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老师，您上课讲的例句生词好多，我都不会拼，请多多指教，谢谢！
我的e-mail:245410702@qq.com,准备考８月１８日的ielts，现在最怕写作，那些单词好多都没见过，看起来都吓人，不知所措中~~~
小新老师，the percentage of nuclear power rocketed for approximately 10 times 这句话对不对？
hi ,
小心。 i am grace,下个月也就是8月25日考，听了你今天课上的好坏消息，感觉自己还算幸运。。。
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以后多多沟通交流，相识不易，需要缘分的哦。。呵呵。。
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小新老师帮忙改一篇作文好吗？谢谢
In 1970, the percentage of Nuclear power covered a minority of the source of energy in the U.S. , while coal occupied a comparatively majority, with 47%. 28% of the source of energy is oil and Hydro, with 12% and 16%.The remaining 24% is due to Natural Gas.
There was a magnificent increase of the nuclear power in 1980, with the percentage multiplied by 11, and we can witness the margin of coal crept up to 51% as well. In contrast, the portion of Hydro subsided by 4%, and the proportion of Natural Gas outpercentaged that in 1980 by 9%.(123 words)
Being in this class...
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小新老师我在做作业，碰到问题就顺便问了，您上课就给了一个predominance，没有其他的词可以替换这个词，当表达一条线高于另一条线时，能否再列举一些别的跟这个词一样的好词？谢谢
小新老师好,我是一个高中生,英语基础一般,最怕写作,我是这个班的一号,以后请多关照zhjjosh@hotmail.com
In the year of 1970, Coal accounted for comparatively a majority of source of energy in the US, whereas Nuclear covered a tiny proportion. Twelve percent and sixteen percent were shared by Oil and Hydro respectively. The remaining 24 percent was due to Natural Gas.
Compared to that of 1970, the portion of Coal in 1980 crept up by 4 percent, while Nuclear was tenfold. There was a decline of 9% in Natural Gas. We can also witness that the margin of Hydro edged down to twelve percent. Oil almost remained plane.
(红书 Pg.78 Pie Chart)
小新老师...麻烦你看下..
今天的作业麻烦老师给看一下，大约能得几分。
The two pie charts depict, from 1970 to 1980, the varying percentages of the fire energy sources, from which the electric energy was produced in the US.
In 1970, the coal originally made up comparatively a majority(about 47%) of the energy sources whereas the nuclear only constituted a tiny portion, with 1 percent. A further 28 percent was jointly shared by oil ang hydro. And the remaining 24 percent was due to natural gas.
You may have noticed how things had changed in those 10 years. In 1998, the percentage of coal was 51 percent,just a 4 percent increase from 1970, while the nuclear was approximately 10 times as much as that of 1970. The year of 1980 also witnessed the drop in both the share of natural gas and hydro, accompanied with percentages decreased from 24% to 15% and 16% to 12% respectively. What is worth further mentioning is that oil’s portion had remained relatively balanced as compared with that of 1970, just a minor decline by 1 percent.
好多高中mm啊，我果然老了。我是这个班里的大叔，留着小胡子，纯路过～～～读班也是～～～出国可能要30岁以后了，到时候再考。留个msn:jyn1007@hotmail.com
Amongst 347,500 Australians aged between 25 and 24 hold a degree, Social Science, Administration and Science, Maths, Computers occupied comparatively a majority of their main fields of study with 19.48%, 19.08% and 18.19% respectively whilst Architecture, Veterinary Agriculture and Other took up a tiny portion. 9.35%, 7.4% and 5.53% were shared by Engineering, Medicine and Law severally. The rest 14.76 percent was due to Education.
The proportion of Engineering was doubled when target changed into 104,800 55-69 year-olds hold a degree. Medicine and Architecture crept up within a small range. There were decreases of 5% and 8% in Administration and Veterinary Agriculture respectively. The remaining fields of study, including Social Science, Law, Education and Other almost stay unvarying.
(破书 Pg.2 Pie Chart)
All the statistics can be categorized into three stages with the equilibrium of birth and death rates in the first decade, the predominance of birth rate from 1910 to 1930 and the predominance of the death rate in the following 40 years.
Both death and birth rate almost stay steady over the period from 1900 to 1910. While death rate was keeping balanced in the meantime of 1910 and 1920, birth rate surged and subsided, reaching the summit at 60% in 1920. We can witness that birth rate edged down generally between 1930 and 1970, though it rallied from the year of 1940. Meanwhile, death rate rose and fell evenly.
(红书 Pg.72 Line Chart)
2007-07-16 00:45 | chole
牛牛是教我们的
其他呢．．．．
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没有人理我．．．．
bruce，Angel，will Chu
已阅。疲惫不堪呐。要是现在有把按摩椅，人生就完整了！
bruce
小新老师，the percentage of nuclear power rocketed for approximately 10 times 这句话对不对？
应该是by
bruce
下面是该好的版本。
In 1970, the percentage of Nuclear power covered a minority of the source of energy in the U.S. , while coal occupied comparatively a majority, with 47%. 28% of the source of energy was shared by oil and Hydro, with 12% and 16%.The remaining 24% was due to Natural Gas.
