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我写第18篇
“Graduation means you are unemployed”, maybe many students are familiar and agree with this view. Today, more and more young people cannot find a favorite job after their graduation, the employment rate of students is only 73 percent in 2005. I think individual as well as society should take responsibilities for this phenomenon.
First of all, since 1998, most universities have been enlarging their admissions, so the number of students is inflated. However, not only the number but also the qualities of teachers fail to grow with the rate corresponding to the students’ increase. As a result, with the inflation of the number of students, the qualities slide down, part of students must face unemployment as soon as they graduate.
Second, nowadays a lot of university students think that to earn money is more important, and this goal is unrelated with study, they believe the quick success is around them and it is unnecessary to work hard to grasp a practical technique. But, chances are always for the prepared mind, having no useful skills is the main reason of unemployment.
Last but not the least, with the development of economy, some big cities develop quickly, a great deal of university students swarm to there after graduation, even though the west of our country lacks for human resource. The unbalance should be solved though the government control, such as the students who intend to work in the west should be given some priorities.
As a whole, I believe this phenomenon can be improved by the government’s control and individual’s struggle. We should strive for the harmonious society.
才一篇，大家要踊跃投稿阿，呵呵。。。。
批改时间一般在一周以内
讲广告的利弊的
It goes without saying that we live in a world which covers advertising. So it is no wonder that advertisements have been influencing people’s daily life. Some people hold the opinion that the merits outnumber the demerits. However, I am in favor of the co-existence of this argument. It is just like an immoral-and-perishing-sided spell.
Each dog has its day. Regard it a good idea that the primary purpose of advertisements is to express the commodities to us, which enable us to be familiar with them. Without drumbeating the businesses may lose the effective way to spread their products. We cannot imagine how slow the commercial development will be. What’s worth mentioning is that it creates idea from the designers. For instance, we learn ‘impossible makes possible’ from the Canon’s ads, which encourages people universally. Likewise, we acquire ‘to me the past is black and white, but the future is always color’ from the Hennessy’s one, which shares the life style with more people. So advertisements are not just advertisements. It generates varies kinds of notions about life.
Each cloud has a silver lining. Some advertisements can mislead customers in many aspects. They may magnify the quality of the goods at no allowance. It has highlighted the disadvantages whether it can be trust. For example, more and more people like electronic shopping and they buy things just from the picture and what it is described in TV, of course, but when they have purchased the commodity, they found they were deceived. Moreover, people are getting bored of the continual ads more or less.
By and large, advertising has so far received both critics and praises. For better or worse, it will still be the part of modern people’s life.
牛牛老师看一下怎么样?
第23篇
With the development of science and technology, mobile phones grow rapidly, so do problems about using cell phones.
Cell phone courtesy may be one of the most important problems which should be mentioned. People always use mobiles in public places, such as buses, restaurants, libraries, museums, some people talk loudly on mobiles which interfere with people around him, “No cell phones” signs are putting up all over, the device have been banned in many places. Moreover, according to the theory of mobile phones, when it is being used, the radiation mobiles release can influence the surrounding, such as some devices in hospitals, the guide system of planes, people who use cell phones long time often feel slight headache and hear noises in their ears. To some extend mobiles change the way of communication between people, now we can tell others something only by our thumb—short messages, so we can say the chance people communicate each other is decreasing.
In spite of those problems, mobiles have important advantages in transmitting information without the limit of location and time. It provide much convenience to people’s life and work , information is transmitted more fluently and more quickly, undoubtedly, it is a necessary tool for people in information age. In front of the advantages of cell phones, its disadvantages are so trial that they can be ignored, furthermore, people are realizing the problems associated with mobiles and are trying to improve these situations.
I believe with the improvement of people’s opinion and technology, the problems can be avoided and mobiles can serve us more advantageously.
实在不好意思
写的不好 牛牛老师凑合着看吧
大家不要跟我抢哦
我要写19篇
因为我是法学院的，哈哈。
可以，只要不重复，一个想写几篇都行。不过要给我一周的时间批，呵呵。。。
大家要耐心一点！！！
楼上借用别人文章的同学，由于你的文章不是我题目中的，所以我就不仔细分析了！！！
不过，我还是认真的看了一篇。写得很不错，不像是受培训的人写出来的文章。里面引用了些例子，挺有新意的。文章也写得很流畅。
总得来说，7分肯定有，我觉得8分也是可以的。就看考官实际情况给几分了。就我个人而言，7。5可能比较合适。但是实战中作文没有半分的。。。
11。
We all knows that science researches need experiments. And lots of experiments especially medical and pharmaceutical experiments have the animals,like dogs and monkeys,involved. When coming across the question:” Are animal experiments should be banned ?” , people’s opinions differ.
