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俞鑫,华东理工大学英语学士,华东政法大学法律硕士
新东方雅思阅读、写作、语法、新概念三主讲,
从事英语教学多年,传说中的英语狂人
首创10篇作文搞定雅思写作
授课深入浅出,强调举一反三,对雅思等英语考试有天生的研究冲动和热情
专家学术底蕴深厚,长期沉浸在英语研究的虚拟世界中,由于性格单纯善良,故有了牛牛的雅号。精通英语和法律两门学科,大学期间一直担任英语主持人,参加英语辩论大赛,因此有着极强的英语交流能力

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为什么牛牛没告诉我们你搞得群号码阿???伤心中!! (hulijan)
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@song 放松 (俞鑫)
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@嘻羊羊 有吗? (俞鑫)
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牛牛!!我来了!!!,马上就要考试,每天心里都超紧张~~抓狂了 (song)
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现在的大学生找工作是越来越难了,工作能与自己所学的专业对口就更是一种奢望了!难道我们就必须接受这种学习与工作不能互相扶持的处境吗?!大学教育为什么不能与未来就业结合起来?!

 

Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 

Schools are responsible primarily for teaching students academic abilities which they will use in their future careers and therefore some feel that extracurricular activities such as music and sports are extraneous and should not be included in their curricula.  The inclusion of such activities however is vital to the complete development of a young mind and cannot be absent from the scholastic experience.(63 words)

 

Extracurricular activities provided by schools can easily be seen as superfluous by those not involved in the school system, especially those who ultimately pay for those activities through taxation.  These people view the function of compulsory education as being charged solely with preparing students for the working world and professional success.  In these areas, skills such as tossing a ball or playing a flute are inapplicable and therefore, in the minds of opponents to these activities, an unnecessary financial strain on an already under-funded educational system. Proponents of extracurricular activities, however, contend that there is more to the issue.(99 words)

 

The benefits of extracurricular activities do not rest in the skills that they directly impart to students; throwing a ball with great accuracy, though impressive to most, is not in fact a vital skill around the office. Instead, the invaluable cooperative communication, and leadership skills that students acquire from participating in extracurricular activities imbue them with a multifacetedcharacter full of self-confidence as well as rounded and whole.  Not to mention, no matter how successful, a well trained worker cannot relax by tallying figures, and cannot invite friends out for a friendly game of ‘fill out the remittance report’.(99 words)

 

Extracurricular activities allow schools to provide a milieu in which students can challenge themselves and create priceless memories, instead of churning out legions of soulless automatons.  Rather than simply being trained to work, students should be taught to live.(39 words)

黑体部分是一些好词好句,大家可以借鉴一下,呵呵。。。
 这篇是我请一位美国朋友按照雅思作文的方法写的例文,供大家参考一下。

posted on 2006-11-03 22:03 俞鑫 阅读(1418) 评论(3)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: 雅思写作

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2007-04-02 21:50 | veronica
COPY下来了,,认真研究去......谢谢牛~
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2007-04-03 12:16 | Nevaeh
短短的文章里有好些单词都不认识 55555。。。。。。看来我的词汇量还太小了~~~~词汇就是硬骨头~~~~但必须把它啃掉~~~~~
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2007-10-28 21:24 | abuse
multifacetedcharacter
这个是什么意思啊 好恐怖啊 这么长...
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