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Young children should stay in Kindergarten or nursery schools so that their mothers can return to work earlier.  Do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

In the past, mothers usually stayed with children when they were young. However, nowadays with more and more competition in society, mothers are deprived of most of the mothers’ rights. Therefore, kindergarten takes the job sharing mothers’ jobs. Someone believes that staying in kindergarten could be a wise choice for the present parents. However, the others doubt. I prefer to children’s studying in kindergarten. The reasons are as follows.

First of al, it’s obvious that kindergartens can offer children more systematic education than household teaching. The teachers have been well trained of children caring. The kindergarten provides not only good teaching facilities but friendly and harmonious studying environment where kids can play together and learn how to co-operate in a team.
Secondly, as children’s parents have to make a living, they probably have no choice but to work continually with no opportunity to study, which leads to no time spent on children caring. As a consequence, to leave children in kindergarten must be a mutual way for both parents and their children.

Last but not least, to reduce financial burden of the family, mother had better return to work as soon as possible for the cost of raising children and footing the bill of any consumption. That’s why so many young couples don’t choose to have children earlier. It is a fact every couple has to face and try figuring out the proper way to solve it.

In a word, I do support that young children should stay in kindergarten. And parents should return to work earlier. It is not only good for parents but children as well.

posted on 2006-08-15 21:29 新东方小新 阅读(2050) 评论(17)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: 雅思作文互动及欣赏区 网摘收藏

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2006-08-15 22:20 | daphnd
哈哈,我抢到沙发了~

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2006-08-15 23:17 | Ann
至少在中国,应该把孩子送去幼儿园. 因为几乎所有邻居家的孩子都会送去幼儿园,如果不把自己的孩子也送去,就没有小朋友和他一起玩了. 独自一人不利于小朋友的健康成长. 容易引发自闭倾向.
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2006-08-15 23:31 | Ann
图图里面的小妹妹很可爱呀~~ :)
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2006-08-16 12:17 | Adonis
小新,刚上过你的雅思班:文章第三段就是你所说的特性段吧?但是我认为这和题目并没有关系的啊,例举的三点都是应该说明你是为什么支持应该将孩子送到幼稚园的啊,但第三段并不是得亚.希望跟我说说吧!谢谢.
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2006-08-16 12:25 | Tracy
小新,我也支持送幼儿园。
这篇文章是你写的吗?明显的应试作文哦。

http://tracywychen.spaces.live.com/
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2006-08-16 13:05 | jing
小新 我想知道这些作文都是几分段的 至少7分吗?
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2006-08-16 15:44 | 爱新觉罗胤希
俺都没上过kindergarten,直接上的小学
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2006-08-17 08:34 | 悠悠
张老师,请问你有女朋友了吗?嘿嘿。:)
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2006-08-17 10:54 | jojo
我很小的时候妈妈就把我送进去了,还是寄宿的类~~~你看我现在不是吃吗吗香身体本棒吗~~~而且独立能力极强!what'more妈妈工作也是为了多赚点奶粉钱呀!谁叫社会,工作单位补贴的那么少啊~~~
如今的物价飞涨,帮宝适,惠士都贵的要命,么的钱,妈妈爸爸们只能用草纸来自制的pp布类~~~~这不是妈妈的错不是爸爸的错,不是任何人的错,物价上涨的这么节棍,谁都会迫不得已的额~~~
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2006-08-17 12:39 | x
小新老师,为什么是foot the bill of
是指支撑的意思吗
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2006-08-17 14:47 | anita
呵呵呵,这里也流行枪沙发的哦……
不生孩子最好了,不用考虑这些问题
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2006-08-17 19:27 | 茼蒿
小新老师,我听过你的课,没想到你写的作文还蛮好的,请问小新老师作文要怎么写才写的长, thank you!
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2006-08-17 20:36 | missmycycly
In my opinion I think it is not a good choice to send young children to kindergraden too earlier.Some experts ever said young children would become being easy to sad if they should were to be in kindergraden . 
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2006-08-17 21:51 | magic
晕~~茼蒿   有你这么评价的么
没想到的事情多了~....唉  真是什么人都有
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2006-08-17 22:47 | sophia
我想我是赞同这一观点的,但是我们这一代人的父母都愿意带孩子,而且都抢着带,试问又如何权衡呢?
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2006-08-25 09:46 | 蓝蓝蓝
My opinion is, everybody should have a normal life, so do the children. I agree with you!
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2006-08-25 10:18 | 新东方小新
作文写长关键是懂得paraphrase的艺术,国外专门有句群的拓展训练,国内这方面不太重视。建议你看看外刊中的paraphrase的部分,有些文章你做得不好实在是因为你对事物没有观点。

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