12月雅思写作必看

12月——西方的圣殿月,无论是圣诞节还是11月底的感恩节,都带着点宗教的肃穆。12月历来是雅思放空的一个月,历史上告诉我们:12月天下无事。基本上不考流程图等偷袭题型,大作文也不考新题,甚至好几年都是赤裸裸的老题,考官的心态也像是“年前综合症——看什么都爽”。所以首先要恭喜12月考雅思的朋友们,你们确实报到了一年最“爽”的一个月。

由于十一月份还是没有考到偷袭题型,所以大家可以放心的“赌”下去,把11月30号新东方雅思年会发的重要资料中“流程图最全集锦”中的凸准备一下就可以了,也可以在我的博客下载。我的预测是12月份的第一次是最有可能的,否则一切平安无事。此外小作文最近有常考静态图的特点,大家要注意类似新东方模考班上的“关于男女生四科成绩比较”的静态图,模考班确实说中了不少题。

大作文其实也早就尘埃落定,2号球和5号球是本年度的收山准备之作,特别是政府金融就业的话题,大家可以与时俱进一下,科技上个月偷袭了一下,本月还会出现,但是还是些老套的“飞机+图书馆+多媒体+加工食品”等模式,练练三四套题就可以窥其全貌,大家不要太功利了,就像我在课上说的那样,最高境界是“混球”,希望大家存心“混”起来。

下面是12月最后阶段必练的几道题(切记:先写小新雅思笔记8.0中红、蓝色的题):

1) Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

2) An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in small towns?

3) Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4) Some people think government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

5) With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this new technology?

注:红色的为5号球,黑色的2号球

别忘了先写小新雅思笔记 Version8.0中相关主题蓝色和红色的题目,再加以雅思回家复习计划的下载,最后在练习上面的五道题。


小新雅思笔记8.0下载地址:
http://blog.hjenglish.com/zhangchixin/archive/2008/06/24/1080297.html

雅思回家复习计划下载:
http://blog.hjenglish.com/zhangchixin/archive/2007/07/27/791573.html

流程图最新下载全集:
http://blog.hjenglish.com/zhangchixin/archive/2008/08/29/1155375.html

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#1楼2008-11-27 17:00 | nini
希望07年最后一场的雅思能给我好运气啊~
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#2楼2008-11-27 17:02 | nini
小新老师讲很不错~~内容不少 今天要好好消化了~
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#3楼2008-11-27 17:07 | 月宁风轻淡苍穹
呵呵~这是感恩节小新给“烤鸭”们最好的礼物了吧~:)
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#4楼2008-11-27 17:07 | sangria
学术的小新回来了
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#5楼2008-11-27 17:28 | 狮子瑾
额。。。好吧,平静了,我看书去了!!
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#6楼2008-11-27 17:49 | 狮子瑾
小新,我看到QQ的博客里 少年口译班已经出来了,词汇量1500就可以报名了,额。。。那要跟我们抢人才了!等泡泡们毕业 他们的词汇量是1500的两倍来!
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#7楼2008-11-27 18:28 | 小依
老师。4号考流程图的概率有多大。。。55虽然看的这个图的作文也不少了,可是心里还是没有底的
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#8楼[楼主]2008-11-27 20:29 | 新东方小新
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狮子瑾: 小新,我看到QQ的博客里 少年口译班已经出来了,词汇量1500就可以报名了,额。。。那要跟我们抢人才了!等泡泡们毕业 他们的词汇量是1500的两倍来!
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不矛盾的,以后帮我推一推啊
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#9楼[楼主]2008-11-27 20:29 | 新东方小新
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小依: 老师。4号考流程图的概率有多大。。。55虽然看的这个图的作文也不少了,可是心里还是没有底的
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还是要注意的
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#10楼2008-11-27 22:24 | 北极哈棒
雅思刚报完名
来谢谢小新!
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#11楼2008-11-27 22:55 | Bracha
谢谢,小新!
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#12楼2008-11-27 23:05 | 圆圆
多谢小新!
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#13楼2008-11-27 23:29 | 小之
老师 那我是后天1129, 流程图是不是很有可能考啊 我已经重点看流程图了 如果考了12月就不会考了咯
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#14楼2008-11-27 23:39 | 陈辰
在20号广元路那天晚上的公开课记忆犹新
十分坚定地想从复旦物理系毕业以后转金融,melbourne management(finance) master对本科复旦物理系给出的要求是GPA2.7,IELTS6.5, GMAT550,修过investment,corp finance, business finance.
要求如此之低让我对课程和学位的qualification产生怀疑
(事实上就绩点而言因为大一实在太低现在最多也只能拉到2.7了,12月考雅思,寒假在武东路新东方上GMAT,之前修过的公选课有金融工程导论,货币与金融市场,财务会计导论,金融工程导论,中国当代经济政策及其理论,这学期在修专业课国际金融和物理系的专选课经济物理(相当于金融工程))
不知道我这个情况是否还有其他选择?
谢谢!
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#15楼[楼主]2008-11-27 23:45 | 新东方小新
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小之: 老师 那我是后天1129, 流程图是不是很有可能考啊 我已经重点看流程图了 如果考了12月就不会考了咯
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可能性在减小,其他火速准备
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#16楼2008-11-28 00:17 | GenieQ
小新老师!!!!!!首先感恩节快乐!我是1129考,大作文是3号球5号球么??感谢感谢!!
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#17楼2008-11-28 00:34 | GenieQ
老师,我看到了!俄~上面那个算我自问自答吧~

