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````虽然没问题问``但是先顶一个``沙发
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忘记了!有哪位能告诉我小作文饼图"3+5"模式中的5指的是什么呢?谢谢拉
3表示第一段的3句万能句型，5表示第二段的5句比较（2涨2跌1平）
老师.....番禺路雅思班的帖子在哪里..或者国定路雅思班的班号呢- -
YQ开头的我怎么都没找到- -
谢谢小新老师.不好意思!借用下作文专区,请问一下有哪位收到GIGI老师的回邮的口语资料么?发了好几封都没有反应?急
亲爱的小新老师^_^我7月21日考雅思，正在申请剑桥大学的全奖，这两天按照您给我们列的计划复习作文呢！烦请您一定抽空评改一下我的习作，万分感谢！！^_^
学生 Sabrina
【红皮书p.72, Line Chart】
The graph illustrates the fluctuation of birth and death rates in a developing country in the first seventy years of last century. The two curves can be categorized into two stages, with the predominance of birth rate from 1900 to 1930, and the predominance of death rate from 1920 to 1970.
In the first decade of last century, the birth rate remained stable at 40 per thousand. After 1910, however, it fluctuated within a range of 40 per thousand, reaching a peak at 60 per thousand in 1920, and bottoming out at 20 per thousand 1970.
On the other hand, the death rate abated in the first thirty years of last century, surged in the fourth decade, and then crept down rather smoothly from 1940 to 1970.
【红皮书p.78, Pie Chart】
In 1970, coal accounts for the maximum portion of the total electric energy production in the US, with 47%, while nuclear the minimum, with 1%. Nearly a quarter (24%) is shared by natural gas. The remaining 28%is due to oil and hydro, with 12% and 16% respectively.
After a decade, the percentages of different energy resources al changed. Coal and nuclear increased by 4% and 10% respectively, while slight decrease could be witnessed in hydro, oil and natural gas. What is worth mentioning is that the traditional energy resources, such as coal and oil, remained morose, while nuclear, a new energy source, increased dramatically in percentage.
【白皮书p.121, Pie Chart】
East Asia accounts for comparatively a majority of the world population, with 31%. A minimum portion of 4% is shared by Sahara areas. The remaining 65% is due to industrial countries, Africa, the Middle East, and other countries, with 21&, 18%, 16% and 10% respectively.
The second chart illustrates the spending on education in various parts of the world. Industrial countries occupy a majority percentage of the total spending on education, with 84%, which tremendously out-percentages other areas’ shares. Spending on education in other parts of the world averages out at approximately 4%.
第一篇7分，第二篇5.5分，时态不对，while slight decrease could be witnessed in这句话也是错的，不可以用被动语态。没写opening和ending,同样最后一篇也是这问题，6分
greenchuchu
```难道就是那个美女``口语课上发言轰动全班的那位牛人``- -
祝你成功`` 强悍的小姑娘
亲爱的小新老师，上次的文章我已经如您的要求修正过了~麻烦您再帮我看三篇文章好吗，十分希望您能够给我提出具体的需改进提高之处，万分感谢！！！^_^
学生Sabrina
<红皮书p.73>
The statistics illustrate the revenue, in one thousand dollars, of ABC Company during a five-year period from 1996 to 2000. All trends can be categorized into 2 stages, with increase in items such as Net sales, and fluctuation in items including Net income.
Net sales soared steadily, reaching a peak at $100,943,000 in 2000 and bottoming out at $63,386,000 in 1996. Similar to Net sales, costs and expenses kept going up as well. Take selling expense as an example, it boomed within a range of nearly 6,000,000. On the contrary, Net income rose and fell almost evenly. It retrieved after 1998, averaging out at approximately 1,500,000.
What’s worth mentioning is that though the company kept enlarging costs and expenses, its Net income didn’t boom steadily correspondingly.
<剑三. Test 2. p.51>
The two curves show the same thing seen in two different ways. Both shed some light on Japan’s tourism. The bar graph illustrates the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995, while the line graph depicts Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
As is shown in the bar chart, the trend was almost uniformly upward in the decade, from nearly 5 million in 1985 to approximately 15.1 million in 1995, with an exception in 1991, when the number took a gentle downward turn and dropped to slightly below eleven million.
On the other hand, all trends revealed in the line chart can be categorized into two stages, with increase from before 1985 to 1988 as well as from 1989 to 1993, and decrease from 1988 to 1989 as well as from 1993 to 1994. Australia didn’t become one of Japanese tourists’ destinations until little earlier before 1985. Its share of Japan’s tourist market grew steeply after that, which was followed by a dramatic drop in 1989 when it descended to about 4.1%. However, it began to surge again after 1989, reaching a peak at more than 6% in 1993. The year of 1994 witnessed a slight decrease in its share, when it went down to 6%. The figure of 1995 was somehow unlisted.
<剑三. Test 4>
The two curves illustrate the unemployment rates in America and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. All trends can be categorized into 3 periods: from before March 93 to March 95, from March 95 to March 96, and from March 96 to after March 99.
In the first period, the trend was almost uniformly downward in the US, while there was a slow but steady upward tendency in Japan. The percentage of unemployment work force in the US descended from 7% right before March 93 to 5.5% in March 95, whereas the figure surged from 2.5% to approximately 3.75% in Japan.
As for the second period, the percentage in America rose and fell evenly at 5.5% from March 95 to March 96. By contrast, its counterpart in Japan accrued to slightly less that 4.5% in march 96.
Finally, the figure in the US fluctuated within a range of about 0.5% from March 96 to right after March 99, reaching a peak at 5.5% in March 96 and bottoming at nearly 5% just before March 98 as well as before March 99. On the other hand, the figure in Japan was once more almost uniformly upward, during which the figures in the US and Japan were exactly the same right after March 98, as well as just before March 99.