下面给大家紧急通知：以下三幅Task 1属于08年非常重要的图，大家赶快写。它们的特点在于看起来不难，其实非常难写，都属于静态的图表，最后一篇不属于流程图，属于解释说明性的图，其难度也是数一数二的，倒计时写作开始，高手写完可以迅速上传“作品”。
练习一：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
练习二：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
练习三：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Wow, you have written a lot in this month.Merry Christmas to you !!!
记得5年前在西安的新东方上课时教我们写作的老师的绰号是小新，蜡笔小新，多受学生欢迎的。初到这里，我以为是他呢，呵呵。要是有机会，你们两位老师交流下，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻，真是有意思.
这个不是剑桥上面的么？前两篇都写过啊，是不怎么好写地。。。
我12.15长沙考的，现在苦等成绩啊。。。
我成绩出来了~~~
虽然不是很好~
但是达到需要的分数了~~~
呵呵。。谢谢小新~
小新老师能不能提供下范文呢~
自己写了以后总觉得不是很好~
谢谢小新老师了，我是YP119的学生，我会好好吸收的。提前祝你圣诞快乐，你就像圣诞老人总是送给我们礼物，有了这个Version5.0我今年过圣诞不孤独了。
小新，这次作文没达标，我准备重考。
请问
1。我现在第二次复习用什么材料比较好，特别是听力和阅读，如果精听听力来提高，那么什么材料可以用来模拟考试自测水平的呢？
2。我考好口语感觉非常好，对于评分标准的流利度、发音和IDEA都很好，中间基本没有怎么停顿过，语速感觉偏快，是第二天早上第二个考，只是考官一直喜欢不断的打断我问下个问题，考出来后分数只有6，不知道是什么原因？会不会是我背叛背诵呢？当然，说PART 2 的时候有点小偏题，不过后来说回来了。现在很困惑。
谢谢小新。
小新好！麻烦看一下写的三篇小作文，我基础不好，1月12日就要考了，写的很乱，希望有所提高，请多多指教！谢谢！
第一篇:
All trend can be categorized into 3 groups with Long distance bus and Taxi boomed within a range of approximately 70 and 30 respectively from 1980 to 2000.
Car and other rose comparatively dramatically reach a peak at 4806 and 585 respectively in 2000 and bottoming out at 3199 and 450 respectively in1985
There is the similar case with the trend which All modes rose comparatively gently reach a peak at 6475 in 2000 and bottoming out at 4740 in 1985.
Train rose comparatively gently reach a summit at 366 in 2000 and underside at 289 in 1985.
This is a opposite with the trend which Bicycle ebb within a rage of approximately 10.
Walking and local bus fall bottoming at 237 and 274 respectively in 2000 and rose a summit at 255and 429 respectively in 1985.
We can see clear that travel in England between 1985 and 2000 rose comparatively gently.
第二篇：
All trend can be categorized into k3 stages which the equilibrium of the Domestic use and Industria use from 1990 to 1994 and then Domestic use rose minimally rich a peak at about 300km3 from 1940 to 2000. Industrial use rose comparatively gently reach a summit at about 1000from 1940 to 2000.Agicalture leveled of initially and surged corresponding from about 500km3 from 1900 to 1940 and then comparatively sharply reach a peak at about 300km3 in 2000.Wcan seen clear that Global water use rose gently from 1900 to 2000.
All trends can be categorized 2 stages which the population and Irriganed land rose comparatively dramatically reach a peak at176 million and 26500km2 in brazil and bottoming out at 5.2million and 100 km2 in Democractic.Water consumption per person rose comparately sightly reach a summit at 359m3 in Brazil and underside at 8m2 in Democractic.
第三篇
All trends can be categoeized into 4 stages which life cycie of the silkworm firstly the silkworm give brith to a child called egg on the mulberry, secondly eggs to be silkworm larva during 10 days,depend on the mulberry leaf. thirdly during 4-6 weeks, silkworm larva silk thread. I t will take their 3-8 days to be cocoon.finally during 16days silkworm become moth this is all the trend for the fife cucie of the silkworm.
All treads can be categarized into 5 stages. Firstly select the stuff, secondly put the stuff into the water and boil. Thirdly unwind the stuff to be thread about 300-900m
fourthly twist the thread until it dye. finally weave to cloth. This is the all trends for production of silk cloth.