There was a magnificent increase of the nuclear power in 1980, with the percentage multiplied by 10 times, and we can witness the margin of coal crept up to 51% as well. In contrast, the portion of Hydro subsided by 4%, and the proportion of Natural Gas outpercentaged that in 1980 by 9%.(123 words)
Angel Band:6.5
will Chu Band:7
Angel
(破书 Pg.2 Pie Chart) Band:6.5
(红书 Pg.72 Line Chart) Band:5.5 时态有严重错误
小新老师辛苦了...我已经觉悟了,时态错误的严重性!!!6.5和7分的差距是不是在连接上的自然啊?
小新老师好...我是你班上的学生,听了你的写作课,总得觉得还是受益非浅的..不过有几点写作的疑问..
首先是文章模式上.我个人揣测,你教给我们的这些一套套的模式是用来应付下IELTS考试的.与真正的写好文章还是两码事.对吗? 此外,虽然说,你教给我们的招数功力确实很强,但毕竟在你手下飘过的学生就一把一把的,每人都用几乎相同的模式,会不会大大减弱攻势呢?如果,要在应试技巧的基础之上,如何让自己的文章个性鲜明呢?
另外个疑问是关于短语单词的.我看了一些分数高的例文.最大的观感是用词上的"华丽";,且不说用法是否正确,外行人总有被一下震到的感觉...我的外教则非常忌讳这点,他们普遍非常厌恶中国学生写的IELTS作文..最重要的理由就是用BIG WORDS,那些甚至外国人自己都不认得的单词中国人看起来用的得心应手.而且他们认为,用最简单的表达方式来阐述观点清晰明了最好..请问,他们的观点和你的有冲突吗?
(昨天的问题...不过怕被IGNORE,就放到这儿来了..)
糟了,忘记带作业本了.下次登陆的时候再给小新老师看我的作业吧,呵呵!
我是来申请帮小新老师整理EMAIL地址的!!!老师同意吗?
很高兴认识班级里面的所有大家,虽然坐的比较前面,和后面的同学还不是很了解,但是希望能通过这里和大家认识一下.
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This is Rico's work on page 78 of the red book.
Please modify it for me.
Thank you very much
As we can see from the 1st pie chart, in the year of 1970, Coal accounted for comparatively a majority of the source of energy in the US, with 47 percent. While Nuclear occupied a tiny portion of only 1 percent. 12 percent of the total source of energy was shared by Oil, and Hydro took up a relatively large percentage, which is 16 percent. The remaining 24 percent was due to Natural Gas.
A decade later, the proportion of Coal inceased by 4 percent. As the tiniest source of energy in 1970, Nuclear rocketed by 10 times. The year 1980 also witnessed that the percentage of Oil almost kept constant. There was a decrease of 9 percent of Natural Gas over the 10 years. And Hydro in 1970 outpercentage it in 1980 by 4 percent.
留个msn和emale吧
msn: pandazyp@hotmail.com
emale: 06882421d@polyu.edu.hk
小新老师是大好人！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！以前给牛牛发作文都不改的。
那要看职责归属好伐。
做职责范围的就叫尽责，做范围之外的才叫好，而且做职责范围之外的还要看基于什么用心。举例来说，如果你是超级性感大美女，那么你被一个男性老师批改的可能性就要大于一个男生和一个长相一般的女生。生活就是这么实在好伐。
我不了解这几位老师，只是客观评述。不要整天把好不好挂嘴边。
一个人好不好哪是那么容易判断的。
晕，小新老师是大好人！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！牛牛老师也是大好人！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
小新老师有时间的话再帮我改一篇作文谢谢,我确定地说我有了一定进步。
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages,with the predominance of birth rate from 1910 to 1932, the leading of the death rate in the following 40 years,and the equilibrium of them in the first decade of the 20th century.
It is obvious that both death rate and birth rate remained sluggish at the begining of the century, but this trend did not last long. Within the next 20 years, the birth rate rose and fell evenly , reaching an apex at 60 %。in 1920 whereas the death rate stayed comparatively stable with only a tiny reduction to 35%。. What is still worth mentioning is that compared to the fluctuation of the birth rate within a range of 10%。, there was a moderate growth of the death rate during 1930 and 1940 followed by an ebbing untill the year of 1970.
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老师我带作业本了.帮我改改吧,作文是我的弱弱项.9月就要考试了!
红书的P78
Coal covered comparatively a majority of the electric energy production,with 47%.While nuclear took up a tiny portion of the electric energy production ,with only 1%.12% and 16% of it should be shared by Oil and Hydro respectively.The remaining 24% is due to National Gas .In 1980,the percentage of Coal increased by 4%.And the percentage of Nuclear was as eleven times as it in 1970.We can witness that Hydro and National Gas fell by 4% and 9% respectively.The percentage of Oil reached almost steady.
