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The gap of living in cities and the countryside is larger and larger. What are the reasons in your country and how to reduce the differences?

As the step of economic development accelerates, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. Take a further look at the phenomenon, there are three major causes.
 Firstly, the insufficiency of investment in the rural areas accounts mainly for the issue. China, for example, covers a very large area. Due to the emphasis on the development in the coastal areas, the government devotes more investment in the large cities, such as Shanghai, Beijing and Guangzhou. The investment, undoubtedly, is repaid by the threefold increase of economy and commerce in these cities. However, this is not the case in the rural areas and the western regions. The lack of investment barriers the productivity and economic development and sharpens the gap between the city and the countryside.

Secondly, the low education level in the rural areas contributes partly to the gap of living. Education is the prime force of productivity. Keeping this in mind, many countries and governments give priority to the development of education. China’s education witnessed a rapid growth in the past decade. However, the education level in the countryside still keeps very low. The enrollment of primary schools and secondary schools is much lower compared with the advanced regions, not to mention the developed countries in the world. Without good education, the development of economy and technology would be a dream difficult to be realized.

Finally, the influx of migrant workers to the cities from the countryside deteriorates the undeveloped condition in the rural areas. The life style in the urban areas is very attractive to the people in the countryside. To seek more working opportunities, many people abandon the fertile lands and leave them uncultivated. If the situation continues, it will lead to serious unbalance of economic and regional development.

To sum up, only when the government renders more concerns over the issue can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.

posted on 2006-08-20 22:02 新东方小新 阅读(2414) 评论(18)  编辑  收藏 所属分类: 雅思作文互动及欣赏区 网摘收藏

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2006-08-20 22:12 | sweet
小新老师,你明天来苏州上课还是讲座?
可以旁听吗?
连夜赶过来,真辛苦,注意身体哦~!
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2006-08-20 22:16 | sweet
这是PRR型的题目
那RECOMMENDATIONS的部分会不会少了点呢?
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2006-08-20 23:52 | flying—flower
原本上帝的创造没有差距,可因为世上没有世外桃源,因为欲望使双脚不再停留,所以不再做圈地运动,所以“盲流”族越来越多,所以差距也就越来越大。有如电子在电流的作用下,分别朝正负极移动,最后电场中产生了无电子的gap区。
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2006-08-21 08:26 | 新东方小新
我来苏州上中级口译的课,旁听好像不太现实,但是还是很sweet。这道题我没有提供“建议”部分,大家自己去想吧
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2006-08-21 10:56 | jing
小新,我也觉得你recommendation是不是没写啊。你不是要求等分的么。
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2006-08-21 11:39 | sweet
呵呵很想念小新的雅思作文课~
你来苏州~都不能去appreciate your lesson~实在可惜~!!
恩~这个题目的“建议”部分~我自己写写看~
另外~觉得小新的看报学英语真的是很不错的一个学习方法~自己慢慢积累一些“料”~受益匪浅~谢谢:)
努力中。。。
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2006-08-21 12:36 | bluelily
bridge the gap means to reduce the difference between two things .
that's a good phrase.
thank you!
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2006-08-21 16:38 | Zeus
How to bridge the gap那一段是不是写了少了点
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2006-08-22 06:00 | SALLY
张老师,八月是不是可能以二号球为主?
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2006-08-22 09:04 | Endymion
第一次上沪江就找到这么好的博
真开心^_^
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2006-08-22 10:46 | Yz036 Smiling
首次光临
现实中的小新老师比照片里的更可爱!
以后会经常来取经的!
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2006-08-22 13:42 | 新东方小新
八月确实是以2号球为主。我一般在照片中普遍比较呆滞,真人吗 ......
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2006-08-22 16:10 | Monica
I have sympathy on the gap between the city and the countryside.In fact I am a girl came from countryside. I was brought up in a small village.And I left when I was 18 to study. Every year I went back and I seen its growth. What a pity---the growth is always a little. These years my countryside and the villagers get limited money from the government. But the growth is still small.Now I am in Dongguan since my graduation from university this summer .And I began working in a city and contributing to it with my hometown in my haeart.I am willing to go back with money or experince several years later.Because I have nothing and I ca do nothing for it right now.
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2006-08-22 17:19 | Andy Geng
...becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. 感觉这些词用的好大.

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2006-08-22 21:10 | Vincent
   小新老师,请教一下啊。   
“The lack of investment barriers the productivity and economic development and sharpens the gap between the city and the countryside.”
    这句barrier是作动词吗?barrier不是只作名词吗?还有感觉这句and特多,蛮拗口的。

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2006-08-25 19:12 | yangmin
小新老师在苏州给我们上中级口译课,我们都好开心哦!最喜欢上你的课了!小新老师真是年青有为啊,~~~~~~~~~~~~ 小新最棒!!!!
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2006-08-26 09:18 | carrie
"我一般在照片中普遍比较呆滞"---哈哈,感觉到了~~
口译摸考没能赶回来,诶,串讲是一定要去了!
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2006-09-26 21:13 | sissi
问下recommendation怎么只有最后一段?作文结构是这样把握的吗?

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