小新，我要考G类的雅思，有关于08第一季度G类作文的预测伐？谢谢
你是真地不知道雅思作文啊.悲哀!中国英语教育的悲哀!
nowadays,international tourism is the biggest industry in the world,unfortunitely, international tourism creates tension rather than understaning between people from different cultures. to what extent do you agree or disaggree?
老师，我想问：如果我的观点是AGREE，那么“旅游业可以促进当地经济的发展”能不能写进去呢？会不会跑题拉？
小新,帮我看看第一篇作文,结尾不知道怎么写,指导一下呀. 我把前面的写好了
All statistics can be categorized into two groups with rising in terms such as Car, Train, Taxi and Long distance bus, and falling in terms such as Walking, Bicycle and Local bus.
The average distance traveled by Car occupied a comparatively majority in all modes, which soared from 3199 miles in 1985 to 4806 miles in 2000. Similarly ,the distance traveled by Taxi surged from 13 miles to 42 miles during this period. This is almost the similar case with the trend of Train and Long distance bus.
On the contrary, the average distance traveled by Local bus slumped from 429 miles in 1985 to 274 miles in 2000. Distance traveled by Bicycle subsided by 20% , that traveled by Walking ebbed by 7%.
王雅男
第一篇应指出trends的总类，时态也要注意，过去时。纵向比较没有.
第二篇不用分类，直接描述每根曲线即可，当中分词的使用要注意
第三篇流程图不用写trends
G类的考试文章基本在我Blog里都有，你只要练一练重要的信件和文章即可，不必刻意预测。
小新，这次作文没达标，我准备重考。
请问
1。我现在第二次复习用什么材料比较好，特别是听力和阅读，如果精听听力来提高，那么什么材料可以用来模拟考试自测水平的呢？
2。我考好口语感觉非常好，对于评分标准的流利度、发音和IDEA都很好，中间基本没有怎么停顿过，语速感觉偏快，是第二天早上第二个考，只是考官一直喜欢不断的打断我问下个问题，考出来后分数只有6，不知道是什么原因？会不会是我背叛背诵呢？当然，说PART 2 的时候有点小偏题，不过后来说回来了。现在很困惑。
谢谢小新。
小新，这次作文没达标，我准备重考。
请问
1。我现在第二次复习用什么材料比较好，特别是听力和阅读，如果精听听力来提高，那么什么材料可以用来模拟考试自测水平的呢？
2。我考好口语感觉非常好，对于评分标准的流利度、发音和IDEA都很好，中间基本没有怎么停顿过，语速感觉偏快，是第二天早上第二个考，只是考官一直喜欢不断的打断我问下个问题，考出来后分数只有6，不知道是什么原因？会不会是我背叛背诵呢？当然，说PART 2 的时候有点小偏题，不过后来说回来了。现在很困惑。
谢谢小新。.
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恭喜纽扣了，yunyun，口语中coherency很重要，你偏题一般不会给你7分以上。精听听力可以用Listen to this 2
ericxuoz
小新，我要考G类的雅思，有关于08第一季度G类作文的预测伐？谢谢
答：参考A类的预测主题，放心，不会难！
找不到你的email,就发在这里吧。我留了我的email，麻烦你看了给我点意见吧，超级感谢新！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
只写了第一篇
The diagram demonstrates information about average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel in 1985 and 2000.
As shown by the table, the total distance increased from 4740 to 6475 in those 15 years, with the distance travelled by car growed most in number. In 1985 fewest people took taxis whereas people went out by bicyle fell to the least. The picture also illustrates that having a journey with local buses was not so popular as it used to be in 1985, the number of those who used to travel by local bus reduced approximately a half.
The obvious main trend of the above chart is that every mode of the transportation is used by an rising number of people except walking and local bus.
好难呀...........
这3骗~危险小作文~~~~~~~
我刚拿到成绩，听力7，阅读7.5，作文6，口语6，总分6.5
可我想拿7分，小新老师你说我要不要去复议啊，复议哪一项呢？
小新帮忙看一下第一篇有什么问题,大概几分,不胜感激，19号就要考了，这种水平......
The table indicates how long every Englishman or Englishwoman travel by various transportation tools in 1985 and 2000.
First, car has always been the one covering the longest distance among all these options, with a perpetually advantage in the number as much as more or less 10 times folds over other forms of traveling. Furthermore, except local bus, all the other forms of vehicles witnessed a rise of number of miles per head in 2000, enjoying at least a 29 miles increase (for taxi). Inversely, people were less likely to walk or cycle when they go out in the year of 2000, because of the numbers’ slight drop compared with the statistics in 1985: from 255 to 237 for walking and 51 to 41 for cycling. Last but not least, the total mileage British people spending on travelling surged from 3199 in 1985 to 4740 in 2000, a remarkable 1.5 folds that really counts.
