坐坐~~
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2008-06-27 15:41 | yqyz
我是江苏的,今天接到港大面试通知.
港大会要求1分钟的个人介绍么?
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#24楼 [楼主]
2008-06-28 11:28 | 芷圆(Michelle)
去年是30秒自我介绍,今年报考人数更多,估计,不会超过1分钟的,大家多准备几个版本:)
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2008-07-14 23:15 | alyssa
thanks圆圆老师,用的很着哈~
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