Some people think we should ban animal experiments. They argue that animals are friends of human beings. Some animals such as dogs accompany with children and bring happiness to families. If animals are tested, they are definitely hurt, even killed by experiments. It is so cruel for the lovely animals. Animals are so innocent that they should not be hurt. It is so selfish for people to carry on experiments on animals.
Others hold the opinion that animal experiments are necessary for the development of science. Without animal experiments, medicine won’t be allowed to apply to the human being for its danger. And the animal experiment is the best way to know ourselves. We can take the advantage of the animals to test new drugs.
As to myself, I agree with the latter. I love animals. But the life and health of human being outweigh it. In the case of disease, such as SARS, animal experiment is inevitable to be carried. The sacrifice of animals is worthy, if compared with that of people. It doesn’t mean we are permitted to kill animals. We should protect the animal unless we have no other way to choose. In short, although we should protect animals, animal experiment is still necessary for the development of science.
写惯了4，6级的文章，摆脱不了那个模式了。雅思那个TASK2还没有上过，牛牛你就凑合看吧。谢谢！
楼上讲广告的利弊的,那个文章咋就嘎眼熟呢~不,是耳熟才对.里面的经典句都是小新上礼拜传授我们的来着……牛牛老师啊，由于小小的意外，这周末才能上你的课~哎，再不听你讲讲话，看来我真的要对阅读没感觉了，快来救救偶吧~明年两月考试了，现在还没萨数，不过从偶考好的同学看，貌似阅读最容易拿高分的说，你赞成不^_^
牛牛偶拿不出手的作文来了,我写的时候都在想怎么样把我想说的表达出来,还有怎么样凑够字数,所以文章里面肯定有语法和表达不清楚的地方,请指教,麻烦了!!写的是第四题.
Recently museums have become place of interest in some cities. some people maintain that museums should be built enjoyable places to make people relax whereas other are confident that the main function of museums is to educate .not only for entertainment, After close inspection I would like to support the museums disseminate human beings’ knowledge and history. which are more significant for education. the reasons as following .
The main purpose of museums is illuminate the culture and arts of the world .museums as milestone of cultural display. Provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the development of human beings .if one want to know about the progress of technology and history. he can have a tour to museum .where he can get much useful knowledge our forefather have made in history. and the essential knowledge is still in use today.
Secondly organizing students to visit museum has been part of education of some primary school. most teachers admit that students will get better understanding of their science lesson form museums than textbooks. Jingjing ,one of Chinese primary school students said that ,he wouldn’t got understanding about the principle of whitelight until visiting to science and technology museum .where a detailed the natural phenomenon is presented vividly. And surprisingly he has got a high score in the examination.
Last but not least Recording the history and education are the final goal of improvement and building theme museum. Such as military museum. or aviation museum.
Form what has been cited above. We may safely draw the conclusion that although the art museum and music museum make people relax and mental edification. The main purpose of museum is to educate.
我先预定13，晚上回家就写！
大家别跟我抢哦~~~
这是第5篇，原本刚拿到题目的时候觉得应该不难写，真正等到开始写的时候发现有些词穷..牛牛帮忙看一下吧..
Overall, I disagree the opinion expressed. Earlier technology and recent technology have the same effect in our life. In this essay, I will take about the medicial technology and the living technology to prove my view.
Medicial technology, as other technology, is in order to improve the quality of humans’ life which has being researched continuously. Whatever earlier technology or recent one has the same aim that it cure people of diseases. Nobody can say earlier medicial technology can just treat the cough or cold so does it change our life less than the recent one which can solve some difficult brain problem. Surely, people always seek for the solution of every disease. In any case, all the medicial technologies are equally, so we need not compare them.
The same is true in living thchnology. People invented chair, so we sit on the ground no longer. Later, when we invented sofa, which can make us feel more comfortable when we are sitting. Both of them all change our life a lot . Before the air conditioner has been invented , nobody will complain that the fan is useless in our life. As the same reason above, in different time has technology affacted to our life differently. Anyway, the living technology is in order to raise the standard of our life, to make it more satisfactory.