这篇文章中的Oil什么的标题是不是在文章句子的里面也是要大写的?
红书P72
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages with the equilibritium of birth and death rates at the first ten years and the predominance of death rate from 1910 to 1930 and the predominance of birth rate from the following years .
The death rate rose and fell evenly ,reaching a summit at 50 in 1940 and buttoming out at 30 in 1930 .
The birth rate flucturated with a range of 20 to 60 ,reaching a peak at 60 in 1900 and buttoming out at 20 in 1940.It abated sightly during the first ten years and last ten years.
写这篇文章的时候就觉得句子不够用了,都是那么的几句话.好象还没有老师说的连接词之类的.
破纸P2
Administration and Social Sciences occupied comparatively a majority of post-school qualification, with 19.08%and 19.48% respevtively.While Architecture ,Veterinary and Agriculture and Other took up 6.18% all together. The remaining 55.53% is due to Education ,Science,Maths,Computers,Law,Mwdicine and Engineering .
The percentage of Engineering and Medicine rose by about 10% and 5% respectively.But the percentage of Administration and Science ,Maths ,Computers fell by approximately 8% and 5% respectively.That of Veterinary , Agriculture reached almost steady.
Q1;老师我发现这篇文章的标题之类的好长,重复又多.怎么处理?
Q2;in moderation 是怎么样的?有必要每一项都要列出来吗?The remaining 55.53% is due to Education ,Science,Maths,Computers,Law,Mwdicine and Engineering .
The percentage of Engineering and Medicine rose by about 10% and 5% respectively.
晕~刚才留错班级~~~
写作时弱项~小新老师讲得很全的~比我以前学校的IELTS专业太多了~
可是发现课下要下的功夫更多噢~~
另外问下 都有谁是8月25号 华师大考点的 冒个泡泡噢！！
阿呀呀。。。本来想把作文传上来请小新帮忙看看的。。。后来发现和某同学的基本一样。。。汗（还惊讶为什么有人帮我打好传上来~）
my email jaye_dandan@hotmail.com
对了。为什么牛牛和cain都老说你皮肤好内~~？（言语间颇具嫉妒之情~~嗯嗯~）
又来了，这次是红色书的Page 72
麻烦老师看下啦。。。
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages, with equilibrium of birth and death rage from 1900 to 1920, predominance of bitth rate from 1910 to 1930 and predominace of death rate from 1930 to 1970.
The birth rate almost stayed unvarying during 1900 and 1910. In the following decade, it surged damatically and reached a culmination of approximately 60 per thousand in the year of 1920. From then on the birth rate began to ebb varially. There was a subtly boom from 1940 to 1950. And it crept down steadily during the last score.
小新老师你好， 再次麻烦你帮我看下这篇作文，大约能得几分。
These two curves in the graph illustrates the variations of birth rate and death rate from year 1900 to 1970 in a development country.
All trends can be categorized into 3 stages with the equilibrium reached during 1900 to 1910, the predominance of birth rate and death rate from 1910 to 1930 and 1930 to 1970 respectively.
Both the death rate and birth rate were roughly constant at 40 percent in the first stage. What followed was the creeping down of death rate from 40% to 35%, while its counterpart,the birth rate, fluctuated within a range of 20% in period 1910 to 1930, reaching its summit at somewhere around 60%. In the following stage from 1930 to 1970, we can witness a significant rise of death rate from 35% to 50%, which had been followed by a gradual fall since 1940. And the general direction of birth rate was downward, though there were a few ups and downs in beween.
我的作业，老师帮忙改改，另外我家里只能用猫上网，太可怜了。大家同情同情。。。
雅思写作高分作文
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图表作文范例
In the age of 25-34,Administration,Social Science and Arts,Science and Maths and Computers cover comparatively a majority of the Australian main fields of study,with 19.08%,19.48% and 18.19% respectively while Veterinary and Agriculture,Architecture,Other occupies a minority with 6.18%.Nearly a quarter of fields of study are shared by Medicine,Engineering,Law.The remaining 14.76% is due to Education.
In the age of 55-69,the percentage of Engineering is twice times of before.There is also an increase of 0.94% in Social Science and Arts.Oppositely,the percentage of Science,Maths and Computers creeps down to 10.11%.We can witness a ebb decrease in the percentage of Education by 1.61%.Veterinary and Agriculture almost remain stable at 2%.
其中Science and Maths and Computers为同一组，如何把它们都表述出来？感觉用3个AND不好，还有这几篇文章都太过相似了，有没有什么较好的办法写出每篇的个性来？
雅思写作P78
In the year of 1970,Coal covered comparatively a majority of Source of Energy in US,with 47%,while Nuclear occupied a minority with 1%.Nearly a quarter of it was shared by Oil and Hydro altogether.The remaining a quarter was due to Naural Gas.