A review of this table reminds us of an increasing trend among Britons of preferring vehicles rather than traditional ways (walk or cycling) when they head for a destination. Consequently, environmental and personal health problems concerned might arose our attention in a near future.
小新老师,帮我看看第一篇,我头一次自己写小作文,不知道怎么样
The table reveals the information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
In 1985, average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel was distributed in the following ways:255 miles on foot, 55 miles on using bicycle, 3199 miles on driving car, 429 and 54 mile on taking local bus and long distance bus respectively, 13 miles on taxi, 450 miles on other modes.
In 2000, the trend was slightly different. The miles on taking long distance bus surged sharply, reaching the peak at 124 miles .There was converse with it on taking local bus, hitting a trough at 274. The miles on walking and bicycle abated gently, with the range of 10 miles. In contrast, there was an upward trend in the miles on car and train. What was worth to be mentioned was the way of Taxi, person would take a taxi to enjoy his traveling, the miles on it was more as 3 times as it in 1985. So all modes grew sharply, which was from 4740 miles to 6475 miles.
Above this trend, we can be easy to draw the conclusion that the standard of personal living showed a good view. The majority of the person chose the convenient and comfortable way to travel.
看了好受打击呀..这个流程图真是..我2.23就要考了,要是考这个就麻烦大了..
还是我，针对一季度危险的图表中的蚕丝那篇文章作了练习。但是只写了后面那个图哦～～～
This diagram illustrates the production of silk cloth. As it is unfolded in the chart, the whole process can be divided into five main steps.
In the first stage, cocoons are carefully selected to ensure the high quality of silk. Then the good ones are put into a large container, which is filled with water. Then it is heated until the water is boiled. When the boiling is done, the silkworms in the cocoons are dead and it is time to get those small white balls unwound. What should be paid attention to is that silk must be reeled off the cocoon quickly before the pupa begins to rot and taint the thread with unpleasant smells. Before they are twisted, make sure that the length of the thread is supposed to be between 300 and 900 meters. Finally, the fibre is wove into cloth. There are options to dyed the silk either before or after weaving.
Overall, the silk cloth production is accomplished.
想问小新几个紧急问题：1。流程图字数很难凑满，有什么可以套的“废话”可以写吗？2。当流程图中某步骤有分之选择，比如做完A后可以选择做B或者C，也就是以SILK CLOTH 为例，DYE这一部既可以在WEAVE前也可以放在最后，应该怎么写？3。流程图的结尾该怎么写?总觉得太单薄了。4。可以帮我看看我的这篇有没有致命错误
@新东方小新
= =大家开头都是all trends or statistics are categorized...估计要被列入黑名单了,大家慎用啊.我Y140
写了1，2篇。写在纸上了，不贴上来了。
第一篇，个人对1985年的数据用的饼图的几个句式。我觉得那3句对静态图应该可以用，只是没见人用过，不知道小新怎么看？还有第一篇的隐含信息我想应该是train取代local bus成为第三重要的交通。不知道还有其他的不？
第二篇，就是不知道那个巴西刚果的比较如何写比较好。
小新出来啊！！！！！！
小新老师~~~刚才写了篇练习二的,2.23就要考了慌得我啊T_T~~~请你帮我看看这种样子能得几分好让我心里有个底~谢谢老师!
The first curve graph above shows water usage around the world in three sections,which are agriculture,industrial use and domestic use in a century`s time from 1900 to 2000.The second table compares the water consumption in population,irrigated land and water consumpted by individuals in Brazil and Congo in 2000.According to the data given by the graphs,ot`s discernable that the total amount of water consumpted kept increasing with a quick speed in recent years.
As we can witness in the first line chart,the figures of water use in 1990 stood at 500km3 in agriculture,nearly 0 km3 in industrial use and in domestic use,from then on,water use on argriculture began to creep up until 1950,followed by a dramatic raise and reached its highest point at a little over 3000km3 in 2000.As for the use in other two sectors,the figures didn`t changed a lot until 1950,at that point it began to go all the way to nearly 1000km3 and 300km3 respectively.
Tkae a close look at the table we can find that Brazil far surpass Congo in water consumption for its lager population and irrigated land.What is noteworthy is that the number of water consumption per person in Brazil in 2000 was close to the amount used in agriculture of the whole world in 1900.That indicates evidently that the need of using and consumpting water is far more urgent than ever before.
