Part One
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Sentence Pattern
－雅思写作高分句型－
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Version 3.3
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1.
强调句：基本结构－It + be + 强调部分 + that(who) + 说明部分
正是因为有了这些先进的设备我们才能够享受更多的便利。
一般陈述句：
We can enjoy more convenience because of these advanced facilities.
强调句：
It is just because of these advanced facilities that we can enjoy more convenience.
令人感到遗憾的是，人们关注的，往往是经济利益而不是社会利益。
Unfortunately, it is always the financial profits instead of social interests that people pay attention to.
2.
特殊强调句：Not…until句型+强调句
基本结构：It be not until……that……
尽管这个问题由来已久，但直到最近人们才开始逐渐意识到了它的重要性。
Although the problem has been existing for a long time, it was not until recently that people came to realize its importance.
3.
倒装句：(1) Only + 介词 + doing sth (或从句) can sb do sth
只有这样做我们才能彻底解决该问题。
Only by doing so can we solve the problem thoroughly.
我个人认为，只有在收集到了足够证据的情况下我们才能得出结论，否则的话我们就容易犯错误。
Personally, only when we have collected enough evidence can we come to a conclusion. Otherwise, we are prone to make mistakes.
(2)On no account +
倒装
我们决不应该忽视知识的价值。
On no account should we ignore the value of knowledge.
作为一个文明人，我们无论如何都不应该容忍这种现象的存在。
As a civilized person,
on no account should we tolerate the existence of such a phenomenon.
4.
举例三大高分句型
：
(1) Take …… as an (for) example
(2) …… is a case in point
(3) The fact that
（＋
从句
）
serves as a convincing example
Failed Example
：
Media shouldn’t focus on celebrities’ private lives because it has some bad effects. For example, Princess Diana’s death is caused by media.
Decent Example (1). Take Princess Diana for example, it was media’s excessive coverage on her private life that led to the tragedy to a large extent.
(2). Media’s excessive coverage on celebrities’ private lives has already led to quite a number of tragedies. And the death of Princess Diana is a case in point (serves as a convincing example).
5. Famous Quote
高分句型：
Sb was quoted (by……) as saying that ……/ In the words of sb
Ordinary Example
：
For example, Sandy Weill, the former president of Citibank once said: “Only the paranoid survive”.
Decent Example (1). Take Sandy Weill, the former president of Citibank as an example, he was once quoted by Forbes as saying that Only the paranoid survive.
(2). Sticking to your own ideas is of great importance. In the words of Sandy Weill, the former president of Citibank: “Only the paranoid survive”.
6.
“双越”句型：
The + adj/adv
的比较级 + 主语 + 谓语, the + adj/adv的比较级 + 主语 + 谓语
俗话说得好：“付出越多，收获越大”。
Just as an old saying goes like this: The more you give, the more you receive.
我们越深入观察这个问题，我们就越是能感受到它的重要性。
The deeper we see into this issue, the more strongly we will feel its importance.
作为一个大学生，你花在兼职工作上的时间越多，学习上拥有的时间就越少，那么你的成绩也就会越糟糕。
As a college student,
t
he more time you spend on part-time jobs, the less time you will have on your study, thus the poorer your score will be.
7.
多重比喻句
：
基本结构A is to B what X is to Y
Knowledge is to us what a compass is to a ship.
Personality(
品格
) is to man what perfume (
芬芳
) is to a flower. (By Charles Michael Schwab, American entrepreneur)
环境对于我们来说就好像鱼儿离不开水－我们绝对没法脱离它而生存！
Environment is to us what water is to fish
－
on no account can we live without it!
8.
否定词＋but句型
:
换句话说，城市中的多余劳动力只会削弱经济的发展。
To put it another way, the redundant (
多余的
) work force in the cities will do nothing but impair (
削弱
) the economic development.
征收更高的赋税只会给普通百姓带来更加沉重的经济负担。
Imposing higher taxes Imposing higher taxes will bring the ordinary citizens nothing but heavier financial burdens.
Part Two
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Words
－雅思写作滥词替换一览－
1. Very+adj
－
More than + adj
2. Because of
－
Due to / Thanks to
3. Different
－
Varied/Diverse (adj) / Vary (v)
4. Work hard
－
Spare no effort
5. Cause
－
Lead to / Result in
6. Certainly / Definitely
－
Be destined to / Be doomed to
7. Finally
－
End up
8. Important
－
Essential / Significant / Crucial / Vital / Be of great importance / Play a significant role
9. Good
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Beneficial / Decent
10. Bad
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Harmful / Detrimental