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#18楼2008-11-28 07:15 | Joy_SHI
老师 我12.20考 剩下不到20天
准备的乱七八糟的
特别是写作和阅读

想起暑假的你和徐凎老师
还是没有找到目标和方向
剑3-6做的完都很困难
这已经是准备考第二次了
可是复习的还是好混乱
希望老师指点迷津
好紧张呀~~
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#19楼2008-11-28 12:57 | 梅山老妖
明天就考了,现在感觉要昏过去了。。。
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#20楼2008-11-28 13:03 | 狮子瑾
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新东方小新: --引用--------------------------------------------------
狮子瑾: 小新,我看到QQ的博客里 少年口译班已经出来了,词汇量1500就可以报名了,额。。。那要跟我们抢人才了!等泡泡们毕业 他们的词汇量是1500的两倍来!
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不矛盾的,以后帮我推一推啊
-------------------------------------------------------好,下月9号我正好要给南区负责人和教务做培训,让他们在毕业班强推!!

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#21楼2008-11-28 13:27 | tcsj
小新老师好,12月13号流程图是不是不会考了?还有政府金融就业的话题可不可以给点素材啊?
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#22楼2008-11-28 19:56 | 天枰座
小新老师你好,请问这次预测也包含了G类考试的作文么?谢谢!
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#23楼2008-11-28 22:11 | 莴笋
谢谢小新
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#24楼[楼主]2008-11-28 22:14 | 新东方小新
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狮子瑾: --引用--------------------------------------------------
新东方小新: --引用--------------------------------------------------
狮子瑾: 小新,我看到QQ的博客里 少年口译班已经出来了,词汇量1500就可以报名了,额。。。那要跟我们抢人才了!等泡泡们毕业 他们的词汇量是1500的两倍来!
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不矛盾的,以后帮我推一推啊
-------------------------------------------------------好,下月9号我正好要给南区负责人和教务做培训,让他们在毕业班强推!!

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正好
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#25楼[楼主]2008-11-28 22:14 | 新东方小新
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天枰座: 小新老师你好,请问这次预测也包含了G类考试的作文么?谢谢!
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G类重点可以写我的8.0里的移民类题库
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#26楼2008-11-29 08:23 | Joy_SHI
老师 我12.20考 剩下不到20天
准备的乱七八糟的
特别是写作和阅读

想起暑假的你和徐凎老师
还是没有找到目标和方向
剑3-6做的完都很困难
这已经是准备考第二次了
可是复习的还是好混乱
希望老师指点迷津
好紧张呀~~
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#27楼2008-11-29 13:11 | diego
今天没考流程图啊!
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#28楼2008-11-29 16:02 | joy-fish
老师 11月都没考流程图,会不会12月又很变态的来偷袭下...担心啊.
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#29楼2008-11-29 16:05 | kkxiao
老师6号考的需要准备一下流程图么
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#30楼2008-11-29 18:33 | luckyboy
小新:你好!
如果你说12月不考流程图,那么1月10号会考流程图吗?
我想报1月10号啊?请问报什么时候好啊?
万分感谢!
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#31楼2008-11-30 12:10 | taoran
老师请问main street是不是只能和wall street放在一起对比用?main street是不是只能在政治演说等场合使用啊?是不是平时不能乱说,和外国人说这个会不会导致所谓“政治不正确”啊?
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#32楼2008-11-30 15:03 | bless me
小新:急切想知道1月10号会有流程图吗?
1月17号呢?哪个时间考好呢?谢谢!心急人上!
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#33楼2008-11-30 20:41 | sama
忙得来昏过去了要
每门都来不及复习的感觉。。。TT
要努力撑到12.13
>0<!!
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#34楼2008-12-01 00:17 | JoeyWong
20号考试。
希望梦想成真吧。

上了小新很多课。
每次都有不同的收获。
但是感觉光听课还是不行嘀。
自己多练练才是真的。
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#35楼2008-12-01 13:10 | 卡洛琳娜
小新老师~
我DOWNLOAD了你的笔记,你说的2号球和5号球有点让我CONFUSE呀...可以解释一下吗,我12月考的话, 准备笔记里哪些比较好呢?
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#36楼2008-12-01 15:31 | llxxyy
小新,你帮我分析分析阿.我11月29号考的雅思,口语部分,出了点状况--我进去教室两次,第一次忘带口语卡第二次忘带了身份证,害的考官等我两分钟左右.而且考试开始时我先坐下的,没有让考官先坐........是不是影响挺大呢??呜呜...