小新老师，这是我写的第一题的作文……有点超时了，用了将近30分钟，汗……………………有劳老师指教！
ps：这样的文章能得几分？
The chart above illustrates the changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. According to the different modes’ variations we can roughly divide them into three categories.
The first category includes four items, i.e. car, long distance bus, train and taxi, which increased to different extents from 1985 to 2000. To be more specific, in 1985, the figure of average distance in miles traveled per person per year for car is 3199, with an evident grow to 4806 in 2000. Also, the 15 years’ time saw a dramatic increase in the figure for long distance bus and taxi, the former rose from 54 to 124 while the latter rocketed from 12 to 42. There‘s also a increase in the use of train, which, although, is a little less marked than the previous item.
On the other hand, walking and bicycle’s figures both decreased slightly, we can have which fallen into the second category. In contrast, local bus is the only items listed on the chart which had a significant drop of use in these 15 years, with a figure of 429 compared to 274 in 2000. The use of all modes, as can be expected, increased sharply from 4740 to 6475 after fifteen years.
In conclusion, from 1985 to 2000 most of the modes of travel in England are more commonly used while only a few of them became less popular.
小新老师，又忍不住上来写了一篇啦～恭请老师作一作点评……感激万分……
是针对第二道题的：
The line chart given above shows the changes in the uses of water in different sectors from 1900 to 2000, and the table gives us a general comparison between the water consumptions in Brazil and Congo in the year of 2000.
As can be seen from the chart, the amounts of water used for industrial and domestic purposes were extremely small and they bottomed out for nearly 50 years until in the 1950’s when they appeared to begin growing steadily. In 2000, the amount of water spent for industrial and domestic uses reached 1000 and roughly 500 km3 respectively. During the same period, the agriculture water also saw a relatively steady increase---but at a much higher rate compared with that of the previous two uses—from 5000 in 1900 to 3000 in 2000.
Turning to the water consumption in Brazil and Congo, a close examination of the table will soon reveals a striking fact that although Brazil’s population in 2000, which reached 176 million compared to Congo’s which was merely 5.2 million, was fairly large, it had a much larger area of land to irrigate, thus the water consumptions per person heavily surpassed that of Congo (359km3 and 8km3 respectively).
Given the analysis of these two graphs, we can get two basic conclusions that the global water use has been increasing all the time in the 20th century, but it is extremely imbalanced in different regions in the world.
小新,你说这些图都是静态图表,你的6.0不是写"所有静态图且没有特征变化"不要写all trends吗？
还是说条件必须满足“静态图+没有特征变化”？
前2幅图有时间阶段对比，是属于有特征变化的静态图，所以要写all trends，是吗？
还有,小新,你在课上讲静态图标无趋势不用trends，用总分，那我描述这2张图表时结尾就不写ending了，可以吗？
但我看白皮书例文静态无趋势表格有写ending，疑惑ing，是不是可写可不写？
还有,写TASK1的时候,写OPENING时抄作文题目,可以吗?我上过课很久了,依稀有点疑惑了!
问一个很愚蠢的问题：
大作文和小作文是不是都不要写题目啊？
老师，我是Y146的学生
悄悄地问一句，您让我们赶快下载的，说不想一直置顶的是不是这一个贴啊？
第一篇， 用pie chart方法写的
As is displayed in the table, the figure of average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel differed obviously in 1985 and in 2000.
From the information described in the table, it can be seen that in 1985, Car occupied a maximum portion of the average distance by travel mode, with 3,199 miles while taxi accounted for a tiny share, with only 13 miles. Furthermore, Local bus and Other, with nearly 880 miles together covered comparatively a majority of the total number. We can witness that about 10% of the all modes was shared by Walking and Train. The remaining was due to Bicycle and Long distance bus, with 51 and 54 miles respectively.
Concerning to the average distance by mode of travel in 2000, Train and Other surged to 366 and 585 miles respectively. Taxi in 2000 outnumbered its counterpart by 3 times and Long distance bus was up about 4-fold. On the other hand, there was a slight decreasing in Walking. 2000 year witnessed a subsiding in Bicycle to 41 miles. What is worth mentioning is that Car boomed by 1600 miles. There was the similar case with the trend of All modes.
呃~~~
changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000
题目没看到，害得我用了table上那么长的那句
小新,听说08年8月雅思会改革,我是08年8月9日考试,会不会很难?
小新,听说08年8月雅思会改革,我是08年8月9日考试,会不会很难?急急急....