In 1980,the percentage of Nuclear soared by 10 times.There is an increase of 4% in Coal..We can witness a decrease in percentage of Hydro by 4%.The percentage of Natural Gas subsided to 15%.Oil almost remain stable at 11%.
顺带留个E-MAIL和MSN，不过课程结束前都用猫，不可能用它了。
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小新，请你再看看这篇作业，我和楼上有同样的问题，“其中Science and Maths and Computers为同一组，如何把它们都表述出来？感觉用3个AND不好”
These two pie charts describe the discrepancies of post-school qualification between Australians within two different age groups.
The number of Australians aged between 25 and 34 holding a degree amounts to 347500. Administration and social sciences&arts account for comparatively a majority of those main fields of study, with respectively 19.08% and 19.48%. An approximate one third of those fields have been jointly shared by education(14.76%) and science、maths and computers(18.19%). The remaining proportion are due to veterinary and agriculture(2.10%),engineering(9.35%), architecture(1.84%), medicine(7.4%) , law(5.3%)and others(2.24%).
Things are noticeably different for those aged between 55 and 69, of whom the number has nearly tripled that of their younger counterparts. The percentages of administration, education, law, science, maths and computers for the older are all lower, whereas comparatively more preference has been given to engineering(19.27%), architecture(2.96%), medicine(11.35%), and other fields(2.48%), with engineering drawing approximately 10% more attention. What is also worth our heed is that the proportions of veterinary and agriculture for those two age groups are almost equivalent to each other.
今天正好也在复习小作文,发挥一下互帮互助的精神.
座位102/今夜推倒你 座位30
首先你们的字数没满,要注意.不要完全依赖套句.
will Chu
The two curves in the graph illustrate the variations of birth rate and death rate from 1900 to 1970 in a development country.
All trends can be categorized into 3 stages, with the equilibrium reached between 1900 and 1910, the predominance of birth rate from 1910 to 1930 and of death rate from the following years.
Both the death rate and birth rate were roughly constant at 40 per thousand in the first stage. What followed was the creeping down of death rate from 40 per thousand to 35 per thousand, while its counterpart fluctuated within a range of 20 per thousand between 1910 and 1930, reaching the summit of 60 per thousand in 1920. In the following stage, we can witness a signifant rise of death rate from 35 per thousand to 50 per thousand from 1930 to 1940, which,since 1940, had been followed by a gradual fall. And the general direction of birth rate was downward, though there were a few ups and downs．
语法错误很多，如果是考场作文的话，老外马上会对你的作文兴趣大减．而且当中有些表述不清晰，很乱．我第一遍看下来脑子里没有很顺利地浮现出红皮上的图．所以对其中某些句子稍稍做了点修改．
其实,我个人觉得这篇书上范文的思路更容易上手些,而且比较清晰.小新的思路对于一部分同学来说,写作时稍有不慎就很容易让人觉得象一团乱麻.
大家一起来改改别人的作文呢!会发现很多自己也常犯的问题的.
哎,其实满耗神的.....要准备一打力保健先~~~~
red book P78
In 1970, over a quarter of the major sources of energy in the US was Oil and Hydro with 12% and 16% respectively. In addition, Coal covered comparatively a majority of the major energy sources with 47%, while Nuclear occupied a minority with 1%. The remaining 24% was due to Natural Gas.
In the year of 1980, Oil almost remained stable at nearly 12%. Moreover, the percentage of Coal crept up by 4%, and Nuclear rocketed by 10 times. However, we can witness that the portion of Hydro ebbed by 4%. At the same time, there was a dramatical decrease in the margin of Natural Gas by approximately 10%.
麻烦小新老师看一下，辛苦了。
是班上同学,这个是我的地址:ljfyc@hotmail.com
顺便说下，小新上课是真好，早在同学这里就听说过你的大名了（本来想用您的，但是感觉那样你会很老，就算了，是很尊敬你的哦）
请小新老师帮我批改一下我的这个Body part on the page of 78 in the red book的小作文,谢谢
There was nearly a quarter of the electric energy production by the Natural Gas. Coal occupied comparatively a major soure of energy in the US in the year of 1970, with 47 percent. Futheremore, the Oil and Hydro covered 12% and 16% respectively. In addition, the minimally energy output was in the charge of Nuclear, which was accounted for 0ne percent.
After a decade, the percentage of Nuclear rose maximally , which was by 10% to 11%. Also, there was an increasing of 4% in Coal, accounting for 51%. On the other ahnd, we can witness to slowed up a litte on the sorces of Oil, Hydro and Nutual Gas, with 11%, 12% and 15% respectively.