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#37楼[楼主]2008-12-01 21:40 | 新东方小新
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Joy_SHI: 老师 我12.20考 剩下不到20天
准备的乱七八糟的
特别是写作和阅读

想起暑假的你和徐凎老师
还是没有找到目标和方向
剑3-6做的完都很困难
这已经是准备考第二次了
可是复习的还是好混乱
希望老师指点迷津
好紧张呀~~
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看雅思回家复习计划,有什么搞不明白的可以问我

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#38楼[楼主]2008-12-01 21:41 | 新东方小新
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JoeyWong: 20号考试。
希望梦想成真吧。

上了小新很多课。
每次都有不同的收获。
但是感觉光听课还是不行嘀。
自己多练练才是真的。
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真谛啊
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#39楼[楼主]2008-12-01 21:41 | 新东方小新
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bless me: 小新:急切想知道1月10号会有流程图吗?
1月17号呢?哪个时间考好呢?谢谢!心急人上!
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1月份的流程图史上也不多的,看运气了
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#40楼[楼主]2008-12-01 21:42 | 新东方小新
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卡洛琳娜: 小新老师~
我DOWNLOAD了你的笔记,你说的2号球和5号球有点让我CONFUSE呀...可以解释一下吗,我12月考的话, 准备笔记里哪些比较好呢?
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看看里面的蓝色的标准题会有点思路
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#41楼[楼主]2008-12-01 21:43 | 新东方小新
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llxxyy: 小新,你帮我分析分析阿.我11月29号考的雅思,口语部分,出了点状况--我进去教室两次,第一次忘带口语卡第二次忘带了身份证,害的考官等我两分钟左右.而且考试开始时我先坐下的,没有让考官先坐........是不是影响挺大呢??呜呜...



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就是情感因素了,那考官对你的印象不会太好,希望你的口语“真”的好
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#42楼2008-12-01 22:48 | llxxyy
那就是说会有影响是么...我答题的时候他也笑的,不过有时候我表达不清他也会眉头皱下....哎....自己就是把他当作朋友一样很放松的交谈的,没有拘束,所以有些礼节没有注意....好郁闷 @新东方小新

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#43楼2008-12-03 16:10 | 李悦
小新,我以前上过你的强化班。我将在12.13号参加考试,你能帮我看看下面的作文吗?帮我打个分,最好能提些建议,以及在最后这几天我该怎么复习作文,谢谢了~
1) Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our age and time, much debate has taken place about whether children should spend their time on TV, video and PC games. Some people hold the view that it is good for children to play such games, while others maintain that there are more disadvantages than advantages on children when they spend too much time on those games. Both views carry water.

People, who advocate the former view, have their sound reasons. In the first place, playing such games can promote children’s intelligence. For example, playing PC games always can advance children’s response ability. In the second place, children can learn some useful skills such as computer operation through their play. Furthermore, those games can help children foster a sense of competition which is one of the most important spirits in this modern society.

However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that playing such games has much bad impact on children. For one thing, it will cost a heap of time which should be spent in learning knowledge and skills. For another, spending much time on those games can make children shape an unhealthy personality. If children often play those games at home, they will lose chances to play with other children outdoors, so that they may easily get asocial. Most importantly, it is really bad for children’s health. It is so easy to wear glasses when children concentrate their eyes on screens for a long time. And also, children may form sick figures if they keep a wrong pose in front of those machines.

It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different attitudes on the same issue. For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that playing TV, video and PC games has more drawbacks than benefits for children. It is a way of wasting time. It is bad for children’s mental health. What is more, it is harmful to the growth of young.

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#44楼2008-12-03 20:25 | Helon
小新老师,我想知道您的雅思笔记8.0中提到的‘红书’具体是哪本书?
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#45楼[楼主]2008-12-03 22:07 | 新东方小新
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diego: 今天没考流程图啊!
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我知道,其实我早就知道
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#46楼[楼主]2008-12-03 22:08 | 新东方小新
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李悦: 小新,我以前上过你的强化班。我将在12.13号参加考试,你能帮我看看下面的作文吗?帮我打个分,最好能提些建议,以及在最后这几天我该怎么复习作文,谢谢了~
1) Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our age and time, much debate has taken place about whether children should spend their time on TV, video and PC games. Some people hold the view that it is good for children to play such games, while others maintain that there are more disadvantages than advantages on children when they spend too much time on those games. Both views carry water.

People, who advocate the former view, have their sound reasons. In the first place, playing such games can promote children’s intelligence. For example, playing PC games always can advance children’s response ability. In the second place, children can learn some useful skills such as computer operation through their play. Furthermore, those games can help children foster a sense of competition which is one of the most important spirits in this modern society.

However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that playing such games has much bad impact on children. For one thing, it will cost a heap of time which should be spent in learning knowledge and skills. For another, spending much time on those games can make children shape an unhealthy personality. If children often play those games at home, they will lose chances to play with other children outdoors, so that they may easily get asocial. Most importantly, it is really bad for children’s health. It is so easy to wear glasses when children concentrate their eyes on screens for a long time. And also, children may form sick figures if they keep a wrong pose in front of those machines.

It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different attitudes on the same issue. For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that playing TV, video and PC games has more drawbacks than benefits for children. It is a way of wasting time. It is bad for children’s mental health. What is more, it is harmful to the growth of young.

