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今天早晨上班等电梯的时候，碰到一MM在找上16F的电梯，我问她找哪个公司，她说到新东方上课，我怀疑自己听错了！拿她的听课证过来一看，真的是新东方！心中一阵狂喜！热心的告诉MM，这里是西16F，她上课的地方在东16F。没想到可以和新东方那么近距离的接触，开心哦！今天中午就来参观！小新老师也会来上课吧？我已经考好IELTS了，现在在等去加的移民，但是想在去之前，继续提高英语，请问小新老师，有什么课可以推荐吗？
呵呵，小新，你的粉丝连置地广场都遍布了啊！哈哈，那我就要挂你的大头照出去招生罗！哇哈哈！我们的口号：天天都要涨停板：）
yo~~~
呵呵~
来踩一下看看 ^~^
哦，我就是想去LSE的那个学生啦。
留个邮箱：hyacinth890330@hotmail.com
我们群好像人气不是那么旺呃...=3='...
明天再来咯！~
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小新老师：
我想问一下，在写pie chart的时候，在不同句型之间要不要加一些expressions like:moreover,furthermore, in addition 之类的？否则在句与句之间不会显得很突兀吗？
小新老师:如果有pie chart &line graph mix together 的话,应该怎么写?
老师~~我想问一下剑5 TEST1 的TASK1这个图的ALL THE TRENDS怎么写?还有就是饼图里面的2号句型是用于极端最高跟最低的数据,最高数据就用COMPARATIVELY THE MOJORITY OF 写但是最低比如只有1%这个怎么用这个句型呢?急盼回复!
邮箱: rae_li1212@hotmail.com
小新老师： 你能不能给我们vip同学你的邮箱地址？这样我们把文章发给你，就不会被立刻废掉了．．．我的邮箱：zou_IVY@hotmail.com
嗯...我就献丑了...=P
雅思写作书P78
As is displayed in the two pie charts respectively, the percentages of five kinds of energy production varied from 1970 to 1980.
Coal covered comparatively a large portion of the energy production is the US, with 47 percent while Nuclear accounted for a tiny percentage of the energy in the US, with only 1 percent in 1970. Meanwhile 12 percent and 16 percent of the energy were shared by Oil and Hydro respectively. The remaining 24 percent of the energy was due to Natural Gas.
The year of 1980 witnessed and increase of 4 percent in Coal and a soar of 10 times as 10 years before in Nuclear while the percentage of Hydro and Natural Gas dropped to 12 percent and 15 percent respectively. Although the production four types of energy mentioned above changed, Oil’s remained constant .
What is worth mentioning is that the new source of energy especially Nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, still dominant, reached the bottleneck.
呵呵,老师，我“偷”了你的ending~ 真是个好ending~~~XD
那就请大家尽情“批判”吧^^
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我也来贴了....有两篇,老师你可以把要修改的内容发到我的邮箱,谢谢:zou_IVY@hotmil.com
红书 p71
As is shown in the graph, the figure of TV licences and cinema admissions behave contrarily.
All the statistics can be categorized into two stages with popularity of cinema admissions from 1957 to 1960 and the popularity of TV licences from 1960 to 1974.During the first stage, the inclination of TV licences slumped from the summit of 950 millions people in 1950 to the base of 500 millions in 1960. Meanwhile, there was a surge of the cinema, rising gradually and moderately from less than 400 millions to 500 millions. At the second stage, the trend of TV licences decreased comparatively sharply than its first stage, subsiding from 500 millions in 1960 to 1972 and crept down until 1974 with the number of 90 millions. However, there was still a surge in the widespread of the TV with negligible fluctuation, reaching a zenith at 950 millions in 1974.
What is worth mentioning is that no matter how the numbers varied, both two lines had a peak at 950 millions people.
红书 p72
As is revealed in the graph, the two lines of birth and death rates fluctuated in the first seventy years of last century in a developing country.
All the statistics can be categorized into 2 stages with the predominance of birth rate from 1900 to 1932 and the predominance of death rate from 1932 to 1970. Both the death rate and the birth rate were in an equilibrium position during the first decade of the twentieth century with the rate of 40 per thousand. However, the birth rate began to rise and fall evenly from 1910 to 1932 within a range of 0.1 %, reaching a summit at 0.6 %. While the death rate ebbed to 0.3%. Over the period from 1932 to 1970, there was a surge of the widespread of the death rate, reaching a zenith at roughly 0.5% followed by decreasing gradually and comparatively sharply until 1970 with the percentage of 0.3. In the mean time, the inclination of birth rate subsided to 0.2% in 1940 and rose and fell symmetrically until 1970.