To sum up, I think it is by no means to compare which of these two changes our life more. Technology development is a process step by step. Every footprint represent the contribution which it made for humans’ life. Just as I expound above, earlier technology and recent technology have the same influence in humans’ lives.
作文不好，只好多写，占个位子１２题．边哭边写．表跟我抢．
Jack,不好意思，本来想写13题的，一不小心写了12题了，sorry啊
Recently, it is reported that tourism covers a growing proportion of gross global production, from which we can conclude that there is an increasing tendency for people to experience the joys of travel. In the circumstances, some people suppose that the benefits from international tourism are more important than its negative effects. But, I hold the opposite opinion with three reasons given in the following text.
Admittedly, international tourism can bring money and job opportunities to many countries, especially some developing countries, such as Thailand, Philippines, where tourism plays a vital role in domestic economy. However, tourism , with irretrievable damages to the ecosystem, gives rise to serious contamination. In most travel resorts, some tourists always abandon rubbish anywhere instead of into the ash-bins. Furthermore, some carve their names on the trees or stones, only for marking the spots where they used been. Unfortunately, it is not only purely ecosystems which are destroyed, but also some ancient monuments. With the awareness of environmental pollution, now, the concept of “sustainable tourism” has been focused on, which gave birth to “eco-tourism”. Whereas, so-called “eco-tourism”, I am afraid, can not help at all. People are so attracted by this new tourism style. Ironically, some countryside where used to be peaceful, with their capacities challenged, now are ruined by ever more visitors.
In addition, often a large amount of money are needed to attract tourists. Instead of the agriculture or industry, useless recreation facilities may be built up. Then, tremendous capital may be wasted rather than providing for basic needs.
More seriously, tourism is not an independent industry. It is affected by many variable factors, such as tourist tastes, weather, or natural disasters. For instance, tsunami from the Indian Ocean in 2004 swept Maldives relentlessly, which made the tourism market there almost collapse.
In conclusion, I am convinced that it is wrong to outweigh the advantages of international tourism. In spite of its contribution to the global economy, the sharply developing tourism is not worth for people being too optimistic to some extent.
写文章时遇到的小问题：
1.meanwhile能不能放在两个逗号中间，连接两个独立句子？好像副词不能这样用对吧
2.“发挥作用”或者“有效的”怎么用英文表达，文章中我用了一个“help”代替了，能给我一个更好的词吧？
3.“A是B的支柱”怎么说？比如精神支柱，经济支柱？
这是偶写的第一篇雅思作文，绞尽脑汁写的，总而言之，言而总之，写作文太痛苦了！
我晕,楼上的大哥你到底写13,12啊,内容是tourism.题号是１３．不管了我写１３题，housing shortage.这次谁在和我抢,我就去他家哭.
PS:楼上的,我相当占成你的话,写作文太痛苦了,我每天用我复习的大部分时间让自己痛苦.所以我提到作文,就觉得天要塌了.
请注意，12题才是讲tourism的，所以yini写的是12题！！！
13题就由jack来写吧，大家不要搞错了阿！！！
我晕,楼上的大哥你到底写13,12啊,内容是tourism.题号是１３．不管了我写１３题，housing shortage.这次谁在和我抢,我就去他家哭.
sorry啊，最近被雅思搞得脑子有点短路了，呵呵！我写的是12题啦，jack你写13题吧，别哭哦
来挺牛牛啦！没有人写第6篇吧。我要了哦，别跟我争嘞！：0哈哈，我晚上就去写。嘿嘿~~~~
牛老师那天你做广告的时候并没有说只给改第一篇啊，我还以为只要发过来的都给改。。。赶快把握机会写一个。。。第24个。Gay老师的作文课还只上过一节，所以肯定写的不咋地，不过肯定natural瓦卡卡
24。Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree? ( January 7, 2006)
Almost every government around world now takes money from its citizens as tax. With such money, they are able to improve the constructions within the countries, and more importantly, they could develop educational, medical and welfare system. It seems that every one will benefit from it.
However, not every one considers such tax system a reasonable one. Many argue that they are pressured by tax, especially in the developed countries where the tax rates are rather high, for comparatively a large portion of their incomes are collected by the governments. For example, it’s quite common in such countries that the amount of the tax collected from the husband’s income is as much as the wife’s total income. I believe most women would rather choose to stay at home if there is no income tax which is so high.