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#47楼[楼主]2008-12-03 22:08 | 新东方小新
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Helon: 小新老师,我想知道您的雅思笔记8.0中提到的‘红书’具体是哪本书?
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这是我们新东方雅思班的教材
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#48楼2008-12-04 13:42 | Helon
小新老师,12月13号会考流程图或地图吗?
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#49楼2008-12-04 15:56 | jeffrey
小新老师,我准备在2009年1月或者2月考雅思,您能给我推荐一个日期吗?
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#50楼[楼主]2008-12-04 19:46 | 新东方小新
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Helon: 小新老师,12月13号会考流程图或地图吗?
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可能性不大
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#51楼[楼主]2008-12-04 19:46 | 新东方小新
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jeffrey: 小新老师,我准备在2009年1月或者2月考雅思,您能给我推荐一个日期吗?
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2月底最后一次
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#52楼2008-12-04 22:16 | 123
有了小新的帮助信心大增呢!
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#53楼2008-12-04 22:17 | 木林满地
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nini: 希望07年最后一场的雅思能给我好运气啊~
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姐姐,你好像年轻了一年。。。。

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#54楼[楼主]2008-12-04 23:47 | 新东方小新
找茬冠军
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#55楼2008-12-05 02:00 | lonelychild
哈哈~代沟哦~我也是12月13号考的哦~·准备的乱七八糟的说~好想哭~作文看是看了~也还是摸不着头绪啊~~
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#56楼2008-12-05 06:12 | abstractlonely
不是这样的.
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#57楼2008-12-05 19:33 | lsmoon
请老师帮我看看能得多少分。
1) Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


The most children like watching TV or video, and also playing PC games. These bring benefits in the following fields: getting news, learning knowledge, and killing time. As we known, a child can know what happened in the other side of earth by watching TV News Channel, never needs to travel around the world. Just like that, he also can learn how a lion hunt a goat for living in Africa savannah from Discovery Channel. Meanwhile, he can have a happy time by playing PC games to reduce the stress of study. Accordingly it seems that children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good.

However, more is not always better. First of all, vast amounts of uncontrolled information from media also bring drawbacks such as violence, pornography and crime. For instance, some people think that the case of shooting in school happened in USA a few years ago was contributed to the children’s imitating the video which is full of bloody and violent scenes. For another, children’s spending more time on TV, video and PC games will disperse their focus on study. That is why so many parents keep their children from TV or PC games. As I have said, it is so bad that children spend much more time on TV and PC games without abstention.

My opinion, then, is that TV, video and PC games all of these can bring benefits to children who want to spread their horizon, improve their knowledge and lower their stress. But the key is people should help children to distinguish between the positive values and negative ones, and make them grow up safely and healthily.

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#58楼2008-12-06 19:48 | -厸錵糖
老师,12月20日会考流程图吗?
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#59楼2008-12-06 21:07 | sama
6号又没有流程图。。小新13号会考么?
好担心。。
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#60楼[楼主]2008-12-06 21:50 | 新东方小新
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lsmoon: 请老师帮我看看能得多少分。
1) Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


The most children like watching TV or video, and also playing PC games. These bring benefits in the following fields: getting news, learning knowledge, and killing time. As we known, a child can know what happened in the other side of earth by watching TV News Channel, never needs to travel around the world. Just like that, he also can learn how a lion hunt a goat for living in Africa savannah from Discovery Channel. Meanwhile, he can have a happy time by playing PC games to reduce the stress of study. Accordingly it seems that children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good.

However, more is not always better. First of all, vast amounts of uncontrolled information from media also bring drawbacks such as violence, pornography and crime. For instance, some people think that the case of shooting in school happened in USA a few years ago was contributed to the children’s imitating the video which is full of bloody and violent scenes. For another, children’s spending more time on TV, video and PC games will disperse their focus on study. That is why so many parents keep their children from TV or PC games. As I have said, it is so bad that children spend much more time on TV and PC games without abstention.

My opinion, then, is that TV, video and PC games all of these can bring benefits to children who want to spread their horizon, improve their knowledge and lower their stress. But the key is people should help children to distinguish between the positive values and negative ones, and make them grow up safely and healthily.

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观点表述不够明确,opening太长

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#61楼[楼主]2008-12-06 21:50 | 新东方小新
大家不用太担心流程图,按照我的范文模式去准备就可以了
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#62楼2008-12-07 22:58 | Bing
An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in small towns?
麻烦小新老师抽时间看看,帮忙打打分,谢谢。

In the modern times,the development of science and technology is inevitable and undeniable,especially in the urban areas which have conevient transportation,massive entertainment facilities,well constructed infrastructures and so on.As a result more and more people choose to live in these big cities.However,with many problems sparking ,some people deem that the government should encourage people to live in small towns.To be frank,I consider that this view can hold water.

As is known to all,it is obvious that if a lot of people flood to the big cities,a number of serious problems will be yielded correspondingly.In the first place,too many people crowd to use the cities' infrastructures,for instance,the public transportation,the water and electricity applying,which will enhance the pressure of society production.In the second place,it will lead to fierce competition in jobs'application and increase the rate of unemployment in these cities.What's worse,the cities'living environment will stay at negative circumstance.It is impossible to control quiet well and easily lead to higher rate of crime.Furthermore,the citizens could not live comfortable and pleasant.All of the problems are just because the too many people entance the cities.

