
Nowadays there is more and more TV advertisement, and there is a lot of misinformation in some of these advertisements. Some people think that consumers have the right to know the correct information and that government should restrict the contents of these advertisements. What is your opinion?
No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements and advertising exerts a tremendous influence on us. Recently, there are people who are of the opinion that public has the right to know the correct information of the advertisements and government also should restrict the contents of these advertisements. Personally I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
In the first instance, consumers have the right to know the correct information before deciding on whether to buy them. Advertisements are highly information that helps people to make choice before they go to buy what they need. If the advertisement exaggerates the products it also will persuade people into buying things, which they don’t really want.
Secondly, any misleading advertisements will lead to the marketing tricks, causing chaos in the market. Too many misleading advertisements are barrio to distinguishing between decent products or products of bad quality. His bread in truth is made with soy flour, while he advertises it as white bread. These misleading information causes illegal competition.
Last but not least, government should stipulate laws in consumers’ interests. According to the laws, advertisements must be truthful. If the advertisements mislead consumers, government can impose great fine on them to set a lesson.
In general, the role of advertisements is inevitable and undeniable. A good advertisement can be a bridge between business and consumers and helps keep business moving. So we need correct information and government also needs to restrict the contents of advertisements. Let misinformation of advertisements be far away from us.
posted on 2006-09-27 22:46
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Then,in your opinion,what is the best solution to monitoring the advertising market?
如果单纯的从经济角度看起来,这个问题就好比禁毒该不该进行下去一样!
因为禁毒,所以毒品市场产生了高风险,如此的弹性市场,在需求不变却大幅度降低供给量时带来了暴利,所以有着不法分子的疯狂行为,于是毒品屡禁不止;那么是不是就放弃了呢??没有人能够给出一个既理性又感性的答案,因为答案在乎于立场的不同!
扯远了... ...
No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements and advertising exerts a tremendous influence on us
这不是新概念三26课的第一句和其中一句(都在第一段)
Who wrote this? There a few very basic grammatical errors.
第一句话就值得商量。
1. More and More用的太滥,可以考虑更好的词,比如 a growing number of
2.电视广告叫commercials
3.就算用advertisement,也要加s
但愿这篇文章不是小新写的.
后面就不看了。
那是,沪江博客里好东西真多
小新博客是我尤为欣赏的^.*
Vicky
何必非我写,此类文章有好的当然也有一般的。我们就是要独具慧眼吗?当然大部分是我写的
这是9月份的题目啊?还是什么?
请问10月28能确定考哪个球了吗?
RRDW,这篇作文,能得几分?感觉问题不少啊,就拿第一段的几句话,谈谈自己的看法,也请小新指正。
No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements and advertising exerts a tremendous influence on us. (这句and前面是否该有个逗号?)
Recently, there are people who are of the opinion that public has the right to know the correct information of the advertisements and government also should restrict the contents of these advertisements. (public作名词表示公众,是否该加个the? 这里的restrict the contents,是不是用conduct effective control or monitoring over...更加好些?说政府应该restrict the contents总觉得有些怪怪的)
Personally I agree with this opinion for the following reasons. (本来这句挺好的,不过上一句是用recently开头的,读的时候还以为最近出现了什么值得商榷的观点,但这里又同意了,感觉是“最近刚出现这样的正确观点,于是本人马上就同意了”...)
把这段文字请公司的老外看了看,不少地方他都说"sounds strange",所以要问问小新,是不是随手把学生的文章搬过来了啊,别背黑锅哦。
告诉你吧,这是以前Mark Morgan的范文,别以为老外看老外就顺眼,咱自己看自己不也是觉得是垃圾的吗?你提的这些问题第一个没有问题,可不加逗号。public也可以不加the,recently那句表示最近有些人形成一种共识,并不是指最近出现一种观点,我同意是一直就有的,不是一时形成的。所以我觉得你还是很细心,但是看文章不妨“大度”一点,文章里总有你觉得挑刺的地方,我也觉得有些可以改进,但是总的来说每篇文章都有不少值得借鉴的地方,有“好”和所谓的“不好”,这才是一个真实的文章,这才可以避免我们千篇一律。集所长避所短,这正是我贴文章的目的。所以谢谢你的斧正,我的文章不是canon.
2006-09-29 14:26 | 新东方小新
Vicky
何必非我写,此类文章有好的当然也有一般的。我们就是要独具慧眼吗?当然大部分是我写的
2006-09-30 22:05 | 新东方小新
告诉你吧,这是以前Mark Morgan的范文
我理解为这篇是老外写的,当然老外写的也不等于金科玉律,这点上非常同意小新说的,应该多看别人写的好的地方。大概是对网络的游戏规则不是非常了解,因为没有看到是“转贴”“转自Mark Morgan”等字样,故此就想当然地以为是小新自己的大作了,sorry.
这样写可以吗?
"These misleading information causes..."
To ally
11月的球还不知道的
估计要到10月底才能知道
荒废了的英语 写文章都感觉词穷 应该怎么办呢?除了每天看杂志摘抄,还有没有什么急速提升的方法呢?
TO 幽谷若岚
14号考的是1号球
28号考什么还比较难讲