On the other side, most people support the tax system, no matter how much tax he pays every year. Just like what I mentioned above, with the tax money, the government could do a great number of things which will benefit them. Without such money, how can the roads, schools, and hospitals be constructed and how could we travel, receive education and treatment? So though the tax rates are somewhat high in some areas, still there are many citizens who are willingly to pay.
As to myself, I agree with the latter. No one could deny that the benefit he has gained from the programs built with the tax money. And I believe that with more money, the government could offer us better welfare conditions and every one will be able to enjoy a better life as a result, besides, it’s a useful way to help the poor.
狂滴汗。。。写得太差啦！！！！！！真的得好好上Gay老师的课了。。。牛老师凑和看吧。。。
13题就由jack来写吧，大家不要搞错了阿！！！
感动ING!!牛牛太好了,从小到大没见过这么公平的老师,实在不拜倒在牛"群"下都不行了.
第六篇哦.
How toeducate and cultivate children has been a much debated issue these days.Some argue that living at home with parents will benefit the students whilst others counter by pointing out the school is better for children to live at.But every cloud has its silver lining,I shall reveal the reasons as follows.
Though it is admitted that children can receive more love and better home education during the period of enlightenment to form exemplary behaviour and thinking,there is much probabilityof the formation of dependence.Children can be spoiled.For another,students may be confined in the little family then poor in communicating with others.Both of them can cause ill effects in the long run.
Adversely,schools play an important part in the socialization of the children.Meanwhile the dormitry life develops the skills of living independently.Flowers do not last forever.All of the students live at school must follow the same pattern which may obliterate children`s creativity,ambition and enthusiasm for life.In addition to this ,as parents worrying about,living at school may result in alienation between children and themselves.That is a question on family cultivate with love and own career.
In conclusion,children should live at home with parents during their enlightenment period and then ,after they have formed the primary standard behaviour and thinking,they can live at school to develop their skills for getting on well with others and living independently.
牛牛老师多包涵啊,我刚大一,词汇就这样拉!上回十一魔鬼班也只听小新讲了点皮毛嘞.惭愧拉~老师你狠狠批啊,一针见血最好拉!呵呵~~:)不过字数好象有点不够,要不要加生活经历或例子啊?
第15篇：
Space travel,such as landing on the moon,has given rise to the controversy that if or not it is worthy of being done.Some people hold the view that it is impotant,whereas others maintain that people will not remember this.To be frank,I am in high favour of the latter point of view.
Those who are for it may say that,space travel,as a result of the progress of science and space technology,will improve the development of science and space technology in reverse.And we will know much more about the outer space than before.Thirdly,overpopulation has been a serious problem today,and so is the shortage of natural resources.Searching for help in outer space may be a good choice for human beings.Therefore,space travel is of great importance.
However,space travel,which usually costs a lot,has so far contributed little to solving the problems we confront with in emergency.Shall we put more money into a future that we are not certain of while many of us are still in starvation?Space travel,in my opinion,is just certain kind of competition among big powerful countries,whicih is made to show the country’s science and technology advantagies and is often connected to military purposes.Thus some people insist that they will not remember this------Who cares about something that has nothing to do with himself?
Not in an emergency to move to the moon,why not have the large amount of money spent on the emergency of these poor countries?We do need to exploit the space,but that is after we have a world in perfect harmony!
牛牛，一定帮我评评啊，我头一次写大作文，不久就要考了，心里慌啊！
！学语法真开心！ 今天终于抽空写好了作文，跟以往高中议论文有相同，也有不同，反正写了，牛牛麻烦你了! 写的是第3篇
There is no doubt that when you begin to learn a language, both cultures and lifestyles are indispensable for learning. Only learning cultrues and lifestyles can you have a good commond of what you learn.
First of all, cultures paly a big role in languages. Colloquial phrases are pleasant to the ear, not only because they are familiar, but also because they reflect a unique aspect of a culture which is a symbol of countries or living areas. So necessary do you learn cultures first when you determine to learn a new language.
In addition, some special languages in Canada and Austrilia have words that reflect a way of life that is connected close to the Earth. There are fifty different words that mean `snow` in one Canadian native language. Various local languages have been evolved through human`s lifes and have been continuing to change step by step. If we expect to learn the most aboriginal languages, lifestyles count for learning.