再接再厉~再接再厉~
强化讲义P48/
As is revealed in the tables , the number of the visits abroad by UK residents and reasons of their visits differed from 1994 to 1998.
In the first table, all the trends can be categorized into 2 groups with rising in Business and fluctuating in other items, such as Holiday. Visits abroad by UK residents for business increased progressively within a range of approximately 800.The general trend of the visits for Holiday rose comparatively dramatically, reaching a summit at 20700 in 1998 and bottoming out at 14898 in 1995, and this is the similar bearing with the statistics of Total. Visits abroad by UK residents for Other reasons rose and fell evenly, averaging out at about 1000. Meanwhile Visits to friends and relatives vacillated within a range of about 2000.
According to the second table, the number of visits abroad by UK residents for Western Europe, North American and Other areas all increased respectively in general. Visits for Western Europe had a lion’s share among these reasons, reaching a peak at 24519 in 1998 and hitting a trough at 18994 in 1995.This is the similar case with Other areas. The number of visits for North America doubled.
From the tables it can be safely concluded that most of the UK residents went to Western Europe for their holidays during the period of 1994 to 1998
谢谢小新老师咯^^
今天就这样啦~
偶去拼搏reading咯~
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刘文诗(Chloe)
再接再厉~再接再厉~
强化讲义P48/
As is revealed in the tables , the number of the visits abroad by UK residents and reasons of their visits differed from 1994 to 1998.
In the first table, all the trends can be categorized into 2 groups with rising in Business and fluctuating in other items, such as Holiday. Visits abroad by UK residents for business increased progressively within a range of approximately 800.The general trend of the visits for Holiday rose comparatively dramatically, reaching a summit at 20700 in 1998 and bottoming out at 14898 in 1995, and this is the similar bearing with the statistics of Total. Visits abroad by UK residents for Other reasons rose and fell evenly, averaging out at about 1000. Meanwhile Visits to friends and relatives vacillated within a range of about 2000.
According to the second table, the number of visits abroad by UK residents for Western Europe, North American and Other areas all increased respectively in general. Visits for Western Europe had a lion’s share among these reasons, reaching a peak at 24519 in 1998 and hitting a trough at 18994 in 1995.This is the similar case with Other areas. The number of visits for North America doubled.
From the tables it can be safely concluded that most of the UK residents went to Western Europe for their holidays during the period of 1994 to 1998
谢谢小新老师咯^^
Band:6.5
老师能不能说一下不足之处?
谢谢^^
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In 1970,Carol covered comparatively a majority of the total costs with 40 percent and Nuclear covered a minority of the total costs with 1 percent.28 percent of the electric energy production should be shared by the Oil and the Hydro.The remaining 24 percentis due to the Nature Gas.
In 1980,the percentage of Coal increased to 51%.Nuclear increased by the times.Hydro and Nature Gas decreased.Hydro fell down from 16%in 1970 to 12% in 1980.The percentage of Nature Gas decread to 15%.Oil almost remained stable at rearly 11%.
我是这个“悦”，可不要再记错成“吴越人家”！
好久不见了老师，来帖两篇文章，修改后请发到我的ｅ－ｍａｉｌ：joy__woo@hotmail.com 谢谢！
As is shown in the chats, the percentage of the American electric energy production varied dramatically from 1970 to 1980.The energy source is divided into five major parts as follows: Coal, Natural Gas, Hydro, Oil and Nuclear.
According to the first chat, Coal covered comparatively a majority of the electric energy production, with 47% in 1970.While,1% was shared by Nuclear ,which had the smallest proportion. Natural Gas and Hydro took up two fifth of the chart, at 24% and 16% respectively. The remaining 12 percentage was due to Oil.
However, in 1980, the situation was differed. Coal in that year outpercentage its counterpart by 4%, Whereas , there was an decrease of 9% in Natural Gas. Also, the proportion of Hydro declined to 12%.Oil almost remained stable at nearly 11%.Becides, it should be noted that Nuclear was 11 times that of 1970.