However,when the problems are displayed,it alwangs has suitable ways to resolve them.A city with extraordinary population may cause disadvantageous effects,so the authorities concerned should carry out some efficient and effective measures to address the problems.The one thing is that the government should construct new and advanced infrastructures in the small towns,try best to bridge the gap between the urban and the rural.Besides,with investing in the small towns,in order to develop the local economy.Most importantly,the government also should map out some policies and regulations to facilitate people move to the towns,and relieve the population strain in the big cities.

In a nutshell,the city poblem is a big one,people from different backgrounds hold diverse views about the same issue.In my personal opinion,I'm in high favour of the government ought to assume the necessary responsibility to maintain a balance of population between big cities and small towns.

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#63楼2008-12-08 19:53 | asmld
小新老师:我觉得听力部分的大小写问题真的很烦!是否可以全部字母都大写?
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#64楼2008-12-08 20:32 | 李悦
小新,麻烦你再帮我看一下这一篇,最好提些建议哈~谢了
2) An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in small towns?
Along with the development of society, an increasing number of problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that there are more and more people choose to live in big cities. It becomes so widespread that people cannot help asking: what influences will this bring about? As I know, the influences are negative.

In the first place, it gives rise to many troubles to those big cities. On the one hand, too many people will lead to a lot of matters which are about substance shortage, such as traffic jam, housing problem, water shortage and so on. On the other hand, if a city has a big population, the city must be full of fierce competition, result in that people live there always suffer high pressure making people feel unhappy. What is more, a large number of people in a city will contribute to environmental problems. As we all know, the more people the more consumption, then the more rubbish is produced.

In the second place, it is bad for small town’s improvement. For one thing, as more and more people move to big cities, small towns will lack of labor force to develop their agriculture and industry. For another, if most people of small towns move out, the remaining people will lose their motivation to improve their towns, because they don’t have to.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the phenomenon of an increasing number of people choose to live in big cities is adverse. Considering the seriousness of this problem, government must do something to encourage people to live in small towns so that can decrease the pressure of big cities and also can help small towns develop their economy.

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#65楼2008-12-08 21:42 | 李悦
刚才又修改了一遍
Along with the development of society, an increasing number of problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that there are more and more people choose to live in big cities. It becomes so widespread that people cannot help asking: what influences will this bring about? As I know, the influences are negative.

In the first place, it gives rise to many troubles to those big cities. On the one hand, too many people will lead to a lot of matters which are about substance shortage, such as traffic jam, housing problem, water shortage and so on. On the other hand, if a city has a big population, the city must be full of fierce competition, resulting in that people live there always suffer from high pressure, making people feel unhappy. What is more, a large number of people in a city will contribute to environmental problems. As we all know, the more people the more consumption, then the more rubbish is produced.

In the second place, it is bad for small town’s improvement. For one thing, as more and more people move to big cities, small towns will lack of labor force to develop their agriculture and industry. For another, if most people of small towns move out, the remaining people will lose their motivation to improve their towns, because they don’t have to.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the phenomenon of an increasing number of people choose to live in big cities is adverse. Considering the seriousness of this problem, government must do something to encourage people to live in small towns, so as to decrease the pressure of big cities and help small towns develop their economy.

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#66楼2008-12-09 20:50 | Terence
谢谢小新哈 11.15刚考,考了6.5,虽然不高,但够用了~~~写作也是6.5,嘿嘿 谢谢小新的笔记
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#67楼2008-12-10 20:48 | 木林满地
疯特了,10月报名太积极,发现口语被安排在了本周六15:20....
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#68楼2008-12-10 20:49 | mkuraki
小新,13号的考试小作文什么类型的可能性比较打?
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#69楼[楼主]2008-12-10 21:50 | 新东方小新
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Bing: An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in small towns?
麻烦小新老师抽时间看看,帮忙打打分,谢谢。

In the modern times,the development of science and technology is inevitable and undeniable,especially in the urban areas which have conevient transportation,massive entertainment facilities,well constructed infrastructures and so on.As a result more and more people choose to live in these big cities.However,with many problems sparking ,some people deem that the government should encourage people to live in small towns.To be frank,I consider that this view can hold water.

As is known to all,it is obvious that if a lot of people flood to the big cities,a number of serious problems will be yielded correspondingly.In the first place,too many people crowd to use the cities' infrastructures,for instance,the public transportation,the water and electricity applying,which will enhance the pressure of society production.In the second place,it will lead to fierce competition in jobs'application and increase the rate of unemployment in these cities.What's worse,the cities'living environment will stay at negative circumstance.It is impossible to control quiet well and easily lead to higher rate of crime.Furthermore,the citizens could not live comfortable and pleasant.All of the problems are just because the too many people entance the cities.

However,when the problems are displayed,it alwangs has suitable ways to resolve them.A city with extraordinary population may cause disadvantageous effects,so the authorities concerned should carry out some efficient and effective measures to address the problems.The one thing is that the government should construct new and advanced infrastructures in the small towns,try best to bridge the gap between the urban and the rural.Besides,with investing in the small towns,in order to develop the local economy.Most importantly,the government also should map out some policies and regulations to facilitate people move to the towns,and relieve the population strain in the big cities.

In a nutshell,the city poblem is a big one,people from different backgrounds hold diverse views about the same issue.In my personal opinion,I'm in high favour of the government ought to assume the necessary responsibility to maintain a balance of population between big cities and small towns.