When you make a decision to learn languages, a good advice recommended to you is that living with the local people whose mother language is what you will learn, can communicate with you frequently. In this way can you learn languages quickly ,efficiently and authoritatively.
To sum up, learning languages is not a simple task but a process of knowing different cultures and customs. So, to get involved in the cultures and lifestyles can make your learning happily .I am sure that you will enjoy every minute of learning languages.
还有小个问题麻烦了，现在新东方上课没有写作课，想知道小作文里的graph,table,chart 有什么区别没有？谢谢！（！学语法真开心！）
A类小作文有这么几种：
柱状图bar chart或column graph
饼状图pie chart
曲线图line graph
表格图table
流程图flow chart
再次声明一下，由于批作文很麻烦，所以从上传到批改需要至少一周的时间，如果谁有特殊情况需要先批请声明一下，我可以适当调整一下，呵呵
牛牛老师你快点哦。我12.16就考了哦！早批我好早改正嘛。呵呵，真开心~~~：）
In major cities, problem with housing shortage seems to have climbed at an alarming rate. So
Some people hold that the unique solution for the problem depends on government action. To be frank, I’m in high favor that the problem of housing shortage is the responsibility of not only governments but also individuals and enterprises.
Like any else. Enterprises are in pursuit of maximization of profits .taking no consideration of the reasonable utilization of land. Big companies and factories located in the city centre due to convenience in business exchange and transportation .however these gigantic companies and factories have taken up so many places on city that there are few lands resources can be used in housing.
On the other hand, overpopulation is also the cause of this problem. Especially in china, although the growth of accommodation is rapid. It still can not meet the increasing needs of people. Furthermore .with the burgeoning of some industrial cities. People ,attractive to comparative advantages ,such as education and job opportunities ,have been swarming into these “dreamland of fantasy ”,which brings heavy burden to the limited housing resources.
Finally ,we can not deniable the fact that government lack social awareness and consciousness of equilibrium between economic construction and utilization of land. the government of city without the planning of sustainable development for land. The policies should be made to allow more skyscrapers to be built
In conclusion ,actions to implement the improvement of housing problem should await the participation of government ,big companies and factories and individuals .
写的一身汗，每次写作文的时候就明白啥叫自卑．
写的是13题，housing shortage 的问题
Motorized flight is the most important invention in the mordern world.not any other invention has had such a significant impact on our lives.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a fact of life that motorized flight has had such acrucial influence on we human beings.What is under controversy is whether it is the most vital invention in the mordern world.To a large extent I believe so.
With the invention of motrized flight,we spent much less time in transpoting,which made our life more efficent and convenient,especially for those who are busy with their career.Another advantnge of motorized flight is that it is much safer than normal tranpatation,which caused traffic accidents frequently all over the world.Thus,I consider motorized flight as safe,convenint and time-saving.
What is worth montioning is that communication problens has already been solved,this technology will be used in rencent years,which will benifit those who want to keep touch with people on land or busy with their business.
Admittedly,other inventions in the mordern society also changed and impacted our lives alot,for instance,computers,televisions,cell phones,etc.Even though they improved our living standard,they always have some nagetive aepects,especially foe children and adolecents.
All in all,the disadvantages of other inventions far outweigh the motorized flight.From what I have discussed above,we may thus safely draw the conclusion that motorized flight is the invention of the greatest significance in the mordern society.
不巧，我在华师大啊，呵呵。不过听我高中同学说南京考口语比上海简给分高，祝你好运喽！
We have intelligent machine-roborts in the future to the work instead of human beings.State the benifits and dangers of them for a university lecturer.
The progression of science and technology is inevitable and undeniable.What is under controversy is weather intelligent machine-roborts in the future do the work for university lecturers will be benificial or dangerous to huan beings.From my viewpoint,there are pros and cons simultaneously.
As we all know that every dog has its day,including science progression absolutely.universities lecturers will have much more leisure time than ever before.They will have enough time to do their own studies.They can devote themselves to what they really want to work on without worrying about lectures or students.They can also enjoy their lives,companying their families,travelling across the world without working stress,which will, make themselves healthier at the same time.
On the contracy,every cloud has a sliver lining,which means they will also have some dangers for university students,especially for freshman who are new in university and do not know much about university lives and studies.They may feel extremaly happy after long-years working hard for college extrance examination.They may be misleaded that university simply means having fun.Thus,they need a lecturer to introduce them how to adapt to the new learning style.