留个信箱号吧 hulu12@126.com
小新和30辛苦了，如果有啥资料的话，麻烦发下了
作文就不留了～～
Kisty
请小新老师帮我批改一下我的这个Body part on the page of 78 in the red book的小作文,谢谢
你的错误较多，下面是修改后的文章。由于时间所限，大家可以互相批改，我会尽全力改的，只有我有时间，这篇大家可以看看。
There was nearly a quarter of the electric energy production shared by Natural Gas. Coal occupied comparatively a major soure of energy in the US in the year of 1970, with 47 percent. Futheremore, the Oil and Hydro covered 12% and 16% respectively. In addition, the minimally energy output was due to Nuclear, which accounted for 0ne percent.
After a decade, the percentage of Nuclear rose dramatically by 10%. Also, there was an increase of 4% in Coal, accounting for 51%. On the other ahnd, we can witness a decrease in Oil, Hydro and Nutual Gas, with 11%, 12% and 15% respectively.
will Chu
今天的作业麻烦老师给看一下，大约能得几分。
The two pie charts depict, from 1970 to 1980, the varying percentages of the fire energy sources, from which the electric energy was produced in the US.
In 1970, the coal originally made up comparatively a majority(about 47%) of the energy sources whereas the nuclear only constituted a tiny portion, with 1 percent. A further 28 percent was jointly shared by oil ang hydro. And the remaining 24 percent was due to natural gas.
You may have noticed how things had changed in 10 years. In 1980, the percentage of coal was 51 percent,just a 4 percent increase from 1970, while the nuclear was approximately 10 times as much as that of 1970. The year of 1980 also witnessed the drop in both the share of natural gas and hydro, accompanied with percentages decreased from 24% to 15% and 16% to 12% respectively. What is worth further mentioning is that oil’s portion had remained relatively balanced as compared with that of 1970, just a minor decline by 1 percent.
评语：小地方我已经改过，可以打7分，只得借鉴。
Rico
又来了，这次是红色书的Page 72
麻烦老师看下啦。。。
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages, with equilibrium of birth and death rage from 1900 to 1920, predominance of bitth rate from 1910 to 1930 and predominace of death rate from 1930 to 1970.
The birth rate almost stayed unvarying during 1900 and 1910. In the following decade, it surged damatically and reached a culmination of approximately 60 per thousand in the year of 1920. From then on， the birth rate began to ebb. There was a subtle boom from 1940 to 1950. And it crept down steadily during the last score.
写得不错，打6.5分
偶来交作业，呵呵：
破书page2:
The two pie charts showed the differences between two groups of Australians (aged 25-34 and 55-69) in terms of their Post-School Qualifications.
The first chart described the younger group. For this group, Science, Maths, Computers covered comparatively a majority of their main fields of study, with 19.48%, 19.08% and 18.19% respectively while Architecture, on the other hand took up a minority , only 1.84%. Engineering, Medicine and Law was out percentage of Architecture by 20.44%. The remining 4.34% was due to the Veterinary, Agriculture and other fields.
The scale of the younger group is three times as big as the elder one, and there did have some differences in terms of their Post-School Qualifications. For example, Social Sciences and Engineering in the elder group accounted for relatively a large portion, with 39.69%. Administration and Scineces, Maths, Computers took up small margins of their main study fields, with 14.98%and 10.11% respectively, and were both lower than the younger group. But more people in this group had the post-school qualifications in Medicine. The other datas were nearly the same.
这个句型（）covered comparatively a majority of（）,with...后面加百分数啊必须先加with,另外a majority 后面的of 短语可以不要么
偶的e-mail:
gemini_eilien@126.com
小新老师，你一不小心就漏了我的了。。。。帮我批一下吧，谢谢。
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages,with the predominance of birth rate from 1910 to 1932, the leading of the death rate in the following 40 years,and the equilibrium of them in the first decade of the 20th century.
It is obvious that both death rate and birth rate remained sluggish at the begining of the century, but this trend did not last long. Within the next 20 years, the birth rate rose and fell evenly , reaching an apex at 60 %。in 1920 whereas the death rate stayed comparatively stable with only a tiny reduction to 35%。. What is still worth mentioning is that compared to the fluctuation of the birth rate within a range of 10%。, there was a moderate growth of the death rate during 1930 and 1940 followed by an ebbing untill the year of 1970.
小新老师。您好！
我9月考雅思，其他还好，就写作太差了。我以前学习忽视语法，尽管词汇量还可以，但句式不会用。
您的小作文里面很多都很有用的，如何才能短期内提高语法和句式变化？我以后写的文章也请您批改。谢谢！
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请小新老师再帮我改一下这篇曲线图小作文，在红书的72页，谢谢。
All the statistics can be categorized into three stages with the equilibrium of birth and death rate from 1900 to 1905, the popularity of birth rate during 1905 and 1930, and the popularity of the death rate between 1930 and 1970. Exactly, the birth rate rose and fell evenly during the year of 1905 and 1930, reaching a peak of 60 million in 1920. While the death rate among these years crept down by 10 millions.