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写的不错,可做简单范文
Band:7
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#70楼[楼主]2008-12-10 21:51 | 新东方小新
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Terence: 谢谢小新哈 11.15刚考,考了6.5,虽然不高,但够用了~~~写作也是6.5,嘿嘿 谢谢小新的笔记
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谢谢你的努力,让我感动
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#71楼[楼主]2008-12-10 21:51 | 新东方小新
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木林满地: 疯特了,10月报名太积极,发现口语被安排在了本周六15:20....
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这有什么问题,不是很正常吗
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#72楼2008-12-11 10:55 | 木林满地
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新东方小新: --引用--------------------------------------------------
木林满地: 疯特了,10月报名太积极,发现口语被安排在了本周六15:20....
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这有什么问题,不是很正常吗
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一直期望别人当炮灰,可以周日借鉴下别人,结果被借鉴了

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#73楼2008-12-11 11:10 | CC^^
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木林满地:
一直期望别人当炮灰,可以周日借鉴下别人,结果被借鉴了

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同学你的姓氏拼音排在蛮前面的吧(貌似有人这么说的)~
周六15:20蛮好的呀~你可以问前面两小时的几个人考了什么的~
而且周日就不用再去一次啦,你要想万一周日去了还是考了和回忆不一样的题目,你不是更不爽啊?各有各好,不要紧张,周六好好考~~^_^
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#74楼2008-12-11 15:56 | 寶貝.不哭.
12月考過的同志浮出水來啊~~~

小女子下禮拜六就要考了··

寫作是心頭痛啊··

好好钻研一番才是··
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#75楼2008-12-12 11:26 | 点点点
亲爱的小新,为什么6号会出现1号球呢??
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#76楼2008-12-13 13:30 | 小花花
小新小新,今天又考了教育类的...明显又是一号球..怎么会这样???你能不能给咱们解释下呢?????我20号就要考试了...您老人家觉得1号可能大么?????
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#77楼2008-12-13 22:50 | jimmy_tong
和楼上同问

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#78楼2008-12-14 11:06 | 痛苦中
小新怎么不回答??
最起码给你的学生们一个交代啊??
哪怕你说你不知道...我们也不会怪你~~
可是你不吭声算怎么回事啊??~!!!
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#79楼2008-12-14 11:30 | -厸錵糖
老师考静态图和流程图的可能大吗12月20日
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#80楼2008-12-14 11:34 | CC^^
楼上的同志们,昨天的题目又不是用1号球去写得咯~
我们都宽容点,小新课很多的,而且他也有自己的生活的亚~
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#81楼2008-12-14 12:44 | 木林满地
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痛苦中: 小新怎么不回答??
最起码给你的学生们一个交代啊??
哪怕你说你不知道...我们也不会怪你~~
可是你不吭声算怎么回事啊??~!!!
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同学这是干嘛,雅思题又不是小新出的,这个只是参考啊,个人认为从小新课堂里得到得不是几号球,应该是英语学习的方向和方法。

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#82楼2008-12-14 15:38 | 不知谓不知
呵呵,楼上说话真幽默~
新东方强化班彪炳的是学习方法还是考试技巧?麻烦您搞搞清楚~
学英语重要的是方法不是技巧这个是个人都知道,用不着你来强调.
讲到学习方法...去上外找教授学去好来~~干吗来新东方~
要知道:这个班的宗旨是大价钱短时间快速提高!~
没人强求小新一定要说准考试题目,用不着提醒大家这个是不是小新出的.
只不过所谓的"球"是小新"引以为豪"的东西,是他上课的"一大卖点",也是广大学员冲刺关头的重要依据~楼上不会否认这点吧?!
本月两次和他预测的球有很大偏离,我想楼上几位发帖也不是要责怪他,只是想问问为什么,难道不可以么?
你怎么不从要考试的同学焦虑的心态出发来为同学们想想??
如果小新说:"这次球的问题应该是澳洲那边换了思路..希望大家本月全面准备..."之类的,只要给个说法,那大家也不会怪他~~
呵呵~~
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#83楼[楼主]2008-12-14 16:26 | 新东方小新
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痛苦中: 小新怎么不回答??
最起码给你的学生们一个交代啊??
哪怕你说你不知道...我们也不会怪你~~
可是你不吭声算怎么回事啊??~!!!
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请看13号的题目分析。找找看
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#84楼[楼主]2008-12-14 16:26 | 新东方小新
其实是2号球。去看看吧
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#85楼2008-12-14 17:58 | 大小毛
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新东方小新: 其实是2号球。去看看吧
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可爱的小新
那就是说20号很有可能是5号球了~~????
呼呼~~~
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#86楼[楼主]2008-12-14 19:48 | 新东方小新
注意混搭的题目
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#87楼2008-12-14 20:59 | Fatina
为什么会广州那边有口试延期到周一啊?