Weighing the pros and cons of the double-edged sword.I figure that intelligent roborts can do some parts work for university lecturer,and the funtion of the lecturers will still exist in recent decades.
牛牛帮忙看看哦,西西,我离死不远了
Many people use distance-learning programs such as study metrial post,TV and Internet to study at home,but some people think that it can not bring thr benifits as much as attending college or university.Do you agree or disagree with it?
It has been widely noted that,with the popularity of distance-learning program,there crops up a Juda'kiss of a social issue weather it is necessary to attend college or university.My view has been that it is still indispensable and inevitable to attend college or university.Here I will discuss the pros and cons of the two learning styles.
As is known to us all that social skills is becoming more and more vital in the mordern world.What we need to do is not only learning knowledge from books and teachers,but also communication skills and how to get harmony with our surrondings,which reguires getting along with others.Thus,I figure studying through distance-learning programs can not give us the opportunities to improve these practical abilities,which are actually more crucial in the society,especially the business world.Viewed from this angle,if wo focus on our future development,we had better choose to attend college or university,which severs more benefits obviously.
In addition, as a saying goes,you have an apple,I also have an apple,if we change,we will still have an apple,but if you have a thought,I also have a thought,if we change,we will both have two thoughts.college or university give students a chance to discuss questions or change their thoughts face to face,which will make them more mature and objective.
On the other hand,distance-learning programs can not offer that.
All in all,I definitely agree with the perspective that attending college or university is more advantageous to a large extent.
还是我的,西西,有劳老师咯
你写得是我给的题目吗，不是的话，我就简单的评一下，好不好？！
大家放心，我下周会把所有的作文全都批好，一个不漏，要快考试的人也不要急，下周五之前肯定能批完，呵呵。。。。。。
牛牛，你的作文书什么能出出来啊．．我想我是等不到了．．１２月考了．．．能不能先透露点核心idea啊
写的是白皮书上的科技题
12月16号就考了
麻烦牛牛老师咯
老师你有给题目吗
发到我的邮箱好不好啊
1031454@qq.com
Amy我跟你一起考哦,也在南京
呵呵，喵喵，一起加油哦！那天有战友陪咯！
哈哈。真开心~~：）
为什么没人写第一篇呢?呵呵,那我定了啊!我16号的考试,谢谢大家体谅!!!
A disputed issue which drew our attention recently is that the combat between parents’ complaints about too much commerce-based advertisements which provided children with nothing but merely meaningless staff and the companies’ positive attitudes towards the useful information through this media. Since nowadays we are all evolved in this information age that get us much exposure to a bunch of advertisements with various information, it is surely a dilemma if someone is asked to judge between the two parties above. Nevertheless, I will choose to be on the company side as far as I am concerned.
People are largely dependent on informative details from advertisements without which making their choices would be harder. This point can be strongly proved by those annual fashionable trends youngsters follow. We can easily found a certain group of people who wear the exact sort of perfume or the same hairstyle on almost each head. There is no way if a brand-new product spreads nationwide immediately after its birth just by sharing ideas with friends around you. We only discuss about qualifications of this product after knowing it from advertisements on TVs, posters or other mass intermediates.
Snacks and toys, tough mainly designed for teens, do take one part of the on-sale information advertisements convey. Admittedly, all food producers expect a promising prospect of their products, they then will naturally exaggerate to a certain degree by planning creative notions and exuberant ads lines. But through those introductions, parents may acquire a better understanding of which one they are much more into. Take milking powders for example, if milking powders with famous brands are much more frequently chosen, babies, as we believe, are less likely to get hurt or even poisoned as they sometimes suffered before.
People hold the opinion that a sacrifice always come along with a reward, which reflects upon this topic. What parents are not satisfied with, from my view, is actually children’s overacting upon advertisements instead of an advertisement itself. Advertisements, tough slightly blur consumers’ eyes, are on their way of helping us a reasonable choice.
终于明白为什么没人写第一篇了.啥也不说了,全是汗......
牛老师,我写的第一篇(见上).
16号的考试,您给看看.
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还有拜托牛牛老师了，快点帮我们把作文改出来哦
如果可以，我想24篇每篇都写，不知道老师是否有空？是否愿意辛苦地改一改？？。。如果愿意，我每天1篇---2篇的写，然后传上来。。（写作初学者） J.C.
今天刚回来，希望明天能够公布出来，让你们久等了，呵呵。。。