On the other hand, since 1930, the death rate began to rise and fall gently, reaching an apex of 50 millions in year 1940. In contrast, the birth rate decreased sharply, which rose and fell moderately, reaching a vertex at 30 millions in 1950 and bottoming at 20 millions in 1940.
(红书 Pg. 76)
As is revealed in the table of proportion of top ten sources of stress in CEOs’ lives, there were different perceptions of CEO and their spouses or partners on these issues.
One factor that was comparatively a majority of all the sources both CEO and their spouses thought producing lots of pressure was Time pressures and deadlines, which CEO and their spouses accounted for 52% and 60% respectively. A quarter of CEO and nearly one of four spouses or partners reached an agreement, believing that Interpersonal relations were cause of pressures. Besides, Taking work home and Inadequately trained subordinates were both factors of stress which CEO and spouses shared similar ideas, though they only took up comparatively a tiny portions. Amongst those top ten rated sources, men and women took really different opinions on the remaining five factors. The biggest disagreement occurred on Demands of work on private life. Nearly half of CEO regarded it as a big reason for pressures, whilst only about one fifths of their spouses or partner thought so. Similarly, 45% of CEO argued in favor of Demands of work on relationship with family bringing pressure. Compared to them, only 29% were shared by spouses on this item. Conversely, what spouses concerned about more, such as Work-related travel (57%), Work overload (62%), Long working hours (62%) were not paid attentions by most of men.
What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentage of both CEO and their spouses or partners add up to above 100 percent considerably, it indicates that they chose several sources of pressure.
补充讲义P7
As is shown in the table, the percentages of the average family expenditure in Britain varied dramatically from 1967 to 1996.
All the trends can be categories into 4 groups with falling in items such as Food, rising in items including Housing, fluctuating in Household goods and services and stabilization in Other items. The general trend of Household goods and services undulated comparatively dramatically, reaching a peak at 14% in 1996 and bottoming out at 7% in 1977. This was the similar case with the trend of Recreation, entertainment and education, which was opposite with the trend of Tobacco. Food crept down smoothly, averaging out at nearly 20%. Alcoholic drink reached a plateau at 7% and subsided to 4%. So did Fuel, light and power. Other goods and services ebbed within a range of 6%. Other items, not making its debut until 1977, remained stable.
What is worth mentioning is that people spend more expenditure on Recreation, entertainment and education, which means people begin to pay more attention to the mental life.
有两个问题要请教小新老师，1，用于类比方法的时候，前一句是不是要运用到天龙八部的词汇把趋势表示出来，然后后一句再用一句SO DID……这样做啊？
2，不知道我最后一段总结的对不对，实在想不出什么了……
谢谢小新老师。
麻烦老师看一下...
As is displayed in two bar charts respectively, the proportions of people employed in various industries fluctuated in Britain and China, from 1970 to 2000. The tables below illustrated the specific statistics for each industry in Britain and China respectively.
All trends can be categorized into three groups with risings of agriculture in Britain, Computer Industry, Finance in China, fluctuating of Computer Industry, Finance in Britain, Manual Labour in both countries and Falling of Agriculture and Manual Labour in China.
In Britain, the percentage of Agriculture crept up, averaging out at nearly 20%. In the same period of time, Finance rose and fell evenly within a small range of 10%. The biggest difference occurred in Manual, which slumped, reaching a summit at 61% in 1970, hitting a trough at 20% in 1990 followed by rallying in 2000. On the contrary, Finance fluctuated just in an opposite way.
Different from Britain, Agriculture in China subsided within a range of 30%, which still occupied a majority of the total except for the year of 1970. While, Computer Industry rose considerably, reaching a peak at 40% in 2000 and bottoming out at 5% in 1970. Manual Labour varied, averaging out approximately at 30% and Finance is the opposite case with it.
From the perspective of employment, industries which rose belong to booming industries. Besides, what is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages in 1970 in Britain and 1970, 1980 in China added up above 100%, it suggested that some people were engaged in not only one industries. Conversely, the overall percentages in 1980 and 2000 in Britain added up below 100% which indicated that some people were engaged other industries unlisted.
(破纸 Pg.9)
As is revealed in the tables of the average scores marked by boys and girls in different ages throughout several school subjects respectively, there were different perceptions on each subject between boys and girls, also among different ages.
For boys, Sports always accounted for highest marks in all the ages and as the age growing, the mark increased gently. Science was also marked high, but it rose and fell slightly with 74% in the age of 13 and 70% in the age of 7. The average percentage marks of Geography surged and subsided, reaching a peak with 70% in 13 years old bottoming out at 63% when boys were 6 years younger. Science was similar with the trend of Geography. There was a considerable decreasing of Languages which indicated boys’ interests towards it crept down as they growing.