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#88楼2008-12-14 21:55 | Bracha
恩,一定要“混”起来~
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#89楼2008-12-14 22:15 | 晶晶
小新~根据前两次的考试,20号考试大作文最应关注哪个方向呢?准备狂背狂写几篇,希望投中!呵呵~小新一定要回哦~我好焦急哦。。
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#90楼2008-12-16 11:27 | 木林满地
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不知谓不知: 呵呵,楼上说话真幽默~
新东方强化班彪炳的是学习方法还是考试技巧?麻烦您搞搞清楚~
学英语重要的是方法不是技巧这个是个人都知道,用不着你来强调.
讲到学习方法...去上外找教授学去好来~~干吗来新东方~
要知道:这个班的宗旨是大价钱短时间快速提高!~
没人强求小新一定要说准考试题目,用不着提醒大家这个是不是小新出的.
只不过所谓的&quot;球&quot;是小新&quot;引以为豪&quot;的东西,是他上课的&quot;一大卖点&quot;,也是广大学员冲刺关头的重要依据~楼上不会否认这点吧?!
本月两次和他预测的球有很大偏离,我想楼上几位发帖也不是要责怪他,只是想问问为什么,难道不可以么?
你怎么不从要考试的同学焦虑的心态出发来为同学们想想??
如果小新说:&quot;这次球的问题应该是澳洲那边换了思路..希望大家本月全面准备...&quot;之类的,只要给个说法,那大家也不会怪他~~
呵呵~~
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To begin with, 个人对找谁学,怎么学,学习目的不一样,每个人有每个人的理解。
On second thoughts, 个人认为,并不是他说这个球,就一定这个球,其他球也要看要准备也要看。save it for the rainy day.
Finally, 各个球之间有通性,就看个人怎么用。
To conclude, 焦急心情理解,但依赖这个球提升空间有限。





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#91楼2008-12-16 13:35 | 121314
As is displayed in the graphs, the percentages of electronic games including age of players, gender of players and best selling electronic games in South Korea in 2003.

In terms of the first graph, 18~35 year old covered a comparatively majority of age of players, with 42%. 35% of age players should be shared by less than 18year old. The remaining 23% is due to more than 35 year old.

As to the second graph, female took up a maximum part, with 72%. The rest of 28% is attributed to male.

Concerning to the third of graph, Action made up comparatively a majority of best selling electronic games, with 42%. On the other hand, role play and education occupied a small share, with 14% altogether. 6% of the best selling electronic games should be share by others. The remaining percentages are in moderation with 21% and 17% respectively.

What is worth mentioning. Male in 18~35year old like play action type of electronic games in South Korea in 2003
在练小作文ing帮忙批批作文一向是我弱项- -
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#92楼2008-12-16 17:54 | 大大
老师,我今年暑假时上过您的强化写作班,我想问一些关于雅思考试的问题,找不到合适的地方问,所以就进来了,呵呵,我准备寒假期间考一次,我是苏州的,苏州考点2009年2月7号有一场,南京2月12号有一场,考虑到时间问题,我觉得7号的早了点,我还没这个信心,也许12号的更好。可考点的问题上,去南京又有点大费周章,而且据说南京也不太容易考(就像在北京上海考一样)。所以在这想请教您一下,我应该选择在哪考?如果在取巧方面能占点优势,我想就好了。这几天我就像定下来这事儿,麻烦老师给点意见~谢谢了~
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#93楼[楼主]2008-12-16 22:45 | 新东方小新
现在我再说说12/13考的题目,其实这道题目讲要不要扩招的题目,这道题首先最好不要扩招,写的会多一点。

首先政府应当提高学校质量(大学和研究生),否则只会让学生接受更差的教育——粥多僧少

其次政府还要增加就业岗位,疏通就业渠道,联系企业实习,否则就会造成labor redundancy,造成高失业率。

最后政府还可以鼓励出国留学(总算联系到1号球了),那么也可以在国外进修,缓解国内教育的压力,培养海归精英。

综上所述,现在的题目很鬼,表面上是一个大主题,其实问题没有那么简单。但是有一点是一定的:就是具备混搭的意识是永远不会错的。
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#94楼2008-12-19 11:59 | Allen
老师,对于13号的题目我是优缺点都写的,自己是保持中立观点的:优点主要是集中在扩招增加人才,对社会进程有强大的促进作用,还有就是knowledge的好处,用上了您的笔记内容了。然后还写了扩招的缺点,主要写了加剧失业率还有labor redundancy的问题,不知道这样的内容结构行不行,时间紧很怕写离题了,希望您看看给个答复,谢谢
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#95楼2008-12-19 18:52 | Y172的学生
明天就12月20日了,祝我成功吧~!同一天大家一起努力,08年最后一次大干一场!
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#96楼2008-12-30 15:40 | Eric94973
小新老师~我在国内上过你的课~如今在加拿大~1月10日要考试了~正在复习你的笔记~你有什么建议没?是几号球啊?谢谢!

