大家估计7月考试吧,加油了,去看看“七月雅思写作必看”了,有问题直接向我开炮。欢迎!!!
posted on 2008-06-26 23:42
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真好,还有专线(贴),我7月最后一次考,应该没啥变化吧?谢谢
小新。。我是去年Y132的。。今年7/26考。。你只说7月初不考。。7/26号会不会考流程图?这个很令人担心啊。。
哟~碰到这位比我还能拖的真是幸会啊!
我是Y135的。。。
老师ydt010 6/30的课上不?
请问你在七月写作必看里面说的,8月份机考试怎么回事啊?一点也没听说,我报考的是8.9考,有必要改道7月份考么
谢谢老师
请问小新老师,discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 的题是不是要先表述自己意见的呀?段落结构比重怎么安排?
Task1 如果有多张图的怎么写
七月12号会考表格么
TASK1如果有一张柱状图(有时间),一张曲线图,2图之间没有联系,趋势也不一样,那么我的总分句中用type吗?那总分句后半句的趋势选哪一张写啊?
小新,是这样的,我本来打算7月25日考的,所以报了现在这个点题班,但是一直觉得准备不充分,加上学校事情也多的要死,然后发觉7月居然都爆满了,所以只能参加8月的了,既然8月我就打算8月30日考了,但是不是8月份很不格算呀?~会不会受到机考的开始的影响,题目套路会不会有变化呀?~想到要考就好紧张。。。。
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Chloe: TASK1如果有一张柱状图(有时间),一张曲线图,2图之间没有联系,趋势也不一样,那么我的总分句中用type吗?那总分句后半句的趋势选哪一张写啊?
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只要对可以分的图分就可以了,不必总的分
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last sesame: 小新,是这样的,我本来打算7月25日考的,所以报了现在这个点题班,但是一直觉得准备不充分,加上学校事情也多的要死,然后发觉7月居然都爆满了,所以只能参加8月的了,既然8月我就打算8月30日考了,但是不是8月份很不格算呀?~会不会受到机考的开始的影响,题目套路会不会有变化呀?~想到要考就好紧张。。。。
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暂时不会,放心吧,有我在
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Lettie: Task1 如果有多张图的怎么写
七月12号会考表格么
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具体题型不可能预测的,多张图没联系的各写各的,有联系就compare and contrast了
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唯昕: 请问小新老师,discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 的题是不是要先表述自己意见的呀?段落结构比重怎么安排?
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对的,先出来观点,后面根据实际情况去分配两个观点,随便你
小新老师,谢谢麻烦帮忙看下鄙人写的task2(笔记提示),希望您能简单的评析下,给个分数,感激不尽~~
题目:
More and more people use the mobile phone or computer to communicate, and no longer write letters to each other. Some people think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear completely. Do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter-writing is?
The progression of science development is inevitableand un deniable.What is under controversy is whether the letter-writing will soon disappear thoroughly.To be frank,I am in high of the possibility that it will vanish sometime.
What’s of the top priority is that such electronic inventions is labour-saving and time-saving to a large extent.Nowadays, we are living in a rapidly developing society ,with the concept that time is equivalent to everything.Consequently,people prefer using highly technical communicating inventions to writing letters by hand.On second thoughts,people are keeping with the Joneses.To such a degree have a large increasing number of people adapted to depend upon it that others think to themselves that they can’t beome out of fashion.Saving the last for best,what is worth being mentioned is the exact fact that numerous young people lay no emphasis on the beauty of the writing words and they want to conceal this fact through the computer communication.
Nevertheless,Overdependence on the modern high-tech instrument will lead to a degradation of humans. The significance of the letter-writing is obvious for it is passed on from generation to generation through a long period of time.When we are in our childhood,we begin to learn and use it.Till now, our next generation have been using it with no argument as well.Further more we should not live in such a life without the unfailing vital ability.
In conclusion,perhaps only when the letter-writing has disappeared would we realize the importance it brought to us.So we ought to raise our awareness of responsibility to come to it and develop it.Save it for the rainy days.
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Chloe: TASK1如果有一张柱状图(有时间),一张曲线图,2图之间没有联系,趋势也不一样,那么我的总分句中用type吗?那总分句后半句的趋势选哪一张写啊?
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只要对可以分的图分就可以了,不必总的分
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那是用type吗?
小新老师,
我没有上过你的强化班,十分遗憾,我也是7、26考感觉有些紧张了。
上次听完您的课感觉有点混乱,确切的说我对局部的东西有了一些了解,但整体上还不是十分清楚,能不能麻烦您提供一些整体都比较出色的文章,最好能发我一份哦。
我的电邮地址:fxbxsj@live.cn
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Chloe: TASK1如果有一张柱状图(有时间),一张曲线图,2图之间没有联系,趋势也不一样,那么我的总分句中用type吗?那总分句后半句的趋势选哪一张写啊?
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只要对可以分的图分就可以了,不必总的分
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那是用type吗?
老师,这是剑3的TASK1,麻烦老师帮我看看这样写总分句可以吗?你觉得能得几分?
As is displayed in the bar chart and line chart respectively,the figure of Japanese tourists travelling abroad and Australia's share of Japan's tourist market varied from 1985 and 1995.
In the first chart,the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad boomed from1985 to 1995.In the following,We can witness the nadir occurred in 1991.Conversely,there is an increase during the next 4 years,reaching a peak at 15 in 1995.
In the second chart, all trends can be categorized into 3 stages, with rising from 1985 to1988,fluctuating from 1988to 1993,falling from 1993 to 1994.
As to the curve of Australia's share of Japan's tourist market,we can witness a trend of rising from 1985to 1988.Next, it rises and falls evenly in the following 3years.Additionally,there is an increasing till 1993,reaching a summit at about 6.3%in 1993.In the end ,it crept down in 1994.
不好意思老师,上面是剑3 test1 的task1哦,谢谢
小新老师,我刚写了篇剑5-test1-task1,麻烦您帮忙看看给个分数吧,谢谢!
The graph reflects the proportion of population aged 65 and over in three different countries respectively from 1940 to 2040. All trends can be categorized into three stages with the predominance of USA from 1940 to 2000, predominance of Sweden during the following 30 years and the prevalence of Japan in the final ten years.
As to USA, the proportion rose evenly in the first 20 years from 8% to 10%, followed by a creep-up to its peak at about 15% in 1980. There was fluctuation within a small range from 1980 to 2020 when the proportion soared to the final, which was almost two times more than the original one.
Compared to USA, the curve was almost the same at the first 50 years. The year 1997 witnessed a sharp increase to its zenith at 20% in 2018. The peak was followed by a slump for almost 10 years until it bumped up again to the final stage.
Finally, when it comes to Japan, it fluctuated during the first 70 years, raging from the nadir at 3% to the highest level at 10%. The year 2030 saw the soaring of a 15% increase at only 5 years.
From what has been discussed above, we can see that despite some fluctuations, all of the three countries’ proportion of old people rise. And we can safely draw the conclusion that the problem of an aging population is become increasingly important to us.
老师5号考的task2应该算哪个球 教育类还是抽象的呢