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俞鑫,华东理工大学英语学士,华东政法大学法律硕士
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   08年的第一场考试(1月10日)马上就要到了,为了迎接新年的新考试,下面是5道难道适中的写作题(带有预测性),大家可以拿来练下笔。

   大家一定要明白个道理:写作绝对是practice makes perfect.换句话说,如果你考前连5篇都没写到,那么你的作文是很难发挥出水平的,也就徘徊在5-6分了(这还是基础好的)!所以,不要犹豫了,拿起笔来,写吧。。。。

 

l        In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.(教育类)

l        Differences between countries have become less and less evident, so we can enjoy the same films, brands and TV programs. To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?(文化传统类)

l        Many people think that public libraries should only provide books to readers and shouldn’t waste their limited funds on expensive high-tech media, such as computer software, DVD or videos. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(科技影响类)

l        In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both and give your own opinion.(冷门题)

l        The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(政府政策类)

posted on 2008-01-04 10:46 俞鑫 阅读(1600) 评论(16)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: 雅思写作

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2008-01-04 19:44 | lulu0829
坐到SF了。。。。
5555,果然作文要多练习阿。。。
12.15考的。作文只有5.5。。。伤心死了。。。
就是因为作文。。。。
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2008-01-04 21:47 | water baby
楼上的,我也是那天考的。。。也是五点五分的写作,平均分一下落到只有七分的说。。。唉,现在才明白,考前一篇作文也不写,纯粹靠自己的天分,起码用在写作上是行不通的。。。
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#3楼 [楼主]
2008-01-05 11:59 | 俞鑫
你们两个正好应证了我的说法么:“如果你考前连5篇都没写到,那么你的作文是很难发挥出水平的,也就徘徊在5-6分了(这还是基础好的)!”

别的还没考的,要好好练练,别偷懒!!!
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2008-01-05 16:49 | little rice
请教牛牛老师 第2篇 可以从globalization的角度来分析吗?
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#5楼 [楼主]
2008-01-06 11:30 | 俞鑫
@little rice
当然可以,不过要具体点,单一个globalization太笼统,后面就没办法写了
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2008-01-06 21:29 | 小惠
上次考试阅读我得了32分.现在准备复习了.一篇文章看下来,觉得很吃力,信息太多,抓不住题目要解的信息.....请问有好办法吗?
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#7楼 [楼主]
2008-01-06 22:30 | 俞鑫
@小惠
不知道你的问题是不是处在定位上,

定位一直是雅思阅读的核心部分,有很多题只要定到位了,答案也就找到了,所以在设计题目的时候定位往往会遇到一些麻烦。

所以,一般文章大意还是能把握住的,在此基础上,结合题目中的关键词去定位
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2008-01-06 22:38 | hebe
牛牛,刚写好第三篇,不知道从哪几方面检查呢
19号就要考了,哎,没底啊
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#9楼 [楼主]
2008-01-06 22:45 | 俞鑫
句型和词汇以及结构
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2008-01-14 12:49 | little rice
第五篇话题,麻烦牛牛老师打个分吧 谢谢了
Nowadays, goverments are worrying about the swelling avalanche of worldwide violent crimes,especially the increase of juvenile delinquency. Some people complaint that large amountof violence in films and on television is the major cause ,so states need to control them carefully. But,it is my contension that the influence of vilonet movies and tv progrmes tothis problem is debatable.

It is undeniable that some people who lack of ability to control themselves will cpoy the bloody activities showed in films and on televisions. Those people may hardly disciminate reality from virtual plot,addticting to the imaginary situation which could bring them exciting feelings as well as impulse . Therefore, to cut the violence in movies andon television seems a simple solution while direct and effective.

However, Limitation of violence in media needs more considerations for root of the problem is associated with effects of education. A well-educated people could make a right judgment when he or she is watching the violence in various of media. It is more reasonable to educate people have a objective attitude toward the violence happend in movies and on television rather than controling them totally. Stricter limitations goverment do,more crusiority people will feel, promoting their desire to watch violence in the films and on televisions in a potenial way.

Overall, to cut violence in media completelly is not a rational and practical idea but radiccal one. Only the goverments concentrate on how to increase the quality of education,will a good scenario happen.
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#11楼 [楼主]
2008-01-14 15:12 | 俞鑫
@little rice
套的还蛮有意思的,7分

不过有很多小错误,单词拼错的也不少
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2008-01-14 17:38 | little rice
呵呵谢谢牛牛老师 机子上没word,基本的拼写都没改过,有劳老师了:)改去~
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2008-01-15 16:21 | little rice
牛牛老师,这5篇都练完了,可以再推荐5篇吗?还是没底啊!万分感谢
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2008-05-13 15:19 | Sam
麻烦牛牛老师打个分,第一篇的~
第一次练笔,心慌慌...

Nowadays, people are attaching more and more importance on the quality of education. Some people harbor the opinion that high school students should have the access to the evaluation and the critics of their teachers while others disagree with them.
Self-evaluation will be made by the teachers if the students are able to comment on their teaching methods. A majority of the teachers in China pay much more attention to the knowledge spreading than the feed backs of their students. If there is a certain way that students can tell their teachers what they like and what they don’t like in class, the teacher will be able to adjust their teaching methods in order to help the students understand and acquire more.
Moreover, the process of evaluating the teachers can improve the communication between the teachers and the students. Education is not just about books and knowledge; it’s also about the ability to live a better life. By frequent and effective communications, students and teacher can be friends in life. Hence, it will be easier for the teachers to offer assistance to their students in their problems in life.
Nevertheless, there exists a sort of demerit. Some regard the evaluation and critics of teachers as a disrespectful behavior of students. The gap between the students and the teachers will be so narrow that the students will stop respecting their teachers.
On my opinion, the advantages of this kind of evaluation outweigh the disadvantages, for the reason that if the teachers can learn to respect their students by accepting their comments and thoughts, so can the students. The quality of education can easily be improved on the base of adequate communication and mutual respect.
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#15楼 [楼主]
2008-05-14 18:05 | 俞鑫
@Sam
Band 6
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2008-05-15 09:37 | Sam
谢谢牛牛老师,我想问下我的主要问题是哪里还有怎么能改进啊?我六月初就要考了~~
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