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上海新东方 英国威尔士大学MBA,美国亚利桑那大学TESOL培训。新东方集团优秀教师,上海新东方特别贡献奖获得者,雅思写作教研组组长,中高级口译翻译组组长。中高级口译、翻译教学专家。

首创应试翻译“字母理论”
担任多家知名企业特聘同传。
从2000年开始讲授雅思课程和口译课程,至今已教授学生近50万人,讲座受众超过100万人,是新东方最受学生喜爱的讲师之一。

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读书。。。。。。 (EA)
果然...把女人当男人用..把男人当牲口用 (GG)
老师: 您好!我8.1号上完雅思培训班,想在重庆参加考试。我6.13那场只考了5.5分,这次想冲6.5,请问是选8.8号还是8.29号? (lxy)
嘿嘿嘿 (Bracha)
好的,拿硬盘来了 (新东方小新)
小新老师,我想8月在北京考,报哪天的比较好啊? (qy)
老师你好: 我是番隅路y202班的学生,今天你给我的G类写信的视频,回家后我发现我只拷了一半。 在7月19日星期天还有你的课,麻烦你能不能让我再补全。 ... (解文清)
  在青春萌动的背后,令人闻之丧胆的伏地魔及食死徒再度回来肆虐,并同时向麻瓜世界和魔法世界伸出魔爪,霍格沃兹魔法学校不再是安全的避风港。 (www.yxmxd.com.cn)
写得好!有空也来踩我的博!http://blog.sina.com.cn/laixin000123... (bet365)
写得好。 (bet365)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- 作家Larry: 老师,你好 我马上要去上海培训高口了。我一直有个问题想问你。 ... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- Ada: 谢谢小新老师,我要努力去了~ 另外问下,上次去听你的剑7首发,你说到会把ppt... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- hlsissi: 老师呀 雅思必备&#183;200句在博客的什么位置呀 找了老... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- EA: 辛苦了~又是一阵忙碌,注意身体~ ------------------------... (新东方小新)
收到. (PJ.Cherry)
Cool! (cocol)
老师,你好 我马上要去上海培训高口了。我一直有个问题想问你。 我明年要工作了,我是非英语专业的大专生,我很喜欢英语,想做口译工作。如果我能拿到高口证书,去应聘翻译人家会考虑吗?谢谢 ... (作家Larry)
I wonder if Mr Zhang is gay.Or Mr Zhang was mistakenly to be gay? (ielts)
谢谢小新老师,我要努力去了~ 另外问下,上次去听你的剑7首发,你说到会把ppt share,貌似在你的部落阁上还没有看到-_-? (Ada)
老师呀 雅思必备·200句在博客的什么位置呀 找了老半天 没有看到啊 谢谢呢:))) (hlsissi)
小新老师,听从你的建议我选择了今年5。30的IELTS考试,但口试和作文都低于六分,我考试前前一个月天天和同学练习,作文考好感觉是最好的,但结果不怎么样,我想再考一次,但害怕失败,最近常反复犹豫,犹豫... (糖果瘦瘦)
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晚安!英国这边现在晚上8点 (肉圆)
YPZ08 雅思争7精品住宿班 2009-7-12 至2009-7-27 每天上课 中侨学院1教 您上吗? (Edgar)
辛苦了~又是一阵忙碌,注意身体~ (EA)
今天上来偶然间发现了这熟悉的文字,有一些的震惊......小新居然未曾删除这时隔多年的帖,这对我来说真是一个偌大的惊喜! 暑假班又来到了,又该到了喝“大补汤”的时候了吧,别太辛苦,多保重身体! 很多的... (爱上奇迹)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- vivian_peng: 小新,我上的是Y202,这周日是你的两节写作课,可是我现在临时有... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- 焰祭天堂: 小新,我上半年过了高口的笔试,下半年考口试,暑假需要做些什么呢?然后下半年想考... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- meadow: 小新,您好。我开学念大3,准备大四申请外国研究生.我想考9月份的雅思,是不... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- 晶晶: 小新,前段时间上了你的课,报了8月29号的雅思考试。我今年已经毕业了,打算先工作一... (新东方小新)
--引用-------------------------------------------------- CF: 老师,作文到底可不可以 写一行 空一行 呢? ------------------... (新东方小新)
小新,我上半年过了高口的笔试,下半年考口试,暑假需要做些什么呢?然后下半年想考人事部或教育部的翻译证书,小新觉得我可以尝试哪一级呢? (焰祭天堂)
小新真辛苦,以后早点睡,睡晚啦会头痛的 不过成年人总有忙不完的事 咕~~(╯﹏╰)b,我不想长大 最近睡得太晚,头痛的厉害 (成长)
小新,您好。我开学念大3,准备大四申请外国研究生.我想考9月份的雅思,是不是早了? (meadow)
小新,我上的是Y202,这周日是你的两节写作课,可是我现在临时有事,人不在上海,明天等我回到上海,也已经下午三点了。这两节课能怎么补吗?还是就这样要漏两节课了?我感觉雅思还是挺难的,全听了,都不容易考... (vivian_peng)
老师: 我是一名高中生,想报秋季的中级口译强化班 可是不知道自己的水平到底够不够 很怕自己词汇量不够之类的 毕竟一个班要1600,不想浪费钱,想好好地把中口考出来 不知道你有什么建议,我的水... (Jessie.Wong)
小新 你好 谢谢你的回复 我会加油的 请教下 八月的8.13.22.29日的考试 报哪次比较好 (为理想而奋斗)
小新,前段时间上了你的课,报了8月29号的雅思考试。我今年已经毕业了,打算先工作一年,因为本科学校不是很好,所以先在中国建设银行浙江省分行编外工作一年。希望下年出去读研,我的本科平均分只有79.2,大... (晶晶)
老师,作文到底可不可以 写一行 空一行 呢? (CF)
今早回上海 (新东方小新)

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