What is worth mentioning is that the new source of energy especially Nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, still dominant, reached the bottleneck.
As is revealed in the graph, the number of TV licences and cinema admissions fluctuated dramatically between 1957 and 1974.
All statistics can be categorized into two stages with the popularity of cinema from 1957 to 1960 and the popularity of TV after the year of 1960 to 1974.During the first stage, there was a slump in the number of cinema admissions, when about 950 million people went to cinema in1957,whereas,in 1960,the figure fell sharply at about 500 million .Meanwhile ,we could witness that 380 million TV licences surge to 500 million in this period.After 1960,the cinema licences figure declined comparatively gently . However, the number kept on ebbing, hitting a trough at 90 million in 1974.In contract, the number of TV licences boomed, reaching a summit at 950 million in the same year.
To sum up ， people preferred going to cinema rather than watch TV before 1960,but the situation changed since then in the period involved
These two pie charts shou the differences between two groups of Australians in terms of their post-school qualifications.
Administration Social sciences and science cover comparatively a majority of the total costs wihe 19.08 percent,19.48 percent and 18.19 percent.The minorty of Australians in terms of their post-school qualifications should be shared by the veterinary,Architecture and other. The remaining 37 percent is in the charge of the Education Law,medicine and Engineering.
The second pie chart shows the 55-59 yeat-olds post-school qualifications.Social Sciences,Education and Veterinary Agriculture seem to be the same as the first pie chart The percentage of Administration decreases to 14.98percent.There is a decrease of 3.95 percent in medicine,Science ,Maths is decreased two times. The remaining percentage are all increased.
老师，你有没有不这么公开的联络方式啊 例如MSN QQ 什么的 这样我们写的破文章就不用这么公开了 太丢人了
These two pie charts show the differences between two groups of Australians in terms of their post-school qualifications.
Administration Social sciences and science cover comparatively a majority of the total costs wihe 19.08 percent,19.48 percent and 18.19 percent respectively.The minorty of Australians in terms of their post-school qualifications should be shared by the veterinary,Architecture and other. The remaining 37 percent is due to the Education Law,medicine and Engineering.
The second pie chart shows the 55-59 yeat-olds post-school qualifications.Social Sciences,Education and Veterinary Agriculture seem to be the same as the first pie chart The percentage of Administration decreases to 14.98percent.There is a decrease of 3.95 percent in medicine,Science ,Maths decreases by two times. The remaining percentage all increases.
请注意时态和用词的准确度。比如in the charge of, 还有些单复数的问题。总之基本拿5.5没问题
老师....为什么只有我的文章你没有改啊?....
红书 p71
As is shown in the graph, the figure of TV licences and cinema admissions behave contrarily.
All the statistics can be categorized into two stages with the popularity of cinema from 1957 to 1960 and the popularity of TV from 1960 to 1974.During the first stage, the inclination of TV licences slumped from the summit of 950 million people in 1950 to the base of 500 million in 1960. Meanwhile, there was a surge of the cinema, rising gradually and moderately from less than 400 million to 500 million. At the second stage, the trend of TV licences decreased comparatively sharply than its first stage, subsiding from 500 million in 1960 to 1972 and crept down until 1974 with the number of 90 millions. However, there was still a surge in the widespread of the TV with negligible fluctuation, reaching a zenith at 950 million in 1974.
What is worth mentioning is that no matter how the numbers varied, both two lines had a peak at 950 million people.
Band:6.5
红书 p72
As is revealed in the graph, the two lines of birth and death rates fluctuated in the first seventy years of last century in a developing country.
All the statistics can be categorized into 2 stages with the predominance of birth rate from 1900 to 1932 and the predominance of death rate from 1932 to 1970. Both the death rate and the birth rate were in an equilibrium position during the first decade of the twentieth century with the rate of 40 per thousand. However, the birth rate began to rise and fall evenly from 1910 to 1932 within a range of 0.1 %, reaching a summit at 0.6 %. While the death rate ebbed to 0.3%. Over the period from 1932 to 1970, there was a surge of the widespread of the death rate, reaching a zenith at roughly 0.5% followed by decreasing gradually and comparatively sharply until 1970 with the percentage of 0.3. In the mean time, the inclination of birth rate subsided to 0.2% in 1940 and rose and fell symmetrically until 1970.
Band:7