Contrary to boys, the marks of Languages scored by girls soared within a comparatively large range of 13% whilst, Sports decreased from 65% in the age of seven to 60% in the age of 15. Both Maths and Science fluctuated, bottoming out with 64% and 70% respectively in age 13, but relying with 68% and 72% in age 15 respectively. The mark of Geography went up and down evenly within a tiny range of 2%.
According to the tables, we can witness that marks in various subjects scored by children differed as they getting older and there were obvious differences between girls and boys on their changing marks of Languages and Sports.
（白书 Pg. 103）
老师,你好象漏了我的.虽然写的很不好,但是也希望老师看看.谢谢啦
老师，讲座的PPT你有贴上去吗，我怎么没有找到呢？？
老师，你说会上传的别忘了哦，我可是很信任你有许多只记了大概。
谢谢啦
老师，你的ppt多放两天吧，因为今天出去旅游了，要三四天才能回来。谢谢。
你的课真的受益非浅。只希望8月25日不要考流程图。呜呜。
小新老师课上的文档贴在哪了？学生愚钝。。没有找到俄...
小新老师：我在写小作文的开头的时候遇到问题，我知道就是题目的改写，但是写起来总不是那么得心应手。还有，开头中要写出数据的形式，时间，图表的类型，还有什么。
老师别忘了批哦...虽然你很辛苦...别忘了哦...别忽略啊...
小新老师，TASK2 处女作，严格控制在40分钟内完成的，还没有修改过，先发上来给你看下吧。
REQUEST：
far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out. people today have noticed this problem, but few actions are taken, why do you think people do little about it, and what do you suggest to solve this problem.
essay:
it is suggested that people have been aware of the issue--lack of preservation for endangered spieces, animals and plants, but as you see , they placed little efforts to cope with the problem.despite the versatility and intricacy of instruments , i would poreover some of the most striking ones and offer alternatives afterwards.
one of the major reasons , causing people's inocence of protecting animals, is that the government did not function well as an educator, arosing people's initiative in sheilding wild animals, which led to the consequence that people do not know their responsibility to prevent animals from dangers, and specific knowledge in guarding them. what is equally important as the reason mentioned above is that media did not meet our satisfaction to inform the mass of the emergency which is crutial in arousing people's conciousness to keep animals safe.
in spite of the serious problem, measure leading to profound improvement still can be taken. owning to the fact that funds are insufficient in some developing countries, developed countries or international organizations should shoulder more burden -- finacing them in order to capacitate them to accompolish the protection of animals. at the same time, education in telling people the way to make animals harboured ought to be focused on, thus resulting in people's better awareness in the camouflage of our planet's cutest creatures.
it is belived by me that if correct actions are taken to preserve animals, any kind of them will be far away from extinction forever
结尾完全写不来，时间也不够了，小新老师教教怎么写结尾吧，你上课结尾说的有点空洞了。没有举实例。
小新老师,我交作业来了.赶快批呀!
白皮书P93 小作文 一个饼图
The group of pie tables illustrates population percentagemade up by six areas and their education expenditure.And according to the figures ,there is ill-proporationed between them .
It is evident that Sara areas and Middle East took up over two thirds of the world population, amouting to 27% and 45% respectively.However, when it comes to the spendong on education ,these two areas just covered a tiny portion of thee whole ,with 5% all together.On the contrary ,making up 5% of the world population,Industrial countries spent the most om the education among the six areas, providing 80%of Spending .
The last three areas were Africa,East Asia and other countries ,which constituted 15%,13%and 15%of the percentage of the world population respectively.And they shared 3%,6%and 2%of Spending on the education.
we can see the number of the population is just one of the factors affecting spending on the education
小新老师，帮我打下分数吧，我都不知道现在是什么水平，我９月８号考试啦
我自己修改了一下小新老师，你可以给我打个分吗？
REQUEST：
far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out. people today have noticed this problem, but few actions are taken, why do you think people do little about it, and what do you suggest to solve this problem.
ESSAY:
It is manifest that people have already been aware of the problem-- the lack of preservation for endangered spieces, animals and plants, but as you see , they placed few efforts to cope with the problem.Despite the versatility and intricacy of instruments , I would pore over some of the most striking ones and offer alternatives afterwards.
One of the major reasons , in rich countries, causing folk's ignorance of protecting beasts, is that the government did not function well as an educator, arosing their initiative in shielding wild animals, which led to the consequence that people did not realize their responsibility for animals's security , and had specific knowledge of guarding them properly. What is equally important as the reason mentioned above is that media did not meet our satisfaction of informing the masses of the emergency of keeping creeping things safe, which was also crutial in stimulating their almost lost conciousness.
But, when it comes to underprivileged societies, things get totally different and complicated.Authorities are facing a dilemma , availability for life-saving food or safeguarding the lower animals, because of poor living conditions of the citizens. That is to say, they have financial problems.
In spite of the serious issue, measures leading to profound improvement can still be taken. Owning to the fact that in some developing countries, funds are tremendously insufficient, developed countries or international organizations should shoulder a greater burden -- finacing them in order to capacitate them to accompolish the task of establishing preservations for rare animals. At the same time, education of instructing the public how to make animals harboured ought to be focused on in developed countries, thus resulting in crowd's better awareness of the immediate protection of our planet's cutest creatures.
It is delectable that more and more people are getting to know the significance os preserving imperiled animals although few actions have been taken , but if correct and instantaneous steps are taken , I believe any kind of animals will be far away from extintion forever.
(336words)
我自己修改了一下小新老师，你可以给我打个分吗？ 有点小瑕疵。。。
REQUEST：
far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out. people today have noticed this problem, but few actions are taken, why do you think people do little about it, and what do you suggest to solve this problem.
ESSAY:
It is manifest that people have already been aware of the problem-- the lack of preservation for endangered spieces, animals and plants, but as you see , they placed few efforts to cope with the problem.Despite the versatility and intricacy of instruments , I would pore over some of the most striking ones and offer alternatives afterwards.
One of the major reasons , in rich countries, causing folk's ignorance of protecting beasts, is that the government did not function well as an educator, arosing their initiative in shielding wild animals, which led to the consequence that people did not realize their responsibility for animals's security , and have specific knowledge of guarding them properly. What is equally important as the reason mentioned above is that media did not meet our satisfaction of informing the masses of the emergency of keeping creeping things safe, which was also crutial in stimulating their almost lost conciousness.
But, when it comes to underprivileged societies, things get totally different and complicated.Authorities were facing a dilemma , availability for life-saving food or safeguarding the lower animals, because of poor living conditions of the citizens. That is to say, they have financial problems.
In spite of the serious issue, measures leading to profound improvement can still be taken. Owning to the fact that in some developing countries, funds are tremendously insufficient, developed countries or international organizations should shoulder a greater burden -- finacing them in order to capacitate them to accompolish the task of establishing preservations for rare animals. At the same time, education of instructing the public how to make animals harboured ought to be focused on in developed countries, thus resulting in crowd's better awareness of the immediate protection of our planet's cutest creatures.
It is delectable that more and more people are getting to know the significance of preserving imperiled animals although few actions have been taken , but if correct and instantaneous steps are taken , I believe any kind of animals will be far away from extintion forever.
(336words)
老师 帮我看看吧 辛苦你拉
The two pie charts illustrate the varying percentages of activities that European people tend to spend in their leisure time.
As can be seen from the first graph, watching TV accounted for comparatively a majority of the whole time, with approximately 32% whereas the proportion of dining out occupied in the neighborhood of 23%. In relation to daily communication, a further margin of leisure time was shared by taking with friend and family, with 21% and 18% respectively. The remaining 6% was due to other activities.
Judging from the latter chart, we witness immense changes in people’s allocating their leisure time in Europe, resulting from the emergence of computer game, making its debut with a huge portion of 27%. Subsequently, taking with friend registered a minor increase by 3% but still had predominance over going to restaurant which receded to its low ebb over time. What is worth mentioning is that there was also a substantial drop in the percentage of taking with family, accompanied by the decline of 4% in other activities. Consequently, this trend was echoed by a subtle decrease in terms of watching TV, with 2% only.
老师 还有一篇line chart 也麻烦帮我看看吧 谢谢！
The line chart depicts the undulation of birth and death rates in the first seventy years of last century in a developing country.
The overall trend of death rate rose and fell evenly which can be categorized into two stages, with declining from 1900 to 1930, 1940 to 1970 and growing from 1930 to 1940. We witness that the death rate abated by a minor 10 per thousand ranging from the year 1900 to 1930, followed by approximately 10 per thousand soaring in next decade. Then this rally was echoed by a progressively decrease during 1940 and 1970.
On the other hand, the graph birth rate presents us a more volatile situation which fell into four types, with rising from 1910 to 1920, falling from 1920 to 1940, vacillating from 1940 to 1970 and staying unvarying from 1900 to 1910. Within the first decade, it was equivalent to the rate of death, remaining plane at nearly 40. Subsequently, the birth rate surged and subsided, reaching an apex at 60 and bottoming out at roughly 20. From then on, the birth rate fluctuated evenly over which the death rate always had predominance.
小新老师 帮我改下作文吧 811就考了
红书P68
As is illustrated in line charts respectively, the mount of defense spending and it percent of GNP in USA is varied during 1956 and after 1975.
The trend of the first chart can be categorized into 3 stages, with rising and falling from 1956 to about 1965 and the first five years of 1970s, rising sharply between 1965 and 1970. As we know the money spending on the defense fluctuated between 1956 and around 1965, reaching an apex at 50 billion dollars, hitting the trough at approximate 37 billion dollars. Then it soared within range of around 35dollars at the following five years. While